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Pretty good overall. It’s a bit hard to read at times due to the influence of AI, and there are a lot of erros in gender-specific pronouns, but the story itself is great.
el final a mi parecer queda para que hubiese dado para mas en el mismo universo, a pesar de que se fuesen después a el universo de one piece, para mi se sintió como un cierre un poco apresurado del como emplearon un salto de tiempo para ya abordar el universo de one piece pero supongo que como la obra original es china ahí solo se dejo, pero esa es mi apreciación,
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I like how that writer finish this novel in 244 chapters but I wish if he had continued the translation this novel approximately 800 chapter Or at least he finish the Arc of One Piece
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Even though the story isn’t properly finished and the grammar is kinda bad overall one of the best Naruto stories I’ve read. Really enjoyed reading it kinda sad author stopped translating tho.
Loved the story and although I would have liked to see the confrontation between Natsuo and the Otsutsuki clan I can understand why you didn’t end up going there. Can’t wait for your next story, keep up the good work.
Tiết lộ SpoilerIt had great potential and probably could've been a long story too. But i can actually see it's quite difficult to expand it. And by expand it, i mean the children itself could be made into so many chapters but it suffers from too much Chinese mc characteristics but I'd still rate it high because i didn't hate the premise or progression , as it was quite good.
It's a very developed book, and really establishes the capability of a system in Naruto. Real talk it's kinda wordy and they play around saying a lot of things directly but it's not a thinky type so its pretty good
I like this story, I skip the spicy scenes because I don't consider them important to the story
No me lo esperaba pero es bastante bueno este fanfic a pesar de que tiene un harem gigantesco en el proceso no se vuelve tedioso como la mayoría de este género, lo bueno es que no sigue el canon y tiene una gramática y traducción de calidad se nota el esfuerzo👌🏻 a pesar de ser China
the jokes are hilarious, and I do recommend you guys to read the novel. well, the only problem is the Mc treating girls like child making machine
Советую к прочтению ! Фанфик по Наруто ! Отличный! Да да ! чичичичичичичиичичичичичичичичичичиичичичичичичичиичичия я ч ч ч ч ч чичияияияияияияияияияияияияияиияияияияияияия яияияия. я я ыиыиытыт
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great ending on a high note. and you could still continue it from the original novel. would highly recommend
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A very enjoyable read, just turn off your brain and read it, definitely recommended when you are bored [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Pretty good overall. It’s a bit hard to read at times due to the influence of AI, and there are a lot of erros in gender-specific pronouns, but the story itself is great.
el final a mi parecer queda para que hubiese dado para mas en el mismo universo, a pesar de que se fuesen después a el universo de one piece, para mi se sintió como un cierre un poco apresurado del como emplearon un salto de tiempo para ya abordar el universo de one piece pero supongo que como la obra original es china ahí solo se dejo, pero esa es mi apreciación,
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I like how that writer finish this novel in 244 chapters but I wish if he had continued the translation this novel approximately 800 chapter Or at least he finish the Arc of One Piece
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Even though the story isn’t properly finished and the grammar is kinda bad overall one of the best Naruto stories I’ve read. Really enjoyed reading it kinda sad author stopped translating tho.
Loved the story and although I would have liked to see the confrontation between Natsuo and the Otsutsuki clan I can understand why you didn’t end up going there. Can’t wait for your next story, keep up the good work.
Tiết lộ SpoilerIt had great potential and probably could've been a long story too. But i can actually see it's quite difficult to expand it. And by expand it, i mean the children itself could be made into so many chapters but it suffers from too much Chinese mc characteristics but I'd still rate it high because i didn't hate the premise or progression , as it was quite good.
It's a very developed book, and really establishes the capability of a system in Naruto. Real talk it's kinda wordy and they play around saying a lot of things directly but it's not a thinky type so its pretty good
I like this story, I skip the spicy scenes because I don't consider them important to the story
No me lo esperaba pero es bastante bueno este fanfic a pesar de que tiene un harem gigantesco en el proceso no se vuelve tedioso como la mayoría de este género, lo bueno es que no sigue el canon y tiene una gramática y traducción de calidad se nota el esfuerzo👌🏻 a pesar de ser China
the jokes are hilarious, and I do recommend you guys to read the novel. well, the only problem is the Mc treating girls like child making machine
Советую к прочтению ! Фанфик по Наруто ! Отличный! Да да ! чичичичичичичиичичичичичичичичичичиичичичичичичичиичичия я ч ч ч ч ч чичияияияияияияияияияияияияияиияияияияияияия яияияия. я я ыиыиытыт
In the Sky for my eyes aaaaaaaa aaaaaaaa aaaaaaaa aaaaaaaa aaaaaaaa qaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
great ending on a high note. and you could still continue it from the original novel. would highly recommend
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