The Dimensional Trader

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AboutMe01

I know I know. This is my opinion about this story. Bad grammar, wrong pronunciation, etc. I only have one brain and it's already kinda full of junk. If there is a mistake in the story please let me know, I didn't bite too hard Do you know? Using translate is a bit troublesome for me. Sometimes it changes what I write. Or do I need to make two versions? One Indonesian( You can use Google translate to read ) and one English ( My bad grammar). Give your honest opinion

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AboutMe01

New year, new book, and new rating. after rewriting this fic it will be different from the previous one, I prioritize dark themes for this book. If anyone doesn't like violent scenes, selfish, evil MCs, don't read it. just read what you like, this book is not to everyone's liking.

He Was Killed And Died :( .............

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Thehighest_throne2

Good story. At least for now. keep it up [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Murod

this is history has potential , continue !!! [img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую]

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Richo_Febriano

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Pram_Art

ini bapak Budi ini ibu Budi ini kakak Budi ini adek Budi

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Usiel

this is a solid sport to a good author for keeping a cool head and writing dark themed villainous MC. keep up the good work mate.

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Samy_0760

Dukung cerita anak bangsa. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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LordDrugs

Interesting story, without the harem tag it already adds bonus value to the story. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Warhammer100k

The work is interesting, but the background didn't work out so well and the system doesn't understand something that does and so on🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔