Chương 256: Traps and Golems
Seeing the storm dissipating, the Ice Elves faltered, the formation breaking as the adventurers pressed their advantage. They also seemed significantly weaker than before, and this time, the adventurers were able to kill off all of them.
"The storm, it was boosting their power."
Wanette voiced the observation everyone had begun to piece together as they regrouped to handle the wounded and the adventurers nodded in agreement, murmuring among themselves about how the elves' strength had noticeably waned as the weather had cleared.
Jamie, who had been quietly observing until now, finally walked over to the group. He placed his hands on the twins' shoulders and looked at Wanette before scoring them.
"Not bad. Six out of ten."
David frowned, glancing at him skeptically.
"That sounds... kind of bad."
"Actually, that's just average."
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_michael
_michael IMPORTANT!!
I’m sure you’ve noticed by now that the formatting style I use in my writing involves presenting speech and thoughts as standalone lines. Dialogue is always shown as standalone lines, separated from any descriptive or action phrases. Everything within quotation marks is placed on its own line and is not interwoven with other text.
For example:
David, pressing his hand to his forehead, sighed and spoke.
“Great, another one bites the dust. Was this necessary?”
Thomas responded without glancing in David’s direction.
“Of course. It was necessary.”
……….
I’m currently facing a dilemma: should I continue with this standalone style or switch to the more popular approach that interweaves speech with descriptive or action tags?
In the interwoven style, dialogue is paired with descriptive phrases in the same paragraph or sentence.
For example:
“Great, another one bites the dust,” David said, pressing his hand to his forehead. He glanced at Thomas and asked, “Was this necessary?”
“Of course,” Thomas responded without glancing in David’s direction. “It was necessary.”
………
There’s also a third option: combining the two styles by using descriptive phrases when necessary and leaving the rest as standalone lines.
………
This dilemma stems from a comment I recently remembered, where someone mentioned that the standalone style made it hard for them to tell who was speaking.
Please tell me your thoughts.
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