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Was enjoying it themmn had 10 chapters repeat it has been months when are you going to fix this or did you drop it
First time reading a Novel with the premise of 'The behind the scene Plot Armor' of many choosen. The idea is really good, plot armor system is awesome. Stats are easy, simple and straight forward. It's not just a simple increment (as at now, not sure if it will get changed), but it's a qualitative change for every extra points, especially every 5 - 10 points. There are many "goods" in this book but only "bad", for me: That is the very very very slow pacing. Some words or sometimes get repeated a lot. Sometimes I see a couple of paragraphs from the ending of a chapter gets carried over to the next chapter. It's a novel, not tv show where there is "previously on.." If readers want, they can always review previous chapter. This unnecessary wordings also makes many of the chapter have little to no contents. We see explanations for everything which is nice, but the unnecessary prolonged expalnation is tiring, before we know, 2 chapters are gone with little progress. I dont know if I should add this to the "bads" but I feel like I should. There is absolutely no world background as of yet. Maybe little if we talk about the system. There are over 70+ chapter all inside a labyrinth, starting from the beginning ofthe book. Though, interesting but no knowledge about the world makes it too one dimensional. All we know is that earth has awakeners and gates, nothing else. The world background feels so plain. No matter how interesting fights are, character growth is, and so on, it's empty without a proper world background. The writing itself is really good, battle scene description is 👌. But we need more on the World Itself, not focused on just same thing constantly. My review is based on chapter 1 - 80
In these few years I have known him, lightning was great in his life. He always wrote interesting things and from what I have seen of the first two chapters, this one will be even better.
good but I want ....MORE .............................................................................................................................................. .........................................................................
Yeah his other works are great this one is too going to be awesome.(You should read Infinity novels are great)
Obligatory first but anyways lightning is a great writer with several great works under their belt and I'm sure this will be no different. Go get it bud and cheers to a new story.
Since 10 chapters are already out, I’m making this review to basically summarize what this book is about.What would happen if the aspects of an rpg maker game were brought to life? Saving, reruns, freestyle discovery… I wanted to explore this concept with a story that’s a bit more detailed than those basic games, so I wrote this novel. Of course, I didn’t forget to add a little twist to it.I was also always intrigued by the idea of Plot Armor, but it was always too vague and ambiguous for my curiosity. As such, this is also my attempt to make sense of it or… Make it more absurd. You be the judge of that.PS-1: If you like infinity novels like this, do check out my other infinity novel, Only I Am A Reader.PS-2: If you have any non-spoiler questions about this novel, you can leave a comment and I will try to answer them to the best of my ability.
Was enjoying it themmn had 10 chapters repeat it has been months when are you going to fix this or did you drop it
First time reading a Novel with the premise of 'The behind the scene Plot Armor' of many choosen. The idea is really good, plot armor system is awesome. Stats are easy, simple and straight forward. It's not just a simple increment (as at now, not sure if it will get changed), but it's a qualitative change for every extra points, especially every 5 - 10 points. There are many "goods" in this book but only "bad", for me: That is the very very very slow pacing. Some words or sometimes get repeated a lot. Sometimes I see a couple of paragraphs from the ending of a chapter gets carried over to the next chapter. It's a novel, not tv show where there is "previously on.." If readers want, they can always review previous chapter. This unnecessary wordings also makes many of the chapter have little to no contents. We see explanations for everything which is nice, but the unnecessary prolonged expalnation is tiring, before we know, 2 chapters are gone with little progress. I dont know if I should add this to the "bads" but I feel like I should. There is absolutely no world background as of yet. Maybe little if we talk about the system. There are over 70+ chapter all inside a labyrinth, starting from the beginning ofthe book. Though, interesting but no knowledge about the world makes it too one dimensional. All we know is that earth has awakeners and gates, nothing else. The world background feels so plain. No matter how interesting fights are, character growth is, and so on, it's empty without a proper world background. The writing itself is really good, battle scene description is 👌. But we need more on the World Itself, not focused on just same thing constantly. My review is based on chapter 1 - 80
In these few years I have known him, lightning was great in his life. He always wrote interesting things and from what I have seen of the first two chapters, this one will be even better.
good but I want ....MORE .............................................................................................................................................. .........................................................................
Yeah his other works are great this one is too going to be awesome.(You should read Infinity novels are great)
Obligatory first but anyways lightning is a great writer with several great works under their belt and I'm sure this will be no different. Go get it bud and cheers to a new story.
Since 10 chapters are already out, I’m making this review to basically summarize what this book is about.What would happen if the aspects of an rpg maker game were brought to life? Saving, reruns, freestyle discovery… I wanted to explore this concept with a story that’s a bit more detailed than those basic games, so I wrote this novel. Of course, I didn’t forget to add a little twist to it.I was also always intrigued by the idea of Plot Armor, but it was always too vague and ambiguous for my curiosity. As such, this is also my attempt to make sense of it or… Make it more absurd. You be the judge of that.PS-1: If you like infinity novels like this, do check out my other infinity novel, Only I Am A Reader.PS-2: If you have any non-spoiler questions about this novel, you can leave a comment and I will try to answer them to the best of my ability.