Uninvited, A Vampire Becomes Part of My Youth

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TyrantTron335

I just wanted to Ask why you wanted to write a Fanfiction again. But it doesn't matter anyway. Just wanted to Give you an idea to Make mc a campione, His boring and Alone life will become complicated.

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EclipseKing

a true Gem in a sea of mediocrity

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Kiyan_Tribe

it's w SNAFU fic written by Frona, what else reason do you need to give 5 stars? Anyway joking aside. I liked author's previous fic and after reading this fic , I also know this will be good. In my opinion author portrayed Hachiman's character perfectly in this fic. It genuinely feels like I am reading about him rather than an occ.

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Orsted_sama

I'd give it an 10 out of 10 for creativity and storytelling. The story absolutely grabs your attention, and the way the characters engage is quite cool. They maintain matters thrilling with some humor and clever conversations. Now, in relation to grammar and stuff, I'd say it is like a 8 out of 10. Most of the time, it's all true, but there are some little punctuation and grammar hiccups right here and there. Also, some of the ones lengthy sentences may want to use a trim to lead them to less difficult to read. As for the characters, I'd deliver it an 10 out of 10. They each have their personal specific personalities and quirks, which makes them fun to follow. The story flows k, like a 9 out of 10, but there are moments while it could move smoother, specially when they switch among scenes.

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Christ_Apostle

the new chapter makes me drop this...........

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Luke_Soul

I need more from you, this story is amazing and captivating

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

Fanfic and novel of vampire is 90% likely gay. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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Kono_Dio_na

it's great overall. but, this Dio isn't satisfied. give this Dio more chapters

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Netherios00Zaphire

A masterpiece. hikkigaya become vampire? truly dude I like it. [this proud dragon Satisfied!]

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Ascharit

a great story story and one of the few where shinobus a part of it.HAvent thoguht how well he maches with arraga but those 2 are quite similar

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kento_9178

honestly? It's great nothing is really out of place and whatever happening is engaging while at the same time not really that heavy just hope just not it's not dropped

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antony_silva

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JoshNeedsAComfort

I love your fic!! I love that the mc is not passive though he's dense but its not irritating like some beta protagonist rather he look like he like he graduated from "Rizzard academy of Charizzma. And i hope you will update more frequently the chapters is not nearly enough!! Its really good.

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J_D_Johnathan

This book immediately captivated me the moment I finished reading the 1st chapter.

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Egoless

More updates and don't you dare drop this for if you do I will hunt you down. (jk pls no drop and take my powastones)

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dov

I really liked the story it was very fresh, i dont know much about the monogatari series, but it was't hard to understand WordwordwordwordWordwordwordwordWordwordwordwordWordwordwordwordWordwordwordwordWordwordwordwordWordwordwordwordWordwordwordwordWordwordwordwordWordwordwordwordWordwordwordwordWordwordwordwordWordwordwordwordWordwordwordwordWordwordwordwordWordwordwordword

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Xjzhgxjg_Nuocjgcyk_1607

This is a good fanfic, I hope you won't drop it or go on hiatus in the middle of the story.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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dov

Such a great story and grasp of the characters, thank you very much author for you efforts. AaaaaaaaaaaAaaaaaaaaaaAaaaaaaaaaaAaaaaaaaaaaAaaaaaaaaaaAaaaaaaaaaaAaaaaaaaaaaAaaaaaaaaaaAaaaaaaaaaaAaaaaaaaaaaAaaaaaaaaaaAaaaaaaaaaaAaaaaaaaaaaAaaaaaaaaaaAaaaaaaaaaa

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Atzxukii

this is so good, just banged through the 38 chapters in one night, please continue your hardwork 💜