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I will do the honor of giving your tenth review! :D With the sudden awakening of a system and a compelling call to fight for supremacy, readers are propelled into an enthralling narrative that promises exhilarating battles and a quest for dominance. The story delivers an immersive experience, blending elements of fantasy, action, and self-discovery, leaving readers eagerly anticipating Trace's thrilling journey through the universe of Earth. Highly Recommended!!!
The concept of the main character being reincarnated as a goblin is something that I encountered before. But the addition of the system is something new that catches my interest to read this book. Also, the plotline of the story and the way it was written is really interesting. It was very intriguing on how the main character will reach the apex of his potential. I'm looking out for this book so keep uploading more chapters, Author.
The author is a superb narrator that writes like a seasoned expert. The concept is original and compelling as well as the foreshadowing and the way the author paints the scene. There is no purple prose. nor is the author bland. The author isn't overly-descriptive, but they describe things from the main character's standpoint. I actually love this hidden gem and I know it will go far.
The language is outstanding with vivid descriptions that paints the world for you. There are also lots of unexpected events as you read on. What I also liked about it is that the story isn’t cliche, and the characters are well defined. You’d want to keep on reading to find out more about the world. Looking forward to more chapters!
I'm a lurker. I NEVER write reviews. The writing's really good - I'd say it's in the upper 20-30% of all output here on WN. It's not without hiccups here and there (things being capitalized that shouldn't, for instance), but those hiccups barely detract at all from the content itself, and they're nothing a thorough proofreading and editing session can't fix. PS - this wouldn't happen to have been based on the novels 'Defiance of the Fall' and 'The Primal Hunter', would it?
I liked this writing style. It's simple and easy to follow. The opening scene is interesting, which grasps one's interest. The author did a very good job in balancing the dialogue and description. The character design is good, the world background is nicely explained. Keep up the good work author
Well this Novel is just unique The caracter developement so far is very good i just hope that the release will continue and not stop and be consitant very good Novel i recommend it strongly
Overall, the story is good and so far it's interesting. The writing quality is also good and the character designing and development is also going smoothly. The author did a good job in giving descriptions about world background and I enjoyed reading this novel. Keep up the good work author
Writing is very good and grammar is on point. The MC and his progression has been described really good. The story is full of action. I will like to recommend it to anyone who likes system stories.
Overall, I found this work to be engaging and promising. The writing quality is commendable, with good attention to grammar and consistent updates. The characters are well-described and intriguing, drawing readers into their world. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to seeing how the story evolves!
it's nice. plenty of small grammar mistakes but still pleasant to read. It sometimes feels unrefined, like it was not proofread and there are some loopholes. but I'm a sucker for a good system, reincarnation story so I would definitely recommend it and I hope you will continue to upload
I will do the honor of giving your tenth review! :D With the sudden awakening of a system and a compelling call to fight for supremacy, readers are propelled into an enthralling narrative that promises exhilarating battles and a quest for dominance. The story delivers an immersive experience, blending elements of fantasy, action, and self-discovery, leaving readers eagerly anticipating Trace's thrilling journey through the universe of Earth. Highly Recommended!!!
The concept of the main character being reincarnated as a goblin is something that I encountered before. But the addition of the system is something new that catches my interest to read this book. Also, the plotline of the story and the way it was written is really interesting. It was very intriguing on how the main character will reach the apex of his potential. I'm looking out for this book so keep uploading more chapters, Author.
The author is a superb narrator that writes like a seasoned expert. The concept is original and compelling as well as the foreshadowing and the way the author paints the scene. There is no purple prose. nor is the author bland. The author isn't overly-descriptive, but they describe things from the main character's standpoint. I actually love this hidden gem and I know it will go far.
The language is outstanding with vivid descriptions that paints the world for you. There are also lots of unexpected events as you read on. What I also liked about it is that the story isn’t cliche, and the characters are well defined. You’d want to keep on reading to find out more about the world. Looking forward to more chapters!
I'm a lurker. I NEVER write reviews. The writing's really good - I'd say it's in the upper 20-30% of all output here on WN. It's not without hiccups here and there (things being capitalized that shouldn't, for instance), but those hiccups barely detract at all from the content itself, and they're nothing a thorough proofreading and editing session can't fix. PS - this wouldn't happen to have been based on the novels 'Defiance of the Fall' and 'The Primal Hunter', would it?
I liked this writing style. It's simple and easy to follow. The opening scene is interesting, which grasps one's interest. The author did a very good job in balancing the dialogue and description. The character design is good, the world background is nicely explained. Keep up the good work author
Well this Novel is just unique The caracter developement so far is very good i just hope that the release will continue and not stop and be consitant very good Novel i recommend it strongly
Overall, the story is good and so far it's interesting. The writing quality is also good and the character designing and development is also going smoothly. The author did a good job in giving descriptions about world background and I enjoyed reading this novel. Keep up the good work author
Writing is very good and grammar is on point. The MC and his progression has been described really good. The story is full of action. I will like to recommend it to anyone who likes system stories.
Overall, I found this work to be engaging and promising. The writing quality is commendable, with good attention to grammar and consistent updates. The characters are well-described and intriguing, drawing readers into their world. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to seeing how the story evolves!
it's nice. plenty of small grammar mistakes but still pleasant to read. It sometimes feels unrefined, like it was not proofread and there are some loopholes. but I'm a sucker for a good system, reincarnation story so I would definitely recommend it and I hope you will continue to upload