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Es la mejor historia que he leído en muchísimo tiempo, estoy ansioso de que actualices para seguir leyendo y me encantaría que sepas que te apoyamos todos tus fans eres un crack
story is good but the writing is super duper bad to the point that i need to create my own sentence in my head just to understand your writing
Another one piece story that ruins one piece by letting the MC be immune to the sea with a devil fruit. Don’t waste your time
for those who like the ff it's actually a complete Chinese ff unavailable at "wuxiap" and with a strangely good translation I really forgot the title of it
Brother, please add one more, in my opinion, except for the best One Piece novels, thank you for your efforts
This is a good ff I enjoyed it until chapter 86 where there is yuri I'm not a fan only read this because author said no yuri. So gonna have to drop was good tho
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Solo digo que hermosa obra de trabajo si puedes incluir a Yamato al mini harem de luffy sería exelente lo malo es que tarda bastante aunque entiendo perfectamente la razón pero deberías tratar de sacarlos más seguido
Really enjoying this as a OP fan I'm loving the alternative twist of the MC understanding the story coming. I just need more episodes like now, please?
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Even the real luffy is less brain-dead than this MC, after reading 2 chapters i couldn't handle anymore destruction of my brain cells.
I need more. This is genuinely a good story but I would say that the first 10-15 chapters are a bit mid . I give this a 4.8 out of 5.
Bastante entretenido, solo quiero saber si es una traduccion? Y si es asi saber si el original esta terminado o simplemente abandonado. Ya que encuentro algunas matices de novela china
Love 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞 so much. Fun to read 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞
Chinese vibes all over the place. Not worth it. It feels like I'm reading mtl translation. ............................................................................... ............................................................................... ...............................................................................
I get a seizure trying to understand what is being written, looks like a very poor machine translation with 0 thought put into it. Tried reading up to chapter 5.
It's surprisingly good. Definitely one of the better translated works out there.
I hope you will be able to finish this storyand you will be able to finish entire Manga.
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I enjoyed this a ton, please give it a read if you like one piece fanfictions that leave you excited for the next chapter to come. This story comes together really well.
Es la mejor historia que he leído en muchísimo tiempo, estoy ansioso de que actualices para seguir leyendo y me encantaría que sepas que te apoyamos todos tus fans eres un crack
story is good but the writing is super duper bad to the point that i need to create my own sentence in my head just to understand your writing
Another one piece story that ruins one piece by letting the MC be immune to the sea with a devil fruit. Don’t waste your time
for those who like the ff it's actually a complete Chinese ff unavailable at "wuxiap" and with a strangely good translation I really forgot the title of it
Brother, please add one more, in my opinion, except for the best One Piece novels, thank you for your efforts
This is a good ff I enjoyed it until chapter 86 where there is yuri I'm not a fan only read this because author said no yuri. So gonna have to drop was good tho
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Solo digo que hermosa obra de trabajo si puedes incluir a Yamato al mini harem de luffy sería exelente lo malo es que tarda bastante aunque entiendo perfectamente la razón pero deberías tratar de sacarlos más seguido
Really enjoying this as a OP fan I'm loving the alternative twist of the MC understanding the story coming. I just need more episodes like now, please?
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Even the real luffy is less brain-dead than this MC, after reading 2 chapters i couldn't handle anymore destruction of my brain cells.
I need more. This is genuinely a good story but I would say that the first 10-15 chapters are a bit mid . I give this a 4.8 out of 5.
Bastante entretenido, solo quiero saber si es una traduccion? Y si es asi saber si el original esta terminado o simplemente abandonado. Ya que encuentro algunas matices de novela china
Love 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞 so much. Fun to read 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞
Chinese vibes all over the place. Not worth it. It feels like I'm reading mtl translation. ............................................................................... ............................................................................... ...............................................................................
I get a seizure trying to understand what is being written, looks like a very poor machine translation with 0 thought put into it. Tried reading up to chapter 5.
It's surprisingly good. Definitely one of the better translated works out there.
I hope you will be able to finish this storyand you will be able to finish entire Manga.
Nisiquiera a empezado y ya está jodido[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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I enjoyed this a ton, please give it a read if you like one piece fanfictions that leave you excited for the next chapter to come. This story comes together really well.