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This story is great! Don’t stop yourself from reading it because of the Chinese name in the title, you’d be missing out on a gem of a story. Treat it as if the MC as having Daoism powers, the rest of the world acts like it would act and reacts to the MC as they normally would. It’s a very pleasant read and I wish for more frequent chapters!!
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This is a good traduction , without strange name or word ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
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This is very boring, the protagonist is only a second and thinks he looks cool being one, the idea had potential but the MC lacks character and charisma, he does some things out of canon but they are insignificant.
this isn't a ff the characters are not themselves and everyone is talking like it's the 70s makes no sense to me, managed to hold until chapter 10 than dropped
The protagonist is useless, he just follows the canon like a child, the world of One Piecw is supposed to be one of adventure and freedom, the protagonist is the furthest thing from that.
You already know a Chinese story, so expect a lot of Chinese idioms, the story is a copy and paste from the original. , only with an extra who talks from time to time
hi it's a good story with an excellent translation, but will you continue the sequel since it was abandoned by its creator?????????????????????????????????????????????
The story is great. The concept of cultivation blends perfectly in the story. But I hope the translator update daily because it is good.
I love this [img=update][img=recommend] just a question is this an original or translation, anyways looking forward for more chapters
Muito legal, 100% divertido, um monge na tripulação de Luuffy muito bom, porfavor não deixe de atualiza sempre.[img=moedas][img=moedas][img=moedas][img=moedas][img=moedas][img=moedas][img=moedas][img=atualização][img=recomendado][img=recomendado][img=recomendado][img=recomendado]
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It was fun to read it, can't wait for the next chapters. and the translation is done very well. ........................................................
Качество написания отличное, стабильность обновлений отличная, развитие сюжета идеальное, дизайн персонажей потрясающий, История мира абсолютно превосходна
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I don't get it. How in the Frick can you have 72 chapters and no one reads them, some people just don't have taste. You're cool and awesome and I also did my own translation work on another fic, keep on the good work.
The way you translate the story by using refined languaje is truly marvelous. The idea itself is quite innovating and exhilarating, I can barely fathom what will you do with the story from this point onwards. You have my high regards and best wishes, author-sama.
This story is great! Don’t stop yourself from reading it because of the Chinese name in the title, you’d be missing out on a gem of a story. Treat it as if the MC as having Daoism powers, the rest of the world acts like it would act and reacts to the MC as they normally would. It’s a very pleasant read and I wish for more frequent chapters!!
Luar biasa luar biasa luar biasa luar biasa luar biasa luar biasa luar biasa luar biasa luar biasa luar biasa luar biasa luar biasa luar biasa min lanjut upload nya semangat ya min
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Min kalau bisa di tambahin sama tulang pedang tertinggi min di cerita Cultivasi manhua nya min atau double eyes min semangat ya min buat cerita nya saya sebagai pembaca akan menunggu min untuk update tan terbaru nya semangat
This is a good traduction , without strange name or word ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
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This is very boring, the protagonist is only a second and thinks he looks cool being one, the idea had potential but the MC lacks character and charisma, he does some things out of canon but they are insignificant.
this isn't a ff the characters are not themselves and everyone is talking like it's the 70s makes no sense to me, managed to hold until chapter 10 than dropped
The protagonist is useless, he just follows the canon like a child, the world of One Piecw is supposed to be one of adventure and freedom, the protagonist is the furthest thing from that.
You already know a Chinese story, so expect a lot of Chinese idioms, the story is a copy and paste from the original. , only with an extra who talks from time to time
hi it's a good story with an excellent translation, but will you continue the sequel since it was abandoned by its creator?????????????????????????????????????????????
The story is great. The concept of cultivation blends perfectly in the story. But I hope the translator update daily because it is good.
I love this [img=update][img=recommend] just a question is this an original or translation, anyways looking forward for more chapters
Muito legal, 100% divertido, um monge na tripulação de Luuffy muito bom, porfavor não deixe de atualiza sempre.[img=moedas][img=moedas][img=moedas][img=moedas][img=moedas][img=moedas][img=moedas][img=atualização][img=recomendado][img=recomendado][img=recomendado][img=recomendado]
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It was fun to read it, can't wait for the next chapters. and the translation is done very well. ........................................................
Качество написания отличное, стабильность обновлений отличная, развитие сюжета идеальное, дизайн персонажей потрясающий, История мира абсолютно превосходна
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I don't get it. How in the Frick can you have 72 chapters and no one reads them, some people just don't have taste. You're cool and awesome and I also did my own translation work on another fic, keep on the good work.
The way you translate the story by using refined languaje is truly marvelous. The idea itself is quite innovating and exhilarating, I can barely fathom what will you do with the story from this point onwards. You have my high regards and best wishes, author-sama.
If you’re second guessing about reading this, don’t. Just read it.