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i rather if its was haley love interest is their any fanfic mc and haley become couple?
This is a good story if you want to read the modern family TV show but with a new character. Becuase that's what this basically is. The MC seems more of a cast member than he does a reincarnator. He hasn't really changed anything. He hasn't really used the skills he has gotten from the Gacha to wow anyone or change anything. He has used his amazing cooking skills to only really bake a cake. His super genius intelligence has only been used for homework. I mean, he has Reed Richards IQ yet he hasn't invented anything or done anything that showed he is that intelligent. At least as of chapter 27. who knows maybe I missed something but I doubt I did. Now, the story is not bad. But for me at least it's not that good. It's very slice of life so just letting you know. Since its hard to tell how much slice of life a story has when it has that tag. Unfortunately, I'm not a big fan of hard-core slice of lives. Because they tend to be slow and boring, and for me this was a bit slow and boring.
There’s no new post so why read it.Pay to read sights are good for say top30% or higher but as much as I would want to make great authors most won’t even get close (even me)I can build you a great world can’t do dialogue.So if just love writing do put it out there for everyone to see!But for the love of god until you have a great idea/book just let us read the &&^%$thing
This I quite literally a self insert like the mc is barely in the story it's just og show with slight changes and not enough to care about or want to read even if modern family
this is a fantastic story the characters are good and not over powered or underdeveloped and I hope he gets back to it, it would be a shame for such a good story to go unfinished.
Well, my reviews never go below three stars, partly because I'm a writer and I know that writing is a complex job, but I really don't understand what the author thought when he wrote this, was he drunk? Or did he just think of copying the series to letters with just adding a SECONDARY character, because yes, the MC is practically that, it's even embarrassing to read it, the canon doesn't change anything, its dialogues are few and very bad, I would even think that the MC is only there to make us read about the characters of Modern Family.
A pure joke, it's shameful to deliver such content, it's just the story of the series, with an additional useless character because nothing changes
i like it very much like how the author did't change much about the whole story but still kept it interesting and how the MC is not using his skills like to hack the government military codes and stuff like that overall i like it but more chapters would be good because i don't have anything to do and binge read alll the chapters ..................................................................................................................................................
it's a gacha that never gets used. there are entire chapters where the main character is just not involved should just watch the show it would be the same .
Ok, so I don't normally write very many reviews but i felt like there needed to be something said. The author clearly has zero thoughts other than the basic plot of the story of modern family. He has very few inserts of the actual MC, its like he gets all these gifts from the gacha but doesn't know what to do with them. The grammar is terrible, tons of he/she mix ups, miss spellings and poor word choice (Reads like it was machine translated) The story development is also terrible, if you hadn't watched the show half the time you seriously can't infer what is going on in the story, it also cuts out all over the place when you expect more development. This coincides with the world background, without the show, there is none. So watch the show side by side while reading to really get a sense of what's going on. The MC is the least fleshed out character of the whole story.
Writing and grammar are okay-ish, the rest isn't. If you are capable of turning off your brain and read, then by all means proceed, otherwise - it's a waste of time.
I used to Really like it, the story is good, gramma is fine, good MC. the problem, which I hate, is that the chapters are not full chapters. so it just jumpsuit over alot, and it clearly cuts off important Bits. it's a story with a gacha, but we don't know when he rolls, and just randomly has 2 new gachas (around chapter 60)... that we only know the name off. if anyone has a reason why the chapters are cut in half, please tell me, but in the meantime I'm gonna drop it.
Is the plan for him to be pro soccer player cause in early chapters that what I assumed and was looking forward to it but there has been almost nothing about it?
😁😁😁😁😁😁🤗👍👍👍👍✔️✔️✔️👍👍👍👍👍🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗.........................................................................................................................................................................................
It’s a good story if you just want something to pass the time. The system he has doesn’t really come into play and the way the MC acts makes him seem like an OC just put in the story and not someone reincarnated
Awesome this is one of my favourite modern family stories ever and it’s written so well that it makes me want to reread it all over again fantastic
If you ever wonder if the MC use his otherworldy gacha rewards, I will tell you its no use at all, his gacha system is for show only. Better the title of this ifc was "Self Insert in Moder Family", not "Modern family Gacha".
Congratulations on the chapter, I look forward to more ..............................................................................................................
Some of these scenes and ideas are so similar to this other modern family fanfic with 100 chapters. Something is very suspicious here...
An enjoyable read and the concept is good, but it has no direction every chapter is a standalone story and the MC is totally shadowed by the silly dramas of the original show, I just wish to see the side of the MC actually developing his gifts and balancing and blending the show with his original story
I don't like how he a cool boy date Alex and stories seems incomplete in last parts even if you don't know what happened after that scene show some imagination
awesome but abandoned !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i rather if its was haley love interest is their any fanfic mc and haley become couple?
This is a good story if you want to read the modern family TV show but with a new character. Becuase that's what this basically is. The MC seems more of a cast member than he does a reincarnator. He hasn't really changed anything. He hasn't really used the skills he has gotten from the Gacha to wow anyone or change anything. He has used his amazing cooking skills to only really bake a cake. His super genius intelligence has only been used for homework. I mean, he has Reed Richards IQ yet he hasn't invented anything or done anything that showed he is that intelligent. At least as of chapter 27. who knows maybe I missed something but I doubt I did. Now, the story is not bad. But for me at least it's not that good. It's very slice of life so just letting you know. Since its hard to tell how much slice of life a story has when it has that tag. Unfortunately, I'm not a big fan of hard-core slice of lives. Because they tend to be slow and boring, and for me this was a bit slow and boring.
There’s no new post so why read it.Pay to read sights are good for say top30% or higher but as much as I would want to make great authors most won’t even get close (even me)I can build you a great world can’t do dialogue.So if just love writing do put it out there for everyone to see!But for the love of god until you have a great idea/book just let us read the &&^%$thing
This I quite literally a self insert like the mc is barely in the story it's just og show with slight changes and not enough to care about or want to read even if modern family
this is a fantastic story the characters are good and not over powered or underdeveloped and I hope he gets back to it, it would be a shame for such a good story to go unfinished.
Well, my reviews never go below three stars, partly because I'm a writer and I know that writing is a complex job, but I really don't understand what the author thought when he wrote this, was he drunk? Or did he just think of copying the series to letters with just adding a SECONDARY character, because yes, the MC is practically that, it's even embarrassing to read it, the canon doesn't change anything, its dialogues are few and very bad, I would even think that the MC is only there to make us read about the characters of Modern Family.
A pure joke, it's shameful to deliver such content, it's just the story of the series, with an additional useless character because nothing changes
i like it very much like how the author did't change much about the whole story but still kept it interesting and how the MC is not using his skills like to hack the government military codes and stuff like that overall i like it but more chapters would be good because i don't have anything to do and binge read alll the chapters ..................................................................................................................................................
it's a gacha that never gets used. there are entire chapters where the main character is just not involved should just watch the show it would be the same .
Ok, so I don't normally write very many reviews but i felt like there needed to be something said. The author clearly has zero thoughts other than the basic plot of the story of modern family. He has very few inserts of the actual MC, its like he gets all these gifts from the gacha but doesn't know what to do with them. The grammar is terrible, tons of he/she mix ups, miss spellings and poor word choice (Reads like it was machine translated) The story development is also terrible, if you hadn't watched the show half the time you seriously can't infer what is going on in the story, it also cuts out all over the place when you expect more development. This coincides with the world background, without the show, there is none. So watch the show side by side while reading to really get a sense of what's going on. The MC is the least fleshed out character of the whole story.
Writing and grammar are okay-ish, the rest isn't. If you are capable of turning off your brain and read, then by all means proceed, otherwise - it's a waste of time.
I used to Really like it, the story is good, gramma is fine, good MC. the problem, which I hate, is that the chapters are not full chapters. so it just jumpsuit over alot, and it clearly cuts off important Bits. it's a story with a gacha, but we don't know when he rolls, and just randomly has 2 new gachas (around chapter 60)... that we only know the name off. if anyone has a reason why the chapters are cut in half, please tell me, but in the meantime I'm gonna drop it.
Is the plan for him to be pro soccer player cause in early chapters that what I assumed and was looking forward to it but there has been almost nothing about it?
😁😁😁😁😁😁🤗👍👍👍👍✔️✔️✔️👍👍👍👍👍🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗.........................................................................................................................................................................................
It’s a good story if you just want something to pass the time. The system he has doesn’t really come into play and the way the MC acts makes him seem like an OC just put in the story and not someone reincarnated
Awesome this is one of my favourite modern family stories ever and it’s written so well that it makes me want to reread it all over again fantastic
If you ever wonder if the MC use his otherworldy gacha rewards, I will tell you its no use at all, his gacha system is for show only. Better the title of this ifc was "Self Insert in Moder Family", not "Modern family Gacha".
Congratulations on the chapter, I look forward to more ..............................................................................................................
Some of these scenes and ideas are so similar to this other modern family fanfic with 100 chapters. Something is very suspicious here...
An enjoyable read and the concept is good, but it has no direction every chapter is a standalone story and the MC is totally shadowed by the silly dramas of the original show, I just wish to see the side of the MC actually developing his gifts and balancing and blending the show with his original story
I don't like how he a cool boy date Alex and stories seems incomplete in last parts even if you don't know what happened after that scene show some imagination
awesome but abandoned !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!