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(WARNING: Naruto is a brutal world, and it is not for beginners.)
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A captivating tale of a medical student's new life in Konoha, set in the same era as Kakashi and Might Guy. Immerse yourself in the world of Naruto, with intricate details that place you at the heart of the action but expect the action to be of a shinobi brand.
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Note: Naruto anime enthusiasts will easily connect with the story. The protagonist wields an AI..
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I read chapter 1 to 19. Everything almost perfect but the MC is a bit immature and emotional unstable I hope there would be a great disaster will happen so the MC would become more mature and become a great Ninja, because for what I see the MC is just ranting, complaining and not doing anything that will help or relief him from his problem.
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Thank you author, it was an interesting adventure, I hope you can please us again. What inspires me most in your work is the world design; it’s truly something well-developed and living its own life. Good luck.
It's in the top 5 favorite fafics. Very well written in worldbuilding, character, level of strength, politics, time connection, interpersonal relationships and much more. Please keep up the great work.💕💕💕💕💕💕❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕🫣💕💕💕💕💕💕💕❤️❤️❤️
One of the best Naruto fanfics! I really like the character development and world design! The AI Power is good but not OP, and the interpretation of Danzo, Hiruzen, Anbu and root is unique. The MC is very original too, i like him
writing is pretty good. there's some mistakes here and there but it's not enough to give you an aneurysm lol. the story is going in a nice development and it fits in really well with the World design and I like the way the author has designed their own version of the pre-canon plot. but I'll be honest, for the character development I am slightly disappointed in how the mc was basically forced to join Root. don't get me wrong I totally understand the why since even though he was a prodigy and starting to gain momentum in power (political, financial, and actual strength) as well as he was being supported by the Hiruzen and his eldest son as much as they could given their positions, but at the end of the day mc was on his own with no clan to back him up so when Danzo came calling he had no choice but to answer. I was just sad to see him forced to grow up from that naive little dreamer into a killer of the Ninja World like how he was trying not to be. but at least he's still fighting back in his own little rebellious ways so that's good. finally updating speed. I just got caught up so I can't determine that but so far it seems to be more than once a week so that's good for me lol
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It’s too early to say anything, but I really liked the beginning. I will continue to follow the development of the plot. If the pace and style of the narrative does not change, it will be one of the best works on Naruto.
great story so far really enjoying it . hopefully the author keeps updating. one suggestion from is that sometimes when new scene starts, it's hard to tell from the beginning because there is no dividing line or smth.so it's little confusing. other than that story is great
Me gusta la historia y el reciente cambio en la escritura por eso le doy está clasificación y solamente espero que las fechas de actualización sean estables para que de verdad alcance todo el potencial que veo puede tener
Âm lượng 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Âm lượng 1 : Prolouge
- 1 Chapter 1: A terrifying world 10 months ago
- 2 Chapter 2 : Academy entrance 10 months ago
- 3 Chapter 3: First Taijutsu class 10 months ago
- 4 Chapter 4 : Food is money 10 months ago
- 5 Chapter 5 : Progress 10 months ago
- 6 Chapter 6 : Hospital 10 months ago
- 7 Chapter 7 : Wakeup call 10 months ago
- 8 Chapter 8 : Vision of future 10 months ago
- 9 Chapter 9 : Money, Money, more money. 10 months ago
- 10 Chapter 10 : Duy-san 10 months ago
- 11 Chapters 11: Opening 10 months ago
- 12 Chapter 12 : Meeting People I didn't want to meet 10 months ago
- 13 Chapter 13 : Shadows of War 10 months ago
- 14 Chapter 14 : Politics 10 months ago
- 15 Chapter 15 : Surprise 10 months ago
- 16 Chapter 16 : Confusion 10 months ago
- 17 Chapter 17 : Curse of Prodigy 10 months ago
- 18 Chapter 18 : Kyudo's decision 9 months ago
- 19 Chapter 19 : Sabotage-1 9 months ago
- 20 Chapter 20 : Sabotage-2 9 months ago
- 21 Chapter 21 : Poor Kusa 9 months ago
- 22 Chapter 22 : Arrival in Sands 9 months ago
- 23 Chapter 23 : Training 9 months ago
- 24 Chapter 24 : Author's doubt And Anbu 5 months ago
- 25 Chapter 25 : Ambush 4 months ago
- 26 Chapter 26 : What an Irony! 4 months ago
- 27 Chapter 27 : I understand Jiraya 3 months ago
- 28 Chapter 28 : Easy mission 3 months ago
- 29 chapter 29: I need some rest. 3 months ago
- 30 Chapter 30 : Well deserved rest. 3 months ago
Overall a great approach. There are only 2 things i have to point out.1: Ther are many explanations that disrupt the flow of the story. Since this is a Fanfic there is no need to go into so much detail that most readers will skip anyway.2: It is quite slow paced. Again very detailed, but way too much in my opinion. Since this is pure training/learning until now it gets boring quite fast, at least for my expectation of a story in this world.Apart from those 2 points it is a great experience. Very good grammar, frequent updates and a very different MC compared to most FFs. Maybe you can do something about my critique, other than that keep up the good work