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Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?
Well written, with a decent plot. The author is making the most with barely any supernatural devices, just enough plot armor to keep the story moving as of chapter 30.
One review says it's Chinese garbage, but to my mind if it was the author managed to remove everything Chinese related and made a good fic. Read it at your own discretion and don't go by the reviews of others.
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Buenos .................... ................................................................................................................................................dias🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😂🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😂🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😂🤣
Above average if you can persists some gram errors &or interactions.Timeline/Year isn't clear. My assumptions is at the early stages of House of Dragon timeline (King Jaehaerys).MC is a transmigrated to Androw Farman with 3 perks/blessing (Ability to tame dragons, Cold weapons proficiency/comprehension & Quasi immortality) the perks aren't informative enough wether he can tame morethan 1 dragons, long life span or hi speed regeneration &or melee or ranged weapons as well.MC is aware enough of the incoming disasters/dangers which is good. MC is highly functional as he trains both his physical & mental capabilities. MCs persona is also an additional boon as he is chaotic-neutral/good which is apt for HOTD/ASOIAF World.There several grammar lapses which can be improved on via proof reading, use of grammar corrective apps/progs &or English dictionary.The story & MC progression are average to fast phased which is quite good to avoid info dumps and have us readers more entertained.Upload of chapter is very slow phased as it seems author-san isn't used to it yet as well as word counta are too low.The world of Planetos (HOTD/ASOIAF) isn't develop or explored yet as we are still in the early stages.
me a gustado bastante la historia la verdad espero con ansias mas capitulos y no lo abandones encerio es interesante gracias por escribir .................
Amazing story for the moment please continue with more update. This image is the lord of the ring and the dragon is ancalagon. I hope this image can serve as a reference.
while it seems interesting to see what happens next. thank you to the author for your efforts, and good luck on your creative path...................
Bellissima fanfic continua così diventa l'imperatore di tutto il mondo e mostra a questi Targaryen il vero drago chi è ✌️✔️...continua così ti supporto quando posso
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So far the story has been great. The MC tries to avoid too much contact with those around him while getting into shape and learning some useful skills and knowledge in Dragonstone while keeping a relatively low profile. While the original character had a bad reputation, MC doesn’t let that bother him as he focuses on improving himself which is very much appriciated since those arrogant transmigrators or reincarnators who see themsleves as ”special” and above all others are annoying. Writing wuality is good and the story is so far well paced and updates are, atleast for now, coming daily so thats a plus.
good, Very good, I didn't even know this character existed in the original-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?
Well written, with a decent plot. The author is making the most with barely any supernatural devices, just enough plot armor to keep the story moving as of chapter 30.
One review says it's Chinese garbage, but to my mind if it was the author managed to remove everything Chinese related and made a good fic. Read it at your own discretion and don't go by the reviews of others.
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Buenos .................... ................................................................................................................................................dias🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😂🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😂🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😂🤣
Above average if you can persists some gram errors &or interactions.Timeline/Year isn't clear. My assumptions is at the early stages of House of Dragon timeline (King Jaehaerys).MC is a transmigrated to Androw Farman with 3 perks/blessing (Ability to tame dragons, Cold weapons proficiency/comprehension & Quasi immortality) the perks aren't informative enough wether he can tame morethan 1 dragons, long life span or hi speed regeneration &or melee or ranged weapons as well.MC is aware enough of the incoming disasters/dangers which is good. MC is highly functional as he trains both his physical & mental capabilities. MCs persona is also an additional boon as he is chaotic-neutral/good which is apt for HOTD/ASOIAF World.There several grammar lapses which can be improved on via proof reading, use of grammar corrective apps/progs &or English dictionary.The story & MC progression are average to fast phased which is quite good to avoid info dumps and have us readers more entertained.Upload of chapter is very slow phased as it seems author-san isn't used to it yet as well as word counta are too low.The world of Planetos (HOTD/ASOIAF) isn't develop or explored yet as we are still in the early stages.
me a gustado bastante la historia la verdad espero con ansias mas capitulos y no lo abandones encerio es interesante gracias por escribir .................
Amazing story for the moment please continue with more update. This image is the lord of the ring and the dragon is ancalagon. I hope this image can serve as a reference.
while it seems interesting to see what happens next. thank you to the author for your efforts, and good luck on your creative path...................
Bellissima fanfic continua così diventa l'imperatore di tutto il mondo e mostra a questi Targaryen il vero drago chi è ✌️✔️...continua così ti supporto quando posso
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So far the story has been great. The MC tries to avoid too much contact with those around him while getting into shape and learning some useful skills and knowledge in Dragonstone while keeping a relatively low profile. While the original character had a bad reputation, MC doesn’t let that bother him as he focuses on improving himself which is very much appriciated since those arrogant transmigrators or reincarnators who see themsleves as ”special” and above all others are annoying. Writing wuality is good and the story is so far well paced and updates are, atleast for now, coming daily so thats a plus.
good, Very good, I didn't even know this character existed in the original-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Updates are sporadic, plot and story develops so slow that it lost me