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InnocentFox

Thank you for reading my book. I won't talk too much about it , so I'll let you decide if it's good or not. Feel free to ask me anything here, and I'll do my best to respond. I'm not a very serious person btw, so I tend to inject humor into my responses.

1yr
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carlos_alberto

holy ending man... i really didnt saw it coming. how can i be honest about this novel without being unfair? it is for sure a 10/10 while being a 5/10 at the same time. i hate to like it, i wish it had 500 chapters more tho, would read it with pleasure, but im glad its over so i can read something else. the memes, the plot twists, the op stuff. chefs kiss. I'll be honest i have dropped better stuff because it always gets boring eventually, but this time I got hooked from beginning to end, took me a month to read everything. thanks for the work, author. hope you take my words as a compliment. 😅

12h
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morhtrem

The writer think that by making the mc look like a psycho the story will be good, but he clearly don't know where to stop. Too much ntr, too much killing of innocents make it truly heavy to read. We all have some insanity, but bro you took it too much. My advice slow down a little bit with ntr and focus on skills that the mc got but a few chapter after you forgot about them like the reflect of damage.

1mth
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Siva_The_Destroyer

Pathetic & moronic MC. To top it off a forceful system with massive penalties.

1mth
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Scy7he

Maybe some people will like it, but for me the beginning portion with mc's way of monologuing as well as the cast introduced make it impossible to read it 😶 Heck instead of the girls, I was cheering for Juck, the guy the mc was gonna cuck (hey it rhymed!)

2mth
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radioactive_jig0l0

THIS VENERABLE ALMOST DID NOT READ THIS GEM BECAUSE OF SOME PEASENTS SHARING THEIR VIEW OF LOW INTELLECT. BEWARE O WANDERER NEVER TRUST THE VIEWS OF PEASENTS AND MAKE YOUR OWN WAY!!

6mth
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Valtor_Raven

Nice story. Worth reading. Author please keep the good work.

8mth
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Enderman434

Absolute trash. The author tries so hard to seem smart but its clear he’s a failed person. To give you an idea of how bad it is, the author starts the story by descr someone as “half Korean half American”

10mth
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Viadhivan_Ranata

The New Cover is good, and that jail bar which give an immersion of imprisonment very much, I like it. It make one wonder wether it's the MC who put his brainwashed girls in a cage, or it's the girls who turns yandere and caged the MC as their property instead 😅😆🤣

11mth
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Badgersssss

I love the story ,the characters ,everything but please author what is Your discord account for art illustration

11mth
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Viadhivan_Ranata

Author-san, can I use your awesome novel cover picture for my profile pictures???? Here is All Five Stars on All Five Categories for Yours Truly 😆🤩🌠🌟🌠⭐🌠🌟✨🤩😆

1yr
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MajidX200

Above the average of similar stories

1yr
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MajidX200

Does anyone know a novel like I, The Son of Luck's Father is the Hidden Villain of the Book? Introduce me too.

1yr
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Yuuki123

really didn't like the mc, and his plot armor is so thick that it's not even funny.

1yr
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SuperMonkey

OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!

1yr
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SweetRayne

Although I liked the premise of the story, the way the author names their characters made me drop almost instantly. The author is using korean names completely wrong and it makes me cringe. For example, Ji-Hoon Alyssa is the first female character introduced where Ji-hoon is supposed to be the last name and Alyssa is her first name. Ji-hoon is a first name for a boy in korea. Last names are usually one syllable i.e. Kim, Lee, Park, etc. while first names are two syllables like Ji-hoon. I tried powering though and ignoring it but this tiny detail makes this novel completely unreadable for me. Writing- About what you expect for a webnovel time waster MC- Supposed to be some amalgamation of villainous actions with hypocritical righteous inner monologue to depict some realism but comes off disjointed. Also he dumb. Story- Bleh Premise- Promising for a fun villain type lemon story but doesn't deliver

1yr
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Dao_May
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This novel is easily one of my favorites. Smart Mc just doing whatever he wants .

1yr
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Mysticx
LV 11 Badge

novel is a good read. It's refreshing to read an MC who's not brain dead and actually uses his mind.

1yr
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DaoistEchPYX

garbage cliche worthless novel. good to pass the time. worthless otherwise. loser mc. cliche tropes everywhere every second, mc is "smart" for plot conveniences. dont waste ur time.

1yr
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Maksim_Yushko

"Mission Reward : Mind Break Unlock ] [Mission Penalty : Erectile dysfunction]" I hate this type of system, let's drop this too high rate. Say no to forced, abusive systems!

1yr
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Suamae1215

had a very good start with the story having a good development pace, but after the main revenge plot it gets terribly weak, maybe it will improve but I'm not willing to pay until it gets there, but as far as I've read the only criticism is the excess of mc's self reflection

1yr
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Qwerttipper

This story starts out well with the mc being the underdog making mistakes and learning from them. But it then changes to average urban novel with gang wars and slice of life. If I had not read the first part, I would have thought this is a different book.

1yr
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kellyvette_colon

Very good, I’m loving it, the more I read the more captivated I’m…!!! Thanks, author…!!!

1yr
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CHAOS_FOOLISH

Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know how many girls are currently in the harem, and if there are any yanderes... please answer me.

1yr
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Jack_n_off

stop reading p0rn,have some decency please

1yr
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Pingvinchik

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1yr
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Hanimated

Its just so good. I'm so used to dealing with boring mc's that do braindead stuff for no reason that this novel genuinely shocked me. It has an mc who actually thinks and does stuff that he wants with his powers. A really refreshing break from the commonplace garbage being developed rn, thank you author for this amazing read.

1yr
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Pingvinchik

მაგარია მომწონს იმედია კიდევ უფრო მეტი დრო გაატარეთ კიდევ უფრო მეტი დრო გაატარეთ კიდევ უფრო მეტი დრო გაატარეთ კიდევ უფრო მეტი დრო გაატარეთ კიდევ უფრო მეტი

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1yr
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Lord_Chad_the_4th

5/5. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book.

1yr
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Magasu_senpai

good but could use some improving then again im not a author so....

1yr
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Sleeping_Scholar

Reviewing this book again after reading 50 chapters. The author remained consistent in providing quality content and I'm glad that this novel gets 3 chapters per day upload because this story is just too addictive.It just shows how dedicated the author is in providing content. Kudos to the author.

1yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
InnocentFox

Thank you for reading my book. I won't talk too much about it , so I'll let you decide if it's good or not. Feel free to ask me anything here, and I'll do my best to respond. I'm not a very serious person btw, so I tend to inject humor into my responses.

1yr
Xem 50 lời trả lời
carlos_alberto

holy ending man... i really didnt saw it coming. how can i be honest about this novel without being unfair? it is for sure a 10/10 while being a 5/10 at the same time. i hate to like it, i wish it had 500 chapters more tho, would read it with pleasure, but im glad its over so i can read something else. the memes, the plot twists, the op stuff. chefs kiss. I'll be honest i have dropped better stuff because it always gets boring eventually, but this time I got hooked from beginning to end, took me a month to read everything. thanks for the work, author. hope you take my words as a compliment. 😅

12h
Xem 1 lời trả lời
morhtrem

The writer think that by making the mc look like a psycho the story will be good, but he clearly don't know where to stop. Too much ntr, too much killing of innocents make it truly heavy to read. We all have some insanity, but bro you took it too much. My advice slow down a little bit with ntr and focus on skills that the mc got but a few chapter after you forgot about them like the reflect of damage.

1mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Siva_The_Destroyer

Pathetic & moronic MC. To top it off a forceful system with massive penalties.

1mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Scy7he

Maybe some people will like it, but for me the beginning portion with mc's way of monologuing as well as the cast introduced make it impossible to read it 😶 Heck instead of the girls, I was cheering for Juck, the guy the mc was gonna cuck (hey it rhymed!)

2mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
radioactive_jig0l0

THIS VENERABLE ALMOST DID NOT READ THIS GEM BECAUSE OF SOME PEASENTS SHARING THEIR VIEW OF LOW INTELLECT. BEWARE O WANDERER NEVER TRUST THE VIEWS OF PEASENTS AND MAKE YOUR OWN WAY!!

6mth
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Valtor_Raven

Nice story. Worth reading. Author please keep the good work.

8mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Enderman434

Absolute trash. The author tries so hard to seem smart but its clear he’s a failed person. To give you an idea of how bad it is, the author starts the story by descr someone as “half Korean half American”

10mth
Xem 3 lời trả lời
Viadhivan_Ranata

The New Cover is good, and that jail bar which give an immersion of imprisonment very much, I like it. It make one wonder wether it's the MC who put his brainwashed girls in a cage, or it's the girls who turns yandere and caged the MC as their property instead 😅😆🤣

11mth
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Badgersssss

I love the story ,the characters ,everything but please author what is Your discord account for art illustration

11mth
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Viadhivan_Ranata

Author-san, can I use your awesome novel cover picture for my profile pictures???? Here is All Five Stars on All Five Categories for Yours Truly 😆🤩🌠🌟🌠⭐🌠🌟✨🤩😆

1yr
Xem 2 lời trả lời
MajidX200

Above the average of similar stories

1yr
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MajidX200

Does anyone know a novel like I, The Son of Luck's Father is the Hidden Villain of the Book? Introduce me too.

1yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Yuuki123

really didn't like the mc, and his plot armor is so thick that it's not even funny.

1yr
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SuperMonkey

OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!

1yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
SweetRayne

Although I liked the premise of the story, the way the author names their characters made me drop almost instantly. The author is using korean names completely wrong and it makes me cringe. For example, Ji-Hoon Alyssa is the first female character introduced where Ji-hoon is supposed to be the last name and Alyssa is her first name. Ji-hoon is a first name for a boy in korea. Last names are usually one syllable i.e. Kim, Lee, Park, etc. while first names are two syllables like Ji-hoon. I tried powering though and ignoring it but this tiny detail makes this novel completely unreadable for me. Writing- About what you expect for a webnovel time waster MC- Supposed to be some amalgamation of villainous actions with hypocritical righteous inner monologue to depict some realism but comes off disjointed. Also he dumb. Story- Bleh Premise- Promising for a fun villain type lemon story but doesn't deliver

1yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Dao_May
LV 11 Badge

This novel is easily one of my favorites. Smart Mc just doing whatever he wants .

1yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Mysticx
LV 11 Badge

novel is a good read. It's refreshing to read an MC who's not brain dead and actually uses his mind.

1yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
DaoistEchPYX

garbage cliche worthless novel. good to pass the time. worthless otherwise. loser mc. cliche tropes everywhere every second, mc is "smart" for plot conveniences. dont waste ur time.

1yr
Xem 6 lời trả lời
Maksim_Yushko

"Mission Reward : Mind Break Unlock ] [Mission Penalty : Erectile dysfunction]" I hate this type of system, let's drop this too high rate. Say no to forced, abusive systems!

1yr
Xem 7 lời trả lời
Suamae1215

had a very good start with the story having a good development pace, but after the main revenge plot it gets terribly weak, maybe it will improve but I'm not willing to pay until it gets there, but as far as I've read the only criticism is the excess of mc's self reflection

1yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Qwerttipper

This story starts out well with the mc being the underdog making mistakes and learning from them. But it then changes to average urban novel with gang wars and slice of life. If I had not read the first part, I would have thought this is a different book.

1yr
Xem 2 lời trả lời
kellyvette_colon

Very good, I’m loving it, the more I read the more captivated I’m…!!! Thanks, author…!!!

1yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
CHAOS_FOOLISH

Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know how many girls are currently in the harem, and if there are any yanderes... please answer me.

1yr
Xem 5 lời trả lời
Jack_n_off

stop reading p0rn,have some decency please

1yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Pingvinchik

Xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx

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1yr
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Hanimated

Its just so good. I'm so used to dealing with boring mc's that do braindead stuff for no reason that this novel genuinely shocked me. It has an mc who actually thinks and does stuff that he wants with his powers. A really refreshing break from the commonplace garbage being developed rn, thank you author for this amazing read.

1yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Pingvinchik

მაგარია მომწონს იმედია კიდევ უფრო მეტი დრო გაატარეთ კიდევ უფრო მეტი დრო გაატარეთ კიდევ უფრო მეტი დრო გაატარეთ კიდევ უფრო მეტი დრო გაატარეთ კიდევ უფრო მეტი

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1yr
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Lord_Chad_the_4th

5/5. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book.

1yr
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Magasu_senpai

good but could use some improving then again im not a author so....

1yr
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Sleeping_Scholar

Reviewing this book again after reading 50 chapters. The author remained consistent in providing quality content and I'm glad that this novel gets 3 chapters per day upload because this story is just too addictive.It just shows how dedicated the author is in providing content. Kudos to the author.

1yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
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