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Bro, It dope! Just your uplode schedule sucks![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
the first chapter was good it overthrew my jjk world view and common sense, "sukuna can cut through gojo's infinity but can't cut through mc's steel body" are you serious author, because that is not how sukuna's attack works so 1 star from me...
Very nice blend of powers from LotM and the world of JJK, I like how he is incredibly powerful, but not yet close to the peak of power. Gives us plenty of room to see his growth not just in power, but in character. The plot has been interesting exploring not just the main cast, but some interesting side characters. Also his introspection regarding his powers has been fun to read. There are some points here and there that are a bit long winded and weird, but overall I have thoroughly enjoyed this story so far and hope to see it keep being updated for a long time.
Horrible 1st chapter, it's like reading Chuuni imagining himself as a JJK character. I know my rating is harsh but if you turn off the audience from the get go, then they'll be biased against the story even if they read further.
Really hard to find Lord of Mysteries fanfic. .......................................................................................................................................................... :)
Es bueno el fanfic. El único problema es que el prota vive en el pasado, ya aburre. . .
till now ch 14 story written very well with great grammer . Story is interesting . Character is very much 3 dimensional . Overall it is good and worth the time
1. You do not talk about Fight Club…… 2. You do NOT talk about Fight Club. 3. If someone says "Stop" or goes limp, taps out, the fight is over. 4. Only two guys to a fight. 5. One fight at a time. 6. No shirts, no shoes, no mercy. 7. Fights will go on as long as they have to, even if it’s over a month. 8. If this is your first time at Fight Club, you have to fight.
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So far this is the best jjk fic I've ever read , cant wait for future updates ,
very nice novel perfectly combined beyonder power and cursed technique through system now only the extraordinary items and uniqueness remains
this is so good, wth, the author clearly knows a lot of LOM and managed to combine that in JJK through the MC. my first 5 star rating in a while, also threw 3 power stones at this bookalso please no Harem, it'll ruin the MC's character since, spoiler alert, you gave him the Red Priest Path.
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I like this fanfic, but sometimes writing just doesn't make sense, so i has to skip monologues and fights. i hope you reflect on it, especially the mc vs skuna in first chapter you will need far more than steel to tank his techniques. wich you best of luck.
Bro, It dope! Just your uplode schedule sucks![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
the first chapter was good it overthrew my jjk world view and common sense, "sukuna can cut through gojo's infinity but can't cut through mc's steel body" are you serious author, because that is not how sukuna's attack works so 1 star from me...
Very nice blend of powers from LotM and the world of JJK, I like how he is incredibly powerful, but not yet close to the peak of power. Gives us plenty of room to see his growth not just in power, but in character. The plot has been interesting exploring not just the main cast, but some interesting side characters. Also his introspection regarding his powers has been fun to read. There are some points here and there that are a bit long winded and weird, but overall I have thoroughly enjoyed this story so far and hope to see it keep being updated for a long time.
Horrible 1st chapter, it's like reading Chuuni imagining himself as a JJK character. I know my rating is harsh but if you turn off the audience from the get go, then they'll be biased against the story even if they read further.
Really hard to find Lord of Mysteries fanfic. .......................................................................................................................................................... :)
Es bueno el fanfic. El único problema es que el prota vive en el pasado, ya aburre. . .
till now ch 14 story written very well with great grammer . Story is interesting . Character is very much 3 dimensional . Overall it is good and worth the time
1. You do not talk about Fight Club…… 2. You do NOT talk about Fight Club. 3. If someone says "Stop" or goes limp, taps out, the fight is over. 4. Only two guys to a fight. 5. One fight at a time. 6. No shirts, no shoes, no mercy. 7. Fights will go on as long as they have to, even if it’s over a month. 8. If this is your first time at Fight Club, you have to fight.
▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷▷
Tiết lộ Spoiler So far this is the best jjk fic I've ever read , cant wait for future updates ,
very nice novel perfectly combined beyonder power and cursed technique through system now only the extraordinary items and uniqueness remains
this is so good, wth, the author clearly knows a lot of LOM and managed to combine that in JJK through the MC. my first 5 star rating in a while, also threw 3 power stones at this bookalso please no Harem, it'll ruin the MC's character since, spoiler alert, you gave him the Red Priest Path.
(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
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I like this fanfic, but sometimes writing just doesn't make sense, so i has to skip monologues and fights. i hope you reflect on it, especially the mc vs skuna in first chapter you will need far more than steel to tank his techniques. wich you best of luck.