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There is too much redundant useless stuff. Reading it feels like it watching a soap opera,, with 2 manu dialog that lead to owhere. 99% of these interactions can be cut down & 70% of the scenes can be cut down, if they are not adding to the plot or a setup for future reveal or funny or cool you don’t need to write them. I am reading onle line from every 5-10 paragraph & am keeping up. That is such a waste... This is good story, start cutting down scenes and dialog to make it a great one
Good for webnovel standards. Alright grammar and update stability. That’s all that’s going for it though. MC has a paper thin personality, zero social skills, and overall an inconsistent character. Could’ve gone without reincarnating him at all to be honest, you just gave him a past life with no emotion or maturity carrying through. Could’ve just made him smart. The teenagers don’t act like teens at all, additional characters added are just paper cutouts. Prose has elements of awkwardness, it reads somewhat like it’s been ran through google translate and edited. Dialogue is complete dogshit though, really bad. Feels like an ai was build to insert another character into a script. Plot doesn’t change much, story is also moving at a snail pace. Overall 4/10 for webnovel standards
Its a really good fic. At start i felt like author was fumbling a bit, but lately every week on this day i wait in anticipation for this to update. I really feel like the characters depth in this fic is on a whole another level. Some of the lines make me like damn was this canon or the author just good?! Highly Recommend if anyone wants a Slice of Life with quiet a bit action and romance in it.
I like how this book is transitioning through different series. But I wish the MC will have more of HOUSE. Want to see how he becomes doctor and get involved with house characters
great fanfic rewrite, it's slow on update but good quality and a cheerful read.
Bueno es bastante equilibrado nose se me hace divertido como avanza la historia tiene un buen desarrollo un poco lenta pero nunca aburrida no tiene lagunas ni nada siempre se rellena
Honestly, at first, I found the interactions between the characters very strange, but I realized that the author did a great job portraying each character's personality. Before I knew it, I was hooked, wanting to read the next one, and luckily, I’m on vacation. [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
Great job on this fanfiction! It’s rare to come across something as original and well-written as your work here. There are times when the pacing feels a bit rushed or the characters come across as a little detached, but overall, the story is captivating and often immersive. I really appreciate the effort you put into crafting this unique story, and I just wanted to thank you for sharing it. Looking forward to seeing where you take it next!
This is more just like a question to the author and everyone in general how do you think Sheldon would introduce or talk about the MC when he’s an adult .
Like your story. I like your MC much more than original MC from DAD. keep going. I would like to support if youd will have advanced chapters somewhere, if you know what I mean)
This is actually a well written fanfic, wish for more. Good job and feed us more. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Mc is a good guy somtimes too good to the point where I feel like he's trying too hard I kind of feel bad for him but I root for him as well
Some scenes are repetitive, though it would've been a little weird without those for transition. Remember, the author is not American, a doctor, a nurse, nor a fighter.
I like the story so far, and as I am reading ch57 there was little bit of romance, but after the cheerleader arc, I see nothing but medical jargon, and story is mostly about doctors and medicine. And don’t get me wrong that the story is good, but if you put romance tag than I expect it a little, but as of ch57 there is no real development. That’s the issue I have, and the medicine stuff makes it heavy. However remember it is just my opinion and that I like that there would be little more romance or drama, like there would be a mix of professional medic stuff and romance and his life. Or remove the tag entirely… In the end it is my personal opinion and preference, I will not drop it but I am a little disheartened.
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this story is AMAIZING!!!!! I was worried that having so many characters from different shows is going to feel forced but its so well done, and all the character feel like they came from their tv show their words their actions everything! Also I love the MC
love the book. please upload the chapters more frequently really love the story can't tell you how much 😁[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=thinking][img=gift][img=gift][img=In your face][img=Unalived][img=Moneybags][img=Moneybags][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=Unalived][img=Out of it][img=Out of it]
Es una gran novela hermano, aunque no voy muy adelantado hice esta portada con mucho cariño, no puse tantos personajes ya que sentí que saturaba mucho así que solo puse a los que considero mas importantes aparte del MC, que son sus padres y el Dr. House, como te digo no voy al día con la novela así que no se si me salte algo, espero que te guste hermano, sigue con el buen trabajo
apsolute masterpiece, the characters feel like they are straight from the shows, there is some real character development and the shows are wery well incoporated i like how some charaters are younger because the plot of their shows happends in the future insted of making the shows happen 20-30 years before they should, it feels wery well thout out and I realy enjoy reading it, please continue and good work[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Great fic, seems to be a translation, but the translator seemingly changed the key parts of the story and made it 10 times better. And for the author. Good job it is highly entertaining.
Thank you for your effort in writing, I hope there is a story about PJ meeting Sean from the good doctor. The book is great so far, but the necessary development takes time. I encourage you to continue updating this wonderful novel.
It is a great novel and it seamlessly blends all the shows together while keeping a pretty enticing narrative, I just hope the author can out out more chapters
A fic that can be slow for some people but I think that it's a good thing for the development of character and ''backstory'' for the future to ''have material to use'' which is a good thing but I also like it if you makes people react like you did with the news paper which gave good reaction and reveal the mc to the world and boost the tempo with futur ''action and drama''.
It is a really nice slice of life. Nothing supernatural. No system or cheat. Just plain hard work and growth. I await more perfection. Although, the upload schedule could use some work, but I can't force ya can I.
Nice story so far, I like it and hope it continues. ♥️🤩♥️🤩♥️🤩🤩♥️🤩♥️♥️♥️🤩♥️🤩🤩♥️🤩♥️♥️🤩🤩♥️🤩♥️🤩♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️🤩🤩♥️♥️🤩🤩🤩🤩😁
So for personal reasons I hadn't had the time or the mood to read anything, but a few days ago I opened the application again and found 20 new chapters, I didn't have much memory of what happened in the story so I started again. I only have one word for this novel, incredible.
Well, I remembered that it's supposed to be my divine duty as an author to write my own review with 5 stars. If I really had to write my own review, I would give myself 3.7 stars. I'm still very much a novice when it comes to writing. I'll likely make repeated mistakes with the personalities of the characters I'll be borrowing for this story, and the situations may be somewhat unbelievable. However, if you're willing to endure that and accompany me as I improve my writing style, welcome.[img=recommend]
There is too much redundant useless stuff. Reading it feels like it watching a soap opera,, with 2 manu dialog that lead to owhere. 99% of these interactions can be cut down & 70% of the scenes can be cut down, if they are not adding to the plot or a setup for future reveal or funny or cool you don’t need to write them. I am reading onle line from every 5-10 paragraph & am keeping up. That is such a waste... This is good story, start cutting down scenes and dialog to make it a great one
Good for webnovel standards. Alright grammar and update stability. That’s all that’s going for it though. MC has a paper thin personality, zero social skills, and overall an inconsistent character. Could’ve gone without reincarnating him at all to be honest, you just gave him a past life with no emotion or maturity carrying through. Could’ve just made him smart. The teenagers don’t act like teens at all, additional characters added are just paper cutouts. Prose has elements of awkwardness, it reads somewhat like it’s been ran through google translate and edited. Dialogue is complete dogshit though, really bad. Feels like an ai was build to insert another character into a script. Plot doesn’t change much, story is also moving at a snail pace. Overall 4/10 for webnovel standards
Its a really good fic. At start i felt like author was fumbling a bit, but lately every week on this day i wait in anticipation for this to update. I really feel like the characters depth in this fic is on a whole another level. Some of the lines make me like damn was this canon or the author just good?! Highly Recommend if anyone wants a Slice of Life with quiet a bit action and romance in it.
I like how this book is transitioning through different series. But I wish the MC will have more of HOUSE. Want to see how he becomes doctor and get involved with house characters
great fanfic rewrite, it's slow on update but good quality and a cheerful read.
Bueno es bastante equilibrado nose se me hace divertido como avanza la historia tiene un buen desarrollo un poco lenta pero nunca aburrida no tiene lagunas ni nada siempre se rellena
Honestly, at first, I found the interactions between the characters very strange, but I realized that the author did a great job portraying each character's personality. Before I knew it, I was hooked, wanting to read the next one, and luckily, I’m on vacation. [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
Great job on this fanfiction! It’s rare to come across something as original and well-written as your work here. There are times when the pacing feels a bit rushed or the characters come across as a little detached, but overall, the story is captivating and often immersive. I really appreciate the effort you put into crafting this unique story, and I just wanted to thank you for sharing it. Looking forward to seeing where you take it next!
This is more just like a question to the author and everyone in general how do you think Sheldon would introduce or talk about the MC when he’s an adult .
Like your story. I like your MC much more than original MC from DAD. keep going. I would like to support if youd will have advanced chapters somewhere, if you know what I mean)
This is actually a well written fanfic, wish for more. Good job and feed us more. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Mc is a good guy somtimes too good to the point where I feel like he's trying too hard I kind of feel bad for him but I root for him as well
Some scenes are repetitive, though it would've been a little weird without those for transition. Remember, the author is not American, a doctor, a nurse, nor a fighter.
I like the story so far, and as I am reading ch57 there was little bit of romance, but after the cheerleader arc, I see nothing but medical jargon, and story is mostly about doctors and medicine. And don’t get me wrong that the story is good, but if you put romance tag than I expect it a little, but as of ch57 there is no real development. That’s the issue I have, and the medicine stuff makes it heavy. However remember it is just my opinion and that I like that there would be little more romance or drama, like there would be a mix of professional medic stuff and romance and his life. Or remove the tag entirely… In the end it is my personal opinion and preference, I will not drop it but I am a little disheartened.
Tiết lộ Spoiler this story is AMAIZING!!!!! I was worried that having so many characters from different shows is going to feel forced but its so well done, and all the character feel like they came from their tv show their words their actions everything! Also I love the MC
love the book. please upload the chapters more frequently really love the story can't tell you how much 😁[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=thinking][img=gift][img=gift][img=In your face][img=Unalived][img=Moneybags][img=Moneybags][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=Unalived][img=Out of it][img=Out of it]
Es una gran novela hermano, aunque no voy muy adelantado hice esta portada con mucho cariño, no puse tantos personajes ya que sentí que saturaba mucho así que solo puse a los que considero mas importantes aparte del MC, que son sus padres y el Dr. House, como te digo no voy al día con la novela así que no se si me salte algo, espero que te guste hermano, sigue con el buen trabajo
apsolute masterpiece, the characters feel like they are straight from the shows, there is some real character development and the shows are wery well incoporated i like how some charaters are younger because the plot of their shows happends in the future insted of making the shows happen 20-30 years before they should, it feels wery well thout out and I realy enjoy reading it, please continue and good work[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Great fic, seems to be a translation, but the translator seemingly changed the key parts of the story and made it 10 times better. And for the author. Good job it is highly entertaining.
Thank you for your effort in writing, I hope there is a story about PJ meeting Sean from the good doctor. The book is great so far, but the necessary development takes time. I encourage you to continue updating this wonderful novel.
It is a great novel and it seamlessly blends all the shows together while keeping a pretty enticing narrative, I just hope the author can out out more chapters
A fic that can be slow for some people but I think that it's a good thing for the development of character and ''backstory'' for the future to ''have material to use'' which is a good thing but I also like it if you makes people react like you did with the news paper which gave good reaction and reveal the mc to the world and boost the tempo with futur ''action and drama''.
It is a really nice slice of life. Nothing supernatural. No system or cheat. Just plain hard work and growth. I await more perfection. Although, the upload schedule could use some work, but I can't force ya can I.
Nice story so far, I like it and hope it continues. ♥️🤩♥️🤩♥️🤩🤩♥️🤩♥️♥️♥️🤩♥️🤩🤩♥️🤩♥️♥️🤩🤩♥️🤩♥️🤩♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️🤩🤩♥️♥️🤩🤩🤩🤩😁
So for personal reasons I hadn't had the time or the mood to read anything, but a few days ago I opened the application again and found 20 new chapters, I didn't have much memory of what happened in the story so I started again. I only have one word for this novel, incredible.
Well, I remembered that it's supposed to be my divine duty as an author to write my own review with 5 stars. If I really had to write my own review, I would give myself 3.7 stars. I'm still very much a novice when it comes to writing. I'll likely make repeated mistakes with the personalities of the characters I'll be borrowing for this story, and the situations may be somewhat unbelievable. However, if you're willing to endure that and accompany me as I improve my writing style, welcome.[img=recommend]