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it's so annoying when I read n/y or y/n... fk it. it broke the reading immersion ...
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Pretty good story so far Not much to say outher than that Tho i will say mc needs a pet a mascot if you will how about a snake or cat eather could sit on his sholders well the snake would coil around him and the cat would sit on his sholder lol Name the snake slithy or something idk about the cat lol
I gotta do it since I created the story.So first I'm a new writer still learning, second the MC is both a Y/N and has proper name Neo Sekai, this is a harem story. Also the MC is on the 'duller' side but I did explicitly show that he is closed off and started showing him slowly opening up since I find most books have the same pervert or extrovert personality.
interesting story and concept for it, you have her dear Author, i will give this story of yours a chance.
it's so annoying when I read n/y or y/n... fk it. it broke the reading immersion ...
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Pretty good story so far Not much to say outher than that Tho i will say mc needs a pet a mascot if you will how about a snake or cat eather could sit on his sholders well the snake would coil around him and the cat would sit on his sholder lol Name the snake slithy or something idk about the cat lol
I gotta do it since I created the story.So first I'm a new writer still learning, second the MC is both a Y/N and has proper name Neo Sekai, this is a harem story. Also the MC is on the 'duller' side but I did explicitly show that he is closed off and started showing him slowly opening up since I find most books have the same pervert or extrovert personality.
interesting story and concept for it, you have her dear Author, i will give this story of yours a chance.