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Viết đánh giáI have seen people say it's a bad story, the mc is illogical, and whatnot. for those i would say what part of being an eldritch being so you not understand? An eldritch is a being that acts of what it wants and doesn't care for much else, i have been written eldritch characters for a novel I have been working on for some time and this here is one of the of not the only correct representation of how am eldritch should act. keep up the good work, author san. love your work I'll support you on patreon too when i can, I go by echo you will know when I come.
i rarely post reviews, mainly because most fics aren't worthy of one, a pass time if you want to call it. this fic however is more than worth it. outside of the fact that it took a seemingly cliche setting and made from it a hauntingly beautiful story. the way the author tackled the Naruto world just pulled on my heart strings. most worlds aren't complicated in that it's just a matter of power to fix. imo this is not the case for Naruto, the complexity and sheer bleakness of it is rarely portrayed in its own group. i am certainly a sucker for hero types, sunny knight dudes who have a genuine wish to save others ( as long as they actually kill) naruto in its intended form gives a way where heroes aren't just bumping idiots who only know how to punch problems away( looking at you Luffy) you either fail to fix the cycle of hatred by trying to brute force it, or understand that it requires more empathy, more sacrifice, more understanding to get others behind you. this story while didn't have a hero type and weren't there to fix it( which is why the character design is 3 stars), they did the world perfectly. waiting eag erlyto seeing more of this fic.
Overpowered MC story done well.The story os a nascent eldritch being that arrives at Marvel multiverse shortly(relative) after his Ascencion from a human. And given a home( universe) by OAA, that was on the way to be destroy(fail timeline),so he need to make sure his new home dont get destroy by the mortals while he create a home( territory/nation/civilization) for himself in his new universe. O yeah his is also a comisc being replacement(the kind of deat,eternity,oblivion...) so he have them in his speed dial(phone)
One of my Fav novels. Didn't feel that good at the start but over the time, it just grew on me.... I keep waiting for the next chapter to be released. The chapters are long. It's not for everyone tho.... I like the hotblooded mc typa stories but whenever I wanna relax, I need something like this (something without too many fights but doesn't feel monotonous).... doesn't feel boring and the main character is also a bit messed up in the head.... It's a fun read overall.... Nd Author, I'm writing this review to remind u to upload the next chapters 😭 waiting for them from last week!
one of the best books 📚 i have read the story is good the world background is good end chapters are chancie so it's understandable that the updates are e bit late but it's that good 👍👍🔥🔥🥰🥰
I just wanna say that almost all chapters are 20k words. this is a damn good novel. the storyline is really good. it doesn't get boring.
One of the best marvel fanfictions. This is my favorite along with Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel. This fanfic has large chapters and they really engage the readers. If you are looking for wish fulfilment, mtls with racist shit or some other AI generated shit this is not the place for you.
Everything is good but plz put some commen sense into Mc he is an idiot 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣Nice 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍👍
This story has some positives but also a lot of negatives. Some of the humor here is good but the dialogues and reactions are all garbage. Most of this story is just the MC praising himself or spewing hot air but never doing anything. Some parts are fun but you really have to be patient to find them. I suggest skipping all the long dialogues and only reading the first 10 words. You aren't really missing anything that way and also skip a lot of the cringe. But even with that it is a chore to read some of this.
Muy buen libro. .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Me Like, That's It! ........................................................................................................................
No diss to the author but idk how all these people rate this so high like it honestly feels like I’m on dr*gs reading this the mc while amusing is just redundant sorta with his whole “shiny dragon” stick which ig is just his character? But after after reading it 2-3 times every paragraph he talk I’m tired of it. Honestly everyone other than mc is phenomenal and acts the way you think they would (best boi is spark) another thing it’s only a single female lead(death) which I don’t mind but it’s like u set him up to be with Jean too but just keep shooting it down overall id say read till like chapter 5 to see if you like the vibe cause other than mc everything else was great
review time: the story is perfect, the title ended up giving the impression of being the type of FF where the MC is Onmi-all and is just having fun. (at least that was my impression, perhaps due to the large amount of very low quality FF with a concept of OP-ness) I have two points to make 1- for those who are commenting on the MC's sanity/personality, I recommend rereading the 1st chapter and TRYING to have a little empathy for the whole situation 2-(reason for my 1 star in updates) as an effort to encourage the author to make more chapters more quickly I propose that... the author be placed (contained) in a room with all the best things in the world, food , comfort, security, technology, etc.... this room was then protected (besieged) by a horde of furious drugged bears. this way he (the author) can concentrate better on his work (this FF in particular). Anyone who supports the idea +1 comment
What's the point of the protagonist having all that power only to be nerfed? He could have stayed in the void and asked that entity to teach him how to create a universal wall, forge a new universe, and then reconstruct his own universe from scratch. Moreover, he could learn how to extract souls from his own because I'm convinced that one cannot simply absorb souls without leaving an echo of the other souls behind. Alternatively, there should have been a storyline where he grapples with insanity due to the overwhelming nature of his abilities. This story lacks coherence and depth.
Great story so far, worth giving it a read. The Main character is a bit out of his mind but loves Fluff and the Holy Shine
Super random mishmash of Marvel universes. I've been laughing almost non-stop since chapter 2 or 3. The mc is an insanely OP dragon a tiny speck under the Conceptual Multiversal entities like the Phoenix Force and Death. Kept that way so he can accomplish things that they can't due to their existences. He spends many eons floating alone through the void until he gets found by The One Above All and given the job of destroying and resetting universes too damaged or negative to be fixed. Needless to say he isn't the most stable mind. Reminds me a lot of a favorite Royal Road story of mine called Re: Ocean which is pretty much constant insanity.
I have seen people say it's a bad story, the mc is illogical, and whatnot. for those i would say what part of being an eldritch being so you not understand? An eldritch is a being that acts of what it wants and doesn't care for much else, i have been written eldritch characters for a novel I have been working on for some time and this here is one of the of not the only correct representation of how am eldritch should act. keep up the good work, author san. love your work I'll support you on patreon too when i can, I go by echo you will know when I come.
i rarely post reviews, mainly because most fics aren't worthy of one, a pass time if you want to call it. this fic however is more than worth it. outside of the fact that it took a seemingly cliche setting and made from it a hauntingly beautiful story. the way the author tackled the Naruto world just pulled on my heart strings. most worlds aren't complicated in that it's just a matter of power to fix. imo this is not the case for Naruto, the complexity and sheer bleakness of it is rarely portrayed in its own group. i am certainly a sucker for hero types, sunny knight dudes who have a genuine wish to save others ( as long as they actually kill) naruto in its intended form gives a way where heroes aren't just bumping idiots who only know how to punch problems away( looking at you Luffy) you either fail to fix the cycle of hatred by trying to brute force it, or understand that it requires more empathy, more sacrifice, more understanding to get others behind you. this story while didn't have a hero type and weren't there to fix it( which is why the character design is 3 stars), they did the world perfectly. waiting eag erlyto seeing more of this fic.
Overpowered MC story done well.The story os a nascent eldritch being that arrives at Marvel multiverse shortly(relative) after his Ascencion from a human. And given a home( universe) by OAA, that was on the way to be destroy(fail timeline),so he need to make sure his new home dont get destroy by the mortals while he create a home( territory/nation/civilization) for himself in his new universe. O yeah his is also a comisc being replacement(the kind of deat,eternity,oblivion...) so he have them in his speed dial(phone)
One of my Fav novels. Didn't feel that good at the start but over the time, it just grew on me.... I keep waiting for the next chapter to be released. The chapters are long. It's not for everyone tho.... I like the hotblooded mc typa stories but whenever I wanna relax, I need something like this (something without too many fights but doesn't feel monotonous).... doesn't feel boring and the main character is also a bit messed up in the head.... It's a fun read overall.... Nd Author, I'm writing this review to remind u to upload the next chapters 😭 waiting for them from last week!
one of the best books 📚 i have read the story is good the world background is good end chapters are chancie so it's understandable that the updates are e bit late but it's that good 👍👍🔥🔥🥰🥰
I just wanna say that almost all chapters are 20k words. this is a damn good novel. the storyline is really good. it doesn't get boring.
One of the best marvel fanfictions. This is my favorite along with Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel. This fanfic has large chapters and they really engage the readers. If you are looking for wish fulfilment, mtls with racist shit or some other AI generated shit this is not the place for you.
Everything is good but plz put some commen sense into Mc he is an idiot 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣Nice 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍👍
This story has some positives but also a lot of negatives. Some of the humor here is good but the dialogues and reactions are all garbage. Most of this story is just the MC praising himself or spewing hot air but never doing anything. Some parts are fun but you really have to be patient to find them. I suggest skipping all the long dialogues and only reading the first 10 words. You aren't really missing anything that way and also skip a lot of the cringe. But even with that it is a chore to read some of this.
Muy buen libro. .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Me Like, That's It! ........................................................................................................................
No diss to the author but idk how all these people rate this so high like it honestly feels like I’m on dr*gs reading this the mc while amusing is just redundant sorta with his whole “shiny dragon” stick which ig is just his character? But after after reading it 2-3 times every paragraph he talk I’m tired of it. Honestly everyone other than mc is phenomenal and acts the way you think they would (best boi is spark) another thing it’s only a single female lead(death) which I don’t mind but it’s like u set him up to be with Jean too but just keep shooting it down overall id say read till like chapter 5 to see if you like the vibe cause other than mc everything else was great
review time: the story is perfect, the title ended up giving the impression of being the type of FF where the MC is Onmi-all and is just having fun. (at least that was my impression, perhaps due to the large amount of very low quality FF with a concept of OP-ness) I have two points to make 1- for those who are commenting on the MC's sanity/personality, I recommend rereading the 1st chapter and TRYING to have a little empathy for the whole situation 2-(reason for my 1 star in updates) as an effort to encourage the author to make more chapters more quickly I propose that... the author be placed (contained) in a room with all the best things in the world, food , comfort, security, technology, etc.... this room was then protected (besieged) by a horde of furious drugged bears. this way he (the author) can concentrate better on his work (this FF in particular). Anyone who supports the idea +1 comment
What's the point of the protagonist having all that power only to be nerfed? He could have stayed in the void and asked that entity to teach him how to create a universal wall, forge a new universe, and then reconstruct his own universe from scratch. Moreover, he could learn how to extract souls from his own because I'm convinced that one cannot simply absorb souls without leaving an echo of the other souls behind. Alternatively, there should have been a storyline where he grapples with insanity due to the overwhelming nature of his abilities. This story lacks coherence and depth.
Great story so far, worth giving it a read. The Main character is a bit out of his mind but loves Fluff and the Holy Shine
Super random mishmash of Marvel universes. I've been laughing almost non-stop since chapter 2 or 3. The mc is an insanely OP dragon a tiny speck under the Conceptual Multiversal entities like the Phoenix Force and Death. Kept that way so he can accomplish things that they can't due to their existences. He spends many eons floating alone through the void until he gets found by The One Above All and given the job of destroying and resetting universes too damaged or negative to be fixed. Needless to say he isn't the most stable mind. Reminds me a lot of a favorite Royal Road story of mine called Re: Ocean which is pretty much constant insanity.
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