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Although it starts off a little slow (I have to admit I had a bit of difficulty getting into it because of the rather cliche and unrealistic way in which the personality of the main character is framed), once the story gets going it is really phenomenal. The characters have a remarkable depth and the action scenes are gripping and full of suspense. The contrast between the two main characters keeps the dialogue engaging and I love that there is a cute little puppy included. I've read the first half of what has been published, and my favourite parts so far have been chapters 4, 8 and 9. I think the narrative technique of switching back and forth between when Holden was a boy, and the current storyline, keeps the storytelling dynamic and fresh while moving the action along at a pace which is guaranteed to make you want more. I would recommend this story to any anime enjoyers out there who harbour a bit of morbid curiosity, because it's a really intriguing blend of styles from both anime and horror which manages to make you really feel for the characters. I especially enjoyed the fight scene with the doll-cryptid, and the way in which Holden defeated it was well thought out and intellectually satisfying. Keep up the great work Frozen!
Elaborate, fantastic story. Quality all through-out. Faster updates if anything! The ability to transform fear into words by the author, FrozenEntropy is insane.
Great story although needs to fix the wall of text looks like some type of attack on my eyes almost worked too. Other than that book is great and you should push through the wall of text you will see a great unique story. Author also needs to focus less on descriptions.
Forks, this is such a great story, it made me cry when the cryptids tried to beat up innocent women, that was the peak of all fiction. I have realized how based this story is after that event. Please make them beat up more women.
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
Wow! I'm completely stunned by quality! its insane!! The attention to details is just awesome, the way you explain each and every detail, from the clothing of a character to their mental beliefs, I just absolutely loved that, especially the details in the character of Holden, the way you discribed everything about him, his insecurities, his weaknesses, his strong points, everything was amazing, I also loved the way how you handled the dialogues, each dialogue had a deep relation to their respective character, exploring the personality of the character as well as their mannerisms, the masterful writing really do deserve praise!!Overall the Series have crazy potential, the concept and your dedication to it, will definitely show great results, you better keep the chapters's coming!! Im eagerly waiting for more!Read it folks! Highly recommended, you are missing out if you ignore it!!
Bit of a shameless self review, but I really am proud and confident to get this started. This is my first time doing something like this, attempting to write a full length novel. I have experience with short stories, but never such a large scale project. I hope you all with have patience with me and give helpful advice as this series continues. Above all else, I hope you find this to be a thoroughly enjoyable reading experience through and through. Thank you!
Although it starts off a little slow (I have to admit I had a bit of difficulty getting into it because of the rather cliche and unrealistic way in which the personality of the main character is framed), once the story gets going it is really phenomenal. The characters have a remarkable depth and the action scenes are gripping and full of suspense. The contrast between the two main characters keeps the dialogue engaging and I love that there is a cute little puppy included. I've read the first half of what has been published, and my favourite parts so far have been chapters 4, 8 and 9. I think the narrative technique of switching back and forth between when Holden was a boy, and the current storyline, keeps the storytelling dynamic and fresh while moving the action along at a pace which is guaranteed to make you want more. I would recommend this story to any anime enjoyers out there who harbour a bit of morbid curiosity, because it's a really intriguing blend of styles from both anime and horror which manages to make you really feel for the characters. I especially enjoyed the fight scene with the doll-cryptid, and the way in which Holden defeated it was well thought out and intellectually satisfying. Keep up the great work Frozen!
Elaborate, fantastic story. Quality all through-out. Faster updates if anything! The ability to transform fear into words by the author, FrozenEntropy is insane.
Great story although needs to fix the wall of text looks like some type of attack on my eyes almost worked too. Other than that book is great and you should push through the wall of text you will see a great unique story. Author also needs to focus less on descriptions.
Forks, this is such a great story, it made me cry when the cryptids tried to beat up innocent women, that was the peak of all fiction. I have realized how based this story is after that event. Please make them beat up more women.
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
Wow! I'm completely stunned by quality! its insane!! The attention to details is just awesome, the way you explain each and every detail, from the clothing of a character to their mental beliefs, I just absolutely loved that, especially the details in the character of Holden, the way you discribed everything about him, his insecurities, his weaknesses, his strong points, everything was amazing, I also loved the way how you handled the dialogues, each dialogue had a deep relation to their respective character, exploring the personality of the character as well as their mannerisms, the masterful writing really do deserve praise!!Overall the Series have crazy potential, the concept and your dedication to it, will definitely show great results, you better keep the chapters's coming!! Im eagerly waiting for more!Read it folks! Highly recommended, you are missing out if you ignore it!!
Bit of a shameless self review, but I really am proud and confident to get this started. This is my first time doing something like this, attempting to write a full length novel. I have experience with short stories, but never such a large scale project. I hope you all with have patience with me and give helpful advice as this series continues. Above all else, I hope you find this to be a thoroughly enjoyable reading experience through and through. Thank you!