ECHOES OF FATE

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DarkJoker2029

mystery novel finally,hhhhhh love the developing so far

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Jia_K

The most striking part about this novel is its prose...which is beautiful. The style is fluent and smooth, and the story progresses fairly well. It's a truly enjoyable read.

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DreamScribbler

mystery eh? my type of novel.although I'm still reading, so far (6 chapters ) I've been enjoying the read

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Dummybeing

This book explores friendship, resilience, and the search for truth in a world where the ordinary meets the extraordinary. A truly wonderful novel and highly recommended!

LV 3

YeshuaH

The narrative is praised for its elegant prose and engaging style, maintaining a good pace in the story's progression. The mysterious plot attracts readers, as do the well-developed characters and their dynamics. The suggestion to add more sensory details can further deepen immersion in the story. Additionally, it is important to correct the formatting issue with spaces between paragraphs to enhance the reading experience. Overall, it is a promising read, full of mysteries that pique the reader's curiosity.

LV 15

LotusLin

Author has such a beautiful way with words. The way the story is written feels like ethereal poetry. You become really invested in the characters and their dynamic. It's such a mysterious, dark yet beautiful story unveiling.

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GMSJakers

This story is sent forward by the prose of the book, as well as good pacing that doesn't drag or move too fast for us to understand. It's a book worth reading.

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superAyan

Author's narration is very beautiful! It's like your reading poetry with a nice story^^ Keep up the good work author!🙌

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CosmicArchmage

The writing style is very pleasant, and the characters' personalities are well-defined. In certain situations, you can even anticipate their actions. Overall, I liked it a lot and consider it time well spent!

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Gothicthewitch

Interest story. beautiful writing, creative word play, and a very strong character writing and development.

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HallCowden

Wait... I love stories like this. I hope the girl doesn't give up on love immediately. lol Good job author!

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GEEGEE

A wonderful read. Filled with so many mysteries that I wanna unravel. Love d bond between Lilly and Maria and wanna c whats really troubling Lilly. Dt fate wanna know it. So keep up d good wek. Looking forward to more🥰🥰

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Amarachukwu_Okoli_2708

The writing style was a little too stiff at the beginning, but it gets better. It's a nice story, and the author is really getting the mystery thing right.Good luck 🤞🤞

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ToufiqUlAlam

I have only one question...When is the movie out? I mean if they made a movie series out of Twilight...This one must be the next one. The language has made me fall in love with the writer. I am IN LOVE...I mean it...I can spend the rest of my life reading the stories written by the author. it was a breath taking journey...If you are into mystery and enigma..you must give this a try!!!

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ShyEdward

Great so far not going to lie. Some minor mistakes but that happens. Overall an great story. I might finish it tonight

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Joseon_Walking

The writing is solid I saw few if any grammar errors the story flows well, but I would like a bit more sensory detail here and there (not much just a few spots I noticed seemed...empty? My biggest pet peeve is no spaces between paragraphs makes it really hard to read on webnovel, but that is a formatting issue not writing issue.

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Han_Sirang

Its a well written novel and all three main lead have an interesting part to play in the story. While the grammar is a little lacking, the story and plot makes up for it!

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FriedrichFriedrice

Great Novel, a lot of bad grammars tho. (Mine has a lot too. Still a great novel, well executed . And I only read chapter 1)

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Moawar

An mystery story with three main leads that actually ends up being well-written ? Wow, ok, now that's talent, can't wait to see the potential twists and turns in the future chapters !

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SwagnosticDaoist

I'm ten chapters in and I can say that this story is a great one. Well fleshed out characters, a poetic writing style that captures imagination and stable updates that mean that you would always get your daily dose of the drug. There are a few issues, but if the author works on them, then this story is destined for greatness!