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It's a pretty good book. I dont't know why there are so many negative reviews about this book. It's like people can't imagine that the MC can have a different personality than what they imagine to be perfect 🙄. It's too that in one early chapter (I think chapter 2 or 3) the MC can appear to be brash, but it's not because he is an idiot. It's because this MC literally does not care about any consequences, not even death. Overall it's a pretty good GOT fanfic. The original characters stay true to their characters and don't behave too differently from their book counterparts.
Gosto muito dessa história e vou expressar isso no meu idioma. A construção do mundo é muito boa. É bom ter uma danificado que explorem o que há além de westeros e vai bem com a situação do personagem principal… quem tem em aí uma frota e fica fadado a um só litoral? Gosto do desenvolvimento das batalhas e como os personagens se desenvolvem de acordo com perdas e ganhos. Há criatividade em reviravoltas que tem uma lógica razoável. Um dos personagens que mais me impressionam, além do principal ([img=recommend]) foi Edmure Tully. Tantas batalhas é sofrimento transformam qualquer um que tenha a oportunidade de sobreviver a elas, seria pobre esperar menos. A magia até aqui foi equilibrada e sem exageros (nada pior do que um personagem que ganha tudo é todo o poder do mundo, sem nenhum esforço ou preço - isso aí é coisa de MCU). A magia nas Crônicas de Gelo e Fogo sempre cobram um preço. Por favor, autor, não transforme isso em um show de heróis que tiram poder Das Forças Cósmicas - isso é ridículo. O personagem principal não é um herói e não tem super poderes inacreditáveis, mas isso é o melhor da história, fazer o que pode com o que se tem. A história é incrível e realmente agradável de se ler. Desse modo, é aceitável esperar por um capítulo realmente bom. POR FAVOR, NÃO ABANDONE NEM A HISTÓRIA NEM A MIM QUE SOU UM FERVOROSO FÃ 🥺
It's been a long time to see a good, readable, not cringy, and updating regularly fanfiction about asoiaf/got/hotd, great development so far. Keep it up author!
I'm lazy to write a long paragraph just know that this fanfiction is a total masterclass and don't listen to the opinions of stupid people read the first chapters if you don't like bahhhh here it is....(translation)
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LLegue hasta el capitulo 32, nada que decir, es perfecto. Al principio el MC es practicamente el Theon original, ya que su personalidad estan en conflicto, al menos hasta que muere contra Jaime. Al volver a la vida tiene un nuevo proposivo, y tiene mucha evolucion.
Same Mistake The Hero is written in a Shonen Jump style Thousands survive in ways that the writer believes are clever and repeated I don't need to know until after 38 chapter
A mi me gustó este fanfic. Soy hispano y me gusta esto refrescante, además qué es un fanfic que se actualiza periódico. Es cierto que a veces es un poco incongruente y uno espera muchas intrigas pero a veces un personaje así de directo es lo suficientemente bueno para esto. Dale una oportunidad para ver si te gusta ya qué todos tenemos gustos diferentes; no todo es blanco o negro.
This is great GoT fanfic. Didn't have much expectations before starting but the author has surprised me. Very well written and great plot. I really like the portrayal of the characters and the depths you added to them. If the update was regular, that would be just perfect! Really looking forward to to the rest
Started off at 6/10 with an edgy cringe character but it was passable for a while......slowly the story devolved and has become 2/10 lately. I expect it to be dropped soon because it seems the author has lost the inspiration to write. also, Mc just gets more cringe as it progresses so don't expect it to get better. #SUPER-MEGA-ULTRA-BETA-MC
Achei muito foda, theon é um personagem muito carismatico e muito bem trabalhado o desenvolvimento dele foi muito bom, gosto de como a história esta indo, até agr já achei essa a melhor fanfic de game of thrones
muy buen fan fic de got me gusta como manejarte la personalidad del MC y como interactua con las demás personas jajaja además de que nunca pierde de vista su objetivo, y es genial que se actualice tan seguido,
one of the best GOT fanfic I've read even though I'm a free reader , the world background is good , not hard to read , excellent updates . keep it up author 👍
Great Fan Fic. now that most got fics are down this one is a breath of fresh air. great story characters and development just wish for more lemons cuz.
A story about Theon Gerjoy Heir to the Iron Islands Feels like a new person Shrewd and strong personality He has many battles and all of them are difficult and bloody And the chances of winning it are low
Es increíble como tienes la historia y la escritura me gusta mucho el estilo y por parte de las actualizaciones de los capítulos no me quejo. Pero por parte del personaje que sea inmortal viviente osea prácticamente es como un vampiro por que no se les escucha su corazón y no puede dormir y ahora la comida no le sabe nada. Pues si es la única parte que no me gusto.. Pero si me gusto que cadaves que muere se le valla olvidando cosas. Al principio también me gusto el trasfondo del persona. Sigue por favor no valla abandonar la historia
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MC is an idiot edgy mf , who is only alive because the author is saying so , i couldn’t read past chapter 8 because of his personality , dude has no self control , he says whatever comes to his mind like an idiot and is living life on easy mod rn , the fact he wasn’t executed or assassinated yet baffles me
Muy buenas historia el personaje tiene un estilo me que musto de personalidad pero no me gusto en la parte que no puede dormir. Pero tienes una historia muy buena
This a very low quality fanfic written by a author who doesn't rally seem to understand the essence of GOT. The MC is an idiot with a very rash mouth and mental problems. almost all his actions are stupid and he is only saved because of the plot armor. He also has a very a problematic mouth and he talks whatever nonsense comes to his mouth. If this was the real GOT or if it was written by a skilled author, idiots like this MC with loose mouth will be the first to die. after all, words coming out of a persons mouth are so important in GOT that even a dwarf like Tyrion became an MC solely based on his words and the same goes for the Onion knight. One thing the author got right is the Theon's character from tv series - He is an idiot in both the TV series and this fanfic.
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This is what I've been waiting for. Grammer is good, characters are good and the world is good. give it a shot.
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Read this story ok fanfiction One of the few I actually liked(though still updating there) Seems you have moved to webnovel
Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?
It's a pretty good book. I dont't know why there are so many negative reviews about this book. It's like people can't imagine that the MC can have a different personality than what they imagine to be perfect 🙄. It's too that in one early chapter (I think chapter 2 or 3) the MC can appear to be brash, but it's not because he is an idiot. It's because this MC literally does not care about any consequences, not even death. Overall it's a pretty good GOT fanfic. The original characters stay true to their characters and don't behave too differently from their book counterparts.
Gosto muito dessa história e vou expressar isso no meu idioma. A construção do mundo é muito boa. É bom ter uma danificado que explorem o que há além de westeros e vai bem com a situação do personagem principal… quem tem em aí uma frota e fica fadado a um só litoral? Gosto do desenvolvimento das batalhas e como os personagens se desenvolvem de acordo com perdas e ganhos. Há criatividade em reviravoltas que tem uma lógica razoável. Um dos personagens que mais me impressionam, além do principal ([img=recommend]) foi Edmure Tully. Tantas batalhas é sofrimento transformam qualquer um que tenha a oportunidade de sobreviver a elas, seria pobre esperar menos. A magia até aqui foi equilibrada e sem exageros (nada pior do que um personagem que ganha tudo é todo o poder do mundo, sem nenhum esforço ou preço - isso aí é coisa de MCU). A magia nas Crônicas de Gelo e Fogo sempre cobram um preço. Por favor, autor, não transforme isso em um show de heróis que tiram poder Das Forças Cósmicas - isso é ridículo. O personagem principal não é um herói e não tem super poderes inacreditáveis, mas isso é o melhor da história, fazer o que pode com o que se tem. A história é incrível e realmente agradável de se ler. Desse modo, é aceitável esperar por um capítulo realmente bom. POR FAVOR, NÃO ABANDONE NEM A HISTÓRIA NEM A MIM QUE SOU UM FERVOROSO FÃ 🥺
It's been a long time to see a good, readable, not cringy, and updating regularly fanfiction about asoiaf/got/hotd, great development so far. Keep it up author!
I'm lazy to write a long paragraph just know that this fanfiction is a total masterclass and don't listen to the opinions of stupid people read the first chapters if you don't like bahhhh here it is....(translation)
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
LLegue hasta el capitulo 32, nada que decir, es perfecto. Al principio el MC es practicamente el Theon original, ya que su personalidad estan en conflicto, al menos hasta que muere contra Jaime. Al volver a la vida tiene un nuevo proposivo, y tiene mucha evolucion.
Same Mistake The Hero is written in a Shonen Jump style Thousands survive in ways that the writer believes are clever and repeated I don't need to know until after 38 chapter
A mi me gustó este fanfic. Soy hispano y me gusta esto refrescante, además qué es un fanfic que se actualiza periódico. Es cierto que a veces es un poco incongruente y uno espera muchas intrigas pero a veces un personaje así de directo es lo suficientemente bueno para esto. Dale una oportunidad para ver si te gusta ya qué todos tenemos gustos diferentes; no todo es blanco o negro.
This is great GoT fanfic. Didn't have much expectations before starting but the author has surprised me. Very well written and great plot. I really like the portrayal of the characters and the depths you added to them. If the update was regular, that would be just perfect! Really looking forward to to the rest
Started off at 6/10 with an edgy cringe character but it was passable for a while......slowly the story devolved and has become 2/10 lately. I expect it to be dropped soon because it seems the author has lost the inspiration to write. also, Mc just gets more cringe as it progresses so don't expect it to get better. #SUPER-MEGA-ULTRA-BETA-MC
Achei muito foda, theon é um personagem muito carismatico e muito bem trabalhado o desenvolvimento dele foi muito bom, gosto de como a história esta indo, até agr já achei essa a melhor fanfic de game of thrones
muy buen fan fic de got me gusta como manejarte la personalidad del MC y como interactua con las demás personas jajaja además de que nunca pierde de vista su objetivo, y es genial que se actualice tan seguido,
one of the best GOT fanfic I've read even though I'm a free reader , the world background is good , not hard to read , excellent updates . keep it up author 👍
Great Fan Fic. now that most got fics are down this one is a breath of fresh air. great story characters and development just wish for more lemons cuz.
A story about Theon Gerjoy Heir to the Iron Islands Feels like a new person Shrewd and strong personality He has many battles and all of them are difficult and bloody And the chances of winning it are low
Es increíble como tienes la historia y la escritura me gusta mucho el estilo y por parte de las actualizaciones de los capítulos no me quejo. Pero por parte del personaje que sea inmortal viviente osea prácticamente es como un vampiro por que no se les escucha su corazón y no puede dormir y ahora la comida no le sabe nada. Pues si es la única parte que no me gusto.. Pero si me gusto que cadaves que muere se le valla olvidando cosas. Al principio también me gusto el trasfondo del persona. Sigue por favor no valla abandonar la historia
this is fucking good,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
great story , thanks author![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] please keep writing [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
MC is an idiot edgy mf , who is only alive because the author is saying so , i couldn’t read past chapter 8 because of his personality , dude has no self control , he says whatever comes to his mind like an idiot and is living life on easy mod rn , the fact he wasn’t executed or assassinated yet baffles me
Muy buenas historia el personaje tiene un estilo me que musto de personalidad pero no me gusto en la parte que no puede dormir. Pero tienes una historia muy buena
This a very low quality fanfic written by a author who doesn't rally seem to understand the essence of GOT. The MC is an idiot with a very rash mouth and mental problems. almost all his actions are stupid and he is only saved because of the plot armor. He also has a very a problematic mouth and he talks whatever nonsense comes to his mouth. If this was the real GOT or if it was written by a skilled author, idiots like this MC with loose mouth will be the first to die. after all, words coming out of a persons mouth are so important in GOT that even a dwarf like Tyrion became an MC solely based on his words and the same goes for the Onion knight. One thing the author got right is the Theon's character from tv series - He is an idiot in both the TV series and this fanfic.
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This is what I've been waiting for. Grammer is good, characters are good and the world is good. give it a shot.
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Read this story ok fanfiction One of the few I actually liked(though still updating there) Seems you have moved to webnovel
Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?