Harry Potter: The New Dark Lord Shelby

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TheJayPlay

Good grammar and Good writing quality. I love the idea of a gang family member being a wizard. I have read till the 6th chapter and from what I see the MC is Smart , Villain type and doesn't change his decision due to his emotions. 👍 😊.

LV 1

Viki098

More is needed. For this first chapter I will give a 5 star. If this story goes bad I will update my review.

LV 4

AHAPPYBEAR

Perfect. We need more of thi, as soon as we can get it. Thank you Author.

LV 4

HOLY_BOB

Romance????

LV 4

Chaosscythe

Can you read this if you haven't watched peaky blinders?

LV 4

Lucifer879

Lov the idea of putting the peaky blinders in Harry Potter can’t wait to see what happenst

LV 3

Blutmond

Good

LV 4

Project_Paladin

Honestly one of the best Fan-fics on Webnovel please keep up the good work!

LV 4

LorDudu

English IS not my first language, so please don't mind my mistakes. First this story is interesting, and has a lot of potential. The reason to become a Dark lord is a bit odd but the quality global is good

LV 4

Humbuub

There were some chapters where it seems unedited, when a dialogue is within the same double quotes and it's confusing. There's an entire chapter where MC and Hermione's dialogues were interchanged. Everything else is great, although it would be better if author tune down the MC Hermione ship. It's just not believable and creepy since MC has an adult mind. It's this Hermione, not the full adult we know now.

LV 4

LGK_maore

amazing writtings ....i like the progression of the upcoming events🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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LGK_maore

you deserve no-lessthan 5 starsi do believe that this ff is going to be an amazing work as long u auhtor keep at the same pace 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥💪💪💪💪

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0rochi

Easily 5/5 fanfic. ...,.,....................................,.,....................,.,................................................

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Midvors

I want to ask about a novel for those who know it? It's about someone reincarnated as a brother to Harry Potter. And he must not change canon.

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Rend0rf

the best harry potter novel i read hahahaahAHAHAHAHAHA

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Black_Book0990

carry on, this is a rare good novel between HP and LOTR, keep them coming

LV 4

Formless19

I find this story really appealing as the crossover of LOTR and HP here is something to look forward to. Saruman, Gandalf, Dumbldore, Voldemort and Souran are characters that are interesting in themsleves, not to mention, an interaction between them would be a fascinating story. So unless, the author messes up somewhere along the line. I would very much recommend this web novel.

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Zu69

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