A Game of Bast

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Na1gel

your prologue dont make sense at all , starwars then bast from marvel then gameofthrones -_- .. comon dude make sene.......................................

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ShuYme

Ive seen other authors fall into the trap like this author has, instead of actually writing a story with characters that are fleshed out and have unique developments and Nice dialogue, he has instead chosen to just write a summary of events instead of a story. The story has no interaction between characters, no action, nothing of substance, it is just a summary of What happens.

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Gunts92

If I hear someone say that black people can't make up stories I'll hit them, but man (author) you're not helping JOKE. you make a taco with lots of stuff but the mixture is not coherent even if the result is good, no one will want to eat it

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zeen711

The greatest thing I saw today hope you keep it up it has a goodvibe

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Lania_Avery

Shadow ................... ....in the shadows