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Viết đánh giáa simple story. a girl who had an amazing talent and a genius. a simple lesson it is always good to be a low profile than to show case and being arrogant that sometimes it would be a face slap to yourself. that no matter what there is always a person who is better than you. thank you author for this simple and good story if your book.
I am in love with the book. I enjoy how well diverse and strong the FL is. Her interactions with the ML are to sweet but she is able to stand on her own. Please more updates !!!!!!!! I can’t wait
So far it’s really good and I’m enjoying reading this novel. Please keep updating and continue the story. I’m still waiting!!!
I feel the romance is too fast, she just got back to her real family so author should of allowed her to feel real family love but instead day 3 she taken away everyday by a fiancée. He doesn’t listen to her boundaries and just pushes through but is sickly sweet and she doesn’t seem to be majorly against some of it. Mostly I don’t like the depiction that the family is just there for money
i like this novel I just hope it won't turn way ward like most of the novel I read that it's start with a nice story but halfway it turn into something not so really interesting anymore
another novel where the FL is a GOD in human form, there's nothing that she can't do and the story doesn't properly provide us any knowledge as to how the girls were mixed up and apparently there are 3 girls in the mix not 2 according to the synopsis ... and many more plot holes .... read at ur own mental strength.... dropped it after 17 chapters since it's a repeated novel story...
I've read this exact story but with different title and different characters but the story is same......
the book starts going really well until the romance with the male lead in female lead starts taking off. there's all these subtle signs that he's some sort of dominant person and he likes her to be a sweet little submissive thing. it's freaking gross. he buys her a bunch of cakes and milks. she said she doesn't like him. he forces her to drink the milk. he goes to our family home to break off the engagement with her stupid sister. he finds out she's really engaged to him. he insists on inserting himself into her life and referred to as his fiance even though she never agreed to it. and in the Arthur starts writing her from this point as being obedient and just going along with the flow. even though she is a super genius and super wealthy and a miracle doctor and God knows what else. we know all these things about her but suddenly she's super submissive and obedient. and one chapter she falls asleep on his shoulder and he strokes and touches her face thinking about how submissive she is. the other literally uses the word submissive like a compliment. and that is what has turned me off completely to the novel. yesterday you become some kind of weird dominant submissive dynamic disguised as a doting older fiance in it girl who may I remind everybody has barely turned 18. but we're supposed to forget about all of that. it makes no freaking sense. I feel like suddenly hurt personality has changed. it would have been more realistic if she said her parents or him I never agreed to this engagement and I don't plan on getting married or something. I hate when stories write something with potentially strong female leads and then suddenly the male lead comes along and it's all about being obedient and spreading your legs and forgetting the powerful background and characteristics the author literally wrote you as. so after four or five chapters of how submissive and obedient she is because now suddenly the male leads works for the underworld and in business and is Uber powerful and is the richest man ever she's just a sweet obedient little girl. also this is inconsistent because in the beginning of the novel they say her dad is like the richest man in the continent but now suddenly the sky is the richest man in the world. but seriously the moment the author starts writing her as being obedient and submissive and not actually sticking up for herself around the male lead instead of being flirty and donating it just comes off as slimy and now the book I voted for and spent some coins on the pre-read has become a book that I really don't like anymore and I don't want to support. but that's just my opinion. you may be into that
Tiết lộ SpoilerA plot with an independent and powerful female-lead whose story is separate from her relationship with the male-lead. Like she lives her own life and is able to figure things out on her own without the help of her partner!! The Male-lead also seems like a healthy partner who treats the female-lead like an equal, not a possession.
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Tiết lộ SpoilerThe story has just begun and I like the twist of plot and leads personalities . Hope to read more.
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MTLNovelAfter Retiring the Engagement, Master Si Chased His Wife To the Crematorium! (Turns Out, I'm from a Real Aristocratic Family!) the raw
I can't bring myself to imagine reading a stupid character name Fang yuan 🤮🤮🤮😫😫😫. it Just a disgrace to the name FANG YUAN
This story has already been put on trial read with a different name and characters with different names i have seen the raw already
a simple story. a girl who had an amazing talent and a genius. a simple lesson it is always good to be a low profile than to show case and being arrogant that sometimes it would be a face slap to yourself. that no matter what there is always a person who is better than you. thank you author for this simple and good story if your book.
I am in love with the book. I enjoy how well diverse and strong the FL is. Her interactions with the ML are to sweet but she is able to stand on her own. Please more updates !!!!!!!! I can’t wait
So far it’s really good and I’m enjoying reading this novel. Please keep updating and continue the story. I’m still waiting!!!
I feel the romance is too fast, she just got back to her real family so author should of allowed her to feel real family love but instead day 3 she taken away everyday by a fiancée. He doesn’t listen to her boundaries and just pushes through but is sickly sweet and she doesn’t seem to be majorly against some of it. Mostly I don’t like the depiction that the family is just there for money
i like this novel I just hope it won't turn way ward like most of the novel I read that it's start with a nice story but halfway it turn into something not so really interesting anymore
another novel where the FL is a GOD in human form, there's nothing that she can't do and the story doesn't properly provide us any knowledge as to how the girls were mixed up and apparently there are 3 girls in the mix not 2 according to the synopsis ... and many more plot holes .... read at ur own mental strength.... dropped it after 17 chapters since it's a repeated novel story...
I've read this exact story but with different title and different characters but the story is same......
the book starts going really well until the romance with the male lead in female lead starts taking off. there's all these subtle signs that he's some sort of dominant person and he likes her to be a sweet little submissive thing. it's freaking gross. he buys her a bunch of cakes and milks. she said she doesn't like him. he forces her to drink the milk. he goes to our family home to break off the engagement with her stupid sister. he finds out she's really engaged to him. he insists on inserting himself into her life and referred to as his fiance even though she never agreed to it. and in the Arthur starts writing her from this point as being obedient and just going along with the flow. even though she is a super genius and super wealthy and a miracle doctor and God knows what else. we know all these things about her but suddenly she's super submissive and obedient. and one chapter she falls asleep on his shoulder and he strokes and touches her face thinking about how submissive she is. the other literally uses the word submissive like a compliment. and that is what has turned me off completely to the novel. yesterday you become some kind of weird dominant submissive dynamic disguised as a doting older fiance in it girl who may I remind everybody has barely turned 18. but we're supposed to forget about all of that. it makes no freaking sense. I feel like suddenly hurt personality has changed. it would have been more realistic if she said her parents or him I never agreed to this engagement and I don't plan on getting married or something. I hate when stories write something with potentially strong female leads and then suddenly the male lead comes along and it's all about being obedient and spreading your legs and forgetting the powerful background and characteristics the author literally wrote you as. so after four or five chapters of how submissive and obedient she is because now suddenly the male leads works for the underworld and in business and is Uber powerful and is the richest man ever she's just a sweet obedient little girl. also this is inconsistent because in the beginning of the novel they say her dad is like the richest man in the continent but now suddenly the sky is the richest man in the world. but seriously the moment the author starts writing her as being obedient and submissive and not actually sticking up for herself around the male lead instead of being flirty and donating it just comes off as slimy and now the book I voted for and spent some coins on the pre-read has become a book that I really don't like anymore and I don't want to support. but that's just my opinion. you may be into that
Tiết lộ SpoilerA plot with an independent and powerful female-lead whose story is separate from her relationship with the male-lead. Like she lives her own life and is able to figure things out on her own without the help of her partner!! The Male-lead also seems like a healthy partner who treats the female-lead like an equal, not a possession.
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Tiết lộ SpoilerThe story has just begun and I like the twist of plot and leads personalities . Hope to read more.
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MTLNovelAfter Retiring the Engagement, Master Si Chased His Wife To the Crematorium! (Turns Out, I'm from a Real Aristocratic Family!) the raw
I can't bring myself to imagine reading a stupid character name Fang yuan 🤮🤮🤮😫😫😫. it Just a disgrace to the name FANG YUAN
This story has already been put on trial read with a different name and characters with different names i have seen the raw already
It's a short but interesting story 😎 I like FL character the most 😜😜