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The opening starts off very interesting and engaging, but my biggest problem is the way it’ executed. The paragraphs are very lengthy and not broken up so sometimes it feels a bit much. I feel is you tone down on the descriptions and balance it out with character thought process, would help me have a better understanding of the character. Right now the writing feels distant , like I’m a bird watching but don’ get much of internal monologue or room to form my own thoughts and opinion because of the over detailing.
It's been a while since I have enjoyed a novel, The starting three chapters are well written.I know that it's not perfect, The author had focussed more on the details and less on the character's thoughts and dialogues.The structure could also be improved a lot and paragraph could be shortened.However, despite that I will give author A for effort. I like the writing style which is rather poetic, the story also sounds promising.
The opening starts off very interesting and engaging, but my biggest problem is the way it’ executed. The paragraphs are very lengthy and not broken up so sometimes it feels a bit much. I feel is you tone down on the descriptions and balance it out with character thought process, would help me have a better understanding of the character. Right now the writing feels distant , like I’m a bird watching but don’ get much of internal monologue or room to form my own thoughts and opinion because of the over detailing.
It's been a while since I have enjoyed a novel, The starting three chapters are well written.I know that it's not perfect, The author had focussed more on the details and less on the character's thoughts and dialogues.The structure could also be improved a lot and paragraph could be shortened.However, despite that I will give author A for effort. I like the writing style which is rather poetic, the story also sounds promising.