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Aiden, an 18 years old boy, living alone in this cruel and harsh world ends up meeting the legendary Truck-kun and die in his hands.
Meeting god, he gives him a new chance to live in the world of The Beginning After the End, a magical world filled with adventures and mysteries in the body of Meliodas the Dragon Sin of Wrath from the Seven Deadly Sins acquiring all of his powers and abilities.
Follow the story of our Mc in this new world where new people exist and original events happen, and watch how he is going to change the world by his intervention.
[NOTE] I do not own any of the characters or the plot in this book, only the original characters and events are mine.
[DISCLAIMER] THERE IS GOING TO BE +18 SCENES IN THIS BOOK SO PLEASE IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 YEARS OLD DO NOT READ THIS BOOK!
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this is the first fanfic of tbate I'll be reading so be grateful human your are the first hmmp!
If you had read the original novel then there is no need to read this. Just add MC and Elizabeth to the story as twins to the original novel MC and heroin. The story is same as original Beginning after the end with some extra chareters.
The modern day style of writing kinda throws off the immersion of the novel for me. Not bad but its also not good. Major problem im seeing is that author is using words like man in a modern way which should not be happening. Besides that its alright
The plot doesn't change much from the original story aside from a few OC's, but that's my cup of coffee.
No, I don't like Meliodas in the first place. Reading him in my favourite novel is outright no. But if only would you let me know if there is going to be a harem in the story, I may read it. Tell me, okay?
I like this novel, this novel has something different and i like it. I cant wait to see more chapter. Hope this novel not drop :) Can i get a Full Counter? SATE SATE SATE~~
Meliodas in TBATE presents a promising premise by bringing Meliodas, an iconic character, into the world of TBATE. However, despite the potential of this combination, the fanfic fails to fully leverage the opportunity to create a fresh and original narrative. One of the most evident issues is the author’s over-reliance on the original plot of TBATE. Instead of reimagining the world of TBATE with the inclusion of Meliodas, the story follows the events of the original novel almost to the letter, with few significant changes. This lack of originality and creativity makes the story feel like a simple "copy and paste" with the superficial addition of Meliodas and a few secondary characters. While the inclusion of Meliodas is theoretically interesting, it does not integrate organically into the TBATE plot. His presence often feels forced and does not add much to the story’s development. The secondary characters introduced also lack depth and seem to exist solely to justify Meliodas’ inclusion, without truly enriching the narrative. The lack of innovation is especially disappointing given the potential for a well-executed crossover. The interaction between Meliodas and the TBATE characters could have provided unique opportunities to explore new dynamics and conflicts, but these possibilities are inadequately explored. Instead, the author opts to replicate scenes and situations from the original material, making the story feel repetitive and predictable. Additionally, the writing itself has issues. Although the action scenes are occasionally exciting, the overall narrative suffers from grammatical and stylistic errors that distract and hinder immersion in the story. A more careful review and rigorous editing could significantly improve the quality of the text. In summary, Meliodas in TBATE falls short of expectations for an innovative and thrilling crossover. The lack of originality and over-reliance on the TBATE plot make the story feel derivative and uninspired. While die-hard fans of both universes might find some value in seeing their favorite characters interact, the story as a whole fails to offer a fresh and engaging narrative. A thorough revision and a more creative approach are recommended to truly do justice to the crossover premise.
Ain't no way this novel only has 5 star reviews, it doesn't deserve it, author probably deletes the negative reviews. The spelling of the author is absolutely trash, a Chinese Author can do better bro I'm sick of seeing "existence" or other spelling mistakes, besides that. The grammar ain't grammaring😭🙏
My first time reviewing but I have to say that this novel has done well to cure my Boredom and make my life just a little better.
I like the idea of this Fanfic but I remember reading it briefly. I have a question will he actually grow up or be stuck in his child form like the original Meliodas?
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Really good. I think it was a great idea for you to bring Elizabeth in. Also really looking forward to his future relationships. I was always sad about how princess Kathyln was treated in the original story. I hope this will be better.
EEEEY! I think you've gotten used to it by now, like always your shameless and lazy author review. Hope you enjoy the book!