/ Anime & Comics / Naruto: Flames of Causality
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War, conflict, death - the world of Naruto was not the sunshine and rainbows the anime had deceptively portrayed, as Izuna got to find out first hand. At least he was not born an orphan.
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, this work is fan-made fiction. Please support the official release.
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This reminds me of the scene where Naruto is talking to Uzumaki and he says that "It's you Naruto, you're the shippuden" that scene resonated with me.
There is not a lot of things to go over , what is your plan for end game villians like madara, zetsu , otsutsuki clan .since your MC will most probably be active participant in 2nd or 3rd war lets see how develop him and the story .
I like the start a lot. I just hope that Izuna doesn’t become a Young Master. :)
So far your start is good. I found that you moved the story along too quickly at times. I found the time skip in the first or second chapter too big. 5 years was a lot to jump over. I believe you could've started your Mc at 5 and you wouldn't have missed anything in his formative years. As of chapter 6 the progression of the Mc is decent. I will be watching this story progress intently.