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this was very interesting at first but i don't see any appeal on the oc character yuki joining, I also think thr romance is a little bit forced ,and why was the mc that fakin weak when he has all those cheats he can't even beat a fodder demon, overall I hope that you don't add OC in any of your future fan fiction
Очередное гавно каких много на сайте. главный герой Очередной тупой персонаж не умеющий ничего даже логический думать. вот например зачем он взял первым миром клинок? это очень сложный мир для новичка, да ещё он сам признался что тут персонажи на уровне города хотя он сам был обычным тупым человеком на земле. лучше уж выбрал бы мир на основе боевых искусств там хотя бы уровень сверхъестественного не настолько большой как этот мир.
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great novel but the update schedule is slow and there have been no update last 2 weeks.
Great story. Looking forward to the future of it. Thank you author. Keep up the great work. ......................................... .......................................... ........................................... .......................................... ..........................................
Synopsis In the vast expanse of the cosmos, an unassuming soul, Ace Walker, stumbles upon an extraordinary inheritance – a dimensionless library housing countless worlds. From futuristic galaxies to medieval realms, anime-inspired landscapes, and beyond, this library holds the keys to an infinite array of realities. His journey unfurls as he steps through the thresholds of these fictional worlds, each with its unique wonders and perils. With every tale he explores, the line between reality and fantasy blurs, and he finds himself on a quest to uncover his own origins. Delving deeper into the library's boundless collections, the very fabric of the multiverse becomes his playground. But can he discover the secret that lies beyond the veil, or will he succumb to its boundlessness like his predecessors? Or the author dies and ended the story.
Sorry friend, I stopped reading only at chapter 5 because I couldn't force it any more, I thought MC would go on an adventure and train on his own, instead of forcing you into an unfamiliar Hasira environment.There is no point , I thought MC would go on an adventure and train then meet them one by one, but instead you were put in Hasira while there MC wouldn't be taught anything other than being an errand boy for M Kill the devil then the MC will be tested and then other things, but is the MC obliged to do that? , What's the purpose of MC coming to this 2D world, isn't it to practice adventuring and other things? So you can't kill a demon without entering the hashira as if the hashira is important and special Moreover, I see indications of forced romance from yuki oc nonsense, It's better to just send MC to the world of Lookism, where MC can fight and get a perfect body too, rather than sending you to the DS world but it's like you're stuffing hard bread down MC's throat, really aw The beginning of chapters 1-3 is what makes this special and then it becomes ordinary
I was told by the author that it is mandatory for 5 stars so here I am trying to make a summary about how good the fiction is and why it deserves a dive star rating in every category and I sure do hope that the amount of words I am typing at this moment are enough. 🤣
That's is good bro the something this I cant get is hero age when he " playing Sony with yuke as areb said I haven't know how much hero age 🌚
It was interesting at first but then their was Yuki joining and the forced romance that suddenly came early on. I was kimda expecting something different but it felt that it quickly divulved into the usual oc fanfic.
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THERE MUST be more chapters! or i will explode in a pile of bored confetti, please don't make me self-detonate into a pile of bored confetti.
The literary aspect is nice also the story holds potential. Let's see how it would proceed, anticipating a bit more of character details and pov's but overall the reading experience is fun.
Better than webnovel average trash , but the characters sometimes not behave their personality
nice novel, but just need some corrections for the narrative quality to not let it feel like a summay
Good for a beginner, just need some more characters interactions , make them feel more real
You have done a good job writing this fanfic. It's good for a beginner. Keep it up! You should make small details like: showing multiple povs, locations, and small movement he make. It is this thing that make the reading enjoyable. Also, make light comedy. It will keep the readers from being bored. Also, make the the obvious break. What I mean is: suppose you are writing a fight that the mc is about to win but at the last moment instead of finishing the fight add a third party's pov. Just a reminder, don't do it often it will annoy everyone.
It's good, tho I am not in the mood to read a harem fanfiction, I will try it after watching my 100 girlfriends.
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Posting this to help out a friend.... Pretty good introduction and excellent grammar (the latter part is pretty rare on WN). The story is still in its infancy, although the introduction of the MC and the library was flawlessly executed, as of chapter 3. Hope to see this continues and gain good popularity.
Quite good for a new one , I will readi it when more chapter are available. The starts is very promising
seems quite promising at a glance, the cosmic aspect seems, interesting to me, will have to look for updates, hope the author doesn't drop it
Hey Guys , It is the compulsory 5 star review from Author . You guys should have already adapted to authors narcissism so mine nothing much. Its my first Fanfic , so don't be too much critical . Take it as a fun ride to enjoy
this was very interesting at first but i don't see any appeal on the oc character yuki joining, I also think thr romance is a little bit forced ,and why was the mc that fakin weak when he has all those cheats he can't even beat a fodder demon, overall I hope that you don't add OC in any of your future fan fiction
Очередное гавно каких много на сайте. главный герой Очередной тупой персонаж не умеющий ничего даже логический думать. вот например зачем он взял первым миром клинок? это очень сложный мир для новичка, да ещё он сам признался что тут персонажи на уровне города хотя он сам был обычным тупым человеком на земле. лучше уж выбрал бы мир на основе боевых искусств там хотя бы уровень сверхъестественного не настолько большой как этот мир.
Tiết lộ Spoiler great novel but the update schedule is slow and there have been no update last 2 weeks.
Great story. Looking forward to the future of it. Thank you author. Keep up the great work. ......................................... .......................................... ........................................... .......................................... ..........................................
Synopsis In the vast expanse of the cosmos, an unassuming soul, Ace Walker, stumbles upon an extraordinary inheritance – a dimensionless library housing countless worlds. From futuristic galaxies to medieval realms, anime-inspired landscapes, and beyond, this library holds the keys to an infinite array of realities. His journey unfurls as he steps through the thresholds of these fictional worlds, each with its unique wonders and perils. With every tale he explores, the line between reality and fantasy blurs, and he finds himself on a quest to uncover his own origins. Delving deeper into the library's boundless collections, the very fabric of the multiverse becomes his playground. But can he discover the secret that lies beyond the veil, or will he succumb to its boundlessness like his predecessors? Or the author dies and ended the story.
Sorry friend, I stopped reading only at chapter 5 because I couldn't force it any more, I thought MC would go on an adventure and train on his own, instead of forcing you into an unfamiliar Hasira environment.There is no point , I thought MC would go on an adventure and train then meet them one by one, but instead you were put in Hasira while there MC wouldn't be taught anything other than being an errand boy for M Kill the devil then the MC will be tested and then other things, but is the MC obliged to do that? , What's the purpose of MC coming to this 2D world, isn't it to practice adventuring and other things? So you can't kill a demon without entering the hashira as if the hashira is important and special Moreover, I see indications of forced romance from yuki oc nonsense, It's better to just send MC to the world of Lookism, where MC can fight and get a perfect body too, rather than sending you to the DS world but it's like you're stuffing hard bread down MC's throat, really aw The beginning of chapters 1-3 is what makes this special and then it becomes ordinary
I was told by the author that it is mandatory for 5 stars so here I am trying to make a summary about how good the fiction is and why it deserves a dive star rating in every category and I sure do hope that the amount of words I am typing at this moment are enough. 🤣
That's is good bro the something this I cant get is hero age when he " playing Sony with yuke as areb said I haven't know how much hero age 🌚
It was interesting at first but then their was Yuki joining and the forced romance that suddenly came early on. I was kimda expecting something different but it felt that it quickly divulved into the usual oc fanfic.
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THERE MUST be more chapters! or i will explode in a pile of bored confetti, please don't make me self-detonate into a pile of bored confetti.
The literary aspect is nice also the story holds potential. Let's see how it would proceed, anticipating a bit more of character details and pov's but overall the reading experience is fun.
Better than webnovel average trash , but the characters sometimes not behave their personality
nice novel, but just need some corrections for the narrative quality to not let it feel like a summay
Good for a beginner, just need some more characters interactions , make them feel more real
You have done a good job writing this fanfic. It's good for a beginner. Keep it up! You should make small details like: showing multiple povs, locations, and small movement he make. It is this thing that make the reading enjoyable. Also, make light comedy. It will keep the readers from being bored. Also, make the the obvious break. What I mean is: suppose you are writing a fight that the mc is about to win but at the last moment instead of finishing the fight add a third party's pov. Just a reminder, don't do it often it will annoy everyone.
It's good, tho I am not in the mood to read a harem fanfiction, I will try it after watching my 100 girlfriends.
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Posting this to help out a friend.... Pretty good introduction and excellent grammar (the latter part is pretty rare on WN). The story is still in its infancy, although the introduction of the MC and the library was flawlessly executed, as of chapter 3. Hope to see this continues and gain good popularity.
Quite good for a new one , I will readi it when more chapter are available. The starts is very promising
seems quite promising at a glance, the cosmic aspect seems, interesting to me, will have to look for updates, hope the author doesn't drop it
Hey Guys , It is the compulsory 5 star review from Author . You guys should have already adapted to authors narcissism so mine nothing much. Its my first Fanfic , so don't be too much critical . Take it as a fun ride to enjoy