HxH: adventure of a lifetime

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owener

Chapter 20 was a huge disappointment. His own hatsu cripples him.I would have been fine with the nerf to his random ability. I would have even liked it, but taking away abilities he already has is stupid. Add on top bodily mutilation and his own ability screwing him over for breaking never established rules.Could have made it so he has beginner's boost for the first few months, and then you go to new monthly pulls.Might change my rating depending on the authors response or drop altogether.

LV 4

MahoV

I have high hope, I'm in need of HxH ff and you provide me with one so I hope you do a good job

I understand why many give 1 star; the author made a mistake in the laws of Nen. I'll give an example: is there a Nen user in HxH who doesn't know about the boundaries or oaths that the user can't break? Nothing, even Kurapika, knows that the limitation of one of his Hatsu (Chain Jail) cannot be used other than by members of the Gennei Ryodan; if Kurapika violates the rule, he will die (HxH Episode 47). So in conclusion, there isn't a single Nen user in the entire Hunter X Hunter series who doesn't know a boundary that shouldn't be crossed. Meanwhile, our MC actually violates these limits because he doesn't know, Where is this common sense?

LV 4

ChangedReviewer

3.6 / 5 I like the story. The OG of the story is pretty interesting even if he is as generic as he could possibly be. My problem with the story is the following: essentially the first 10 chapters are a quick recap of the Hunter exam. Nothing really changes and we get a condensed version focusing almost solely on the OG. It's pretty interesting but nothing special. The author has so many chances to describe fights in details, explain things, expand the world... he just does not do it. A small spoiler here: The MC is a specialist... he of course does the test featuring the glas with water with a leaf on top. Every HXH fan knows: specialists have UNIQUE responses to the test and every time something different happens... so what happens for our mc? We do not now. The author decides to skip it and just writes a 1 liner where the mc says: "so I am a specialist". This type of writing runs like a red thread through the story. It's IMO lazy and boring writing even though the author has a pretty decent plot going for himself. Overall I still like the story and maybe I am just a bit harsher than all those "I like it so 5/5" drones but I feel at this point it may have potential but it also has obvious flaws that stop it from being a top story here.

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escobe

If you read up to chapter 20, you will know why this deserves 1 star ...........................................................................

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Talal77

The fun of the story got spoiled after Chapter 20 😢[img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=fp][img=exp][img=update][img=exp][img=update]

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dadaoist

one of the if not the best hxh outhere. Updates are fast!

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CALE_HENITSU

Começou bem mais aí no penúltimo capítulo o autor cagou em tudo e depois piorou mais ainda tô fora :) ....................................................... .............................................................................................................. ....................................................... ....................................................... .............................................................................................................. ....................................................... ....................................................... .............................................................................................................. .......................................................

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EvilPenguin_666

Very good not many hxh story's on web novel

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xsailos

Pretty great so far, his hatsu is strong and has the potential to make him op. All in all worth a read 👍

LV 11

hero4hire

[From solid 5/5 star to 3.8/5 star] Its been very clear to me that READERS dont like MCs who are slave to their golden finger, asking mc for such a steep price and MC having no way than to comply literally gutted the story for me. MC gave up 2 OP skill to use this loophole and shoul've been allowed. Also, if he broke the rule, removing his access to merchant shop for a fix amount of time like a month or year or increasing the time limit of shop would've punishiment enough instead of turning him into system slave. The way merchant forced him with physical punsihment and literally ripping out a core skill from him shows what is given can be taken away in a whim. God forbid mc break any of the merchant rule in the future and he'd end up cripple with all the skill, experience and strength taken from him. What do you call it if not system slave?!

LV 4

RuberX

so many dumb people I don't get why they give 1 star for ch 20 if it is not to your liking still why 1 star is story not good. only for people who gave 1 star for ch 20

LV 4

SimplyNovel

I was honestly going to wait a little more before writing a review, but the cry babies with those 1 star reviews forced my hand. The story starts in the hunter exam arc like most HxH fanfics, however the author skims through this arc pretty fast which I liked. The Mc ends up going to heavens arena but does not spend a lot of time with gon and killua. The Mc is his own character, not just someone following gon and reliving the canon. The interactions between characters need a little more work but is still good enough. His hatsu is pretty op and would have probably made him stronger than the ant king by the time the chimera arc starts, which was why it needed a small nerf (chapter 20). He is still very op and will likely surpass netero in the future, so no issues there. Updates have been stable up till now so give it a try, it's better than 99% of HxH fanfics.

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OblivionStar

Good story so far, it’s hard to find a good and creative hxh fanfic. No major spelling or grammar errors. Unique and interesting Nen ability. It's a little fast-passed would be my only complaint.

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ToppyRibbit

This is a pretty good hxh fanfic compared to almost all of the other ones I have read. The main character is strong but isn’t so strong that he has no problems. The story has good pacing. And even though the author needs him he does it in a way that makes sense especially for the world of hxh. The nerf isn’t even that bad and his ability is still really good. He tried cheating the nen system of hxh and got hit with the consequences of his actions.

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Notmatter

Novel is pretty entertaining. Thank you for novel ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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AstralNinja420

Your stupid if you think the nerve t set is a good idea there are many other ways you could’ve set him back but no you act like a idiot

LV 4

FirstHumanWolf

Story is good so far ( cap 21). Don't understand why some people are dissatisfied with cap 20 ( and giving bad review's at that). Nen is a give and take kind of power, so it is not far fetched. Just look at kurapika's power's. Giving it 5 stars to counter som of the bad review's.

LV 12

InkDeath

Not bad ................................