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I donated my body to science. Well, not yet. But someday. I like to think about future med students finding my remains and going, ‘Wow, this guy lived a rough life.’ Then I’ll haunt them for being so judgmental. And if they really want to learn, I’ll make sure they experience a real heart attack—ghost style. I forgot to write a review for this lol and don't remember to do it justice. So here my shower thought for you guys.
thank you so much, I really thought you were quite writing this story. I really hope you keep writing this story because i really love this story.
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Started off very good and then became dumb. How can someone be a Jonin strength kenjutsu master just by learning kenjutsu techniques from kushina from a couple of months? My god the SI is already overpowered cheat with his chakra and shadows and you want him to be A master of everything? Also a seal master and can apparently create undetectable listening seals or producing a remote heal seal. You expect me to believe the kage level ninja throughout the history of the great sage couldn’t figure it out but a guy who sleeps all day? Just do a rewrite and make everything more believable. Stop making the SI able to do everything under the sun. Like I just want him to get humbled once. 22 chapters in we haven’t seen him lost a fight full strength. No way his semi sentient shadows protect him from genjutsu. Everone has a counter. Why can’t he be humbled by a kumo guy who does the solar flare technique?
tengo una pregunta que puede ser tonta pero lo are, es hombre o mujer, porque hay partes en donde le dicen hija y en otras un muchacho.....?¡?¡? voy recien por el cap6 y me estoy mareando
It was very nice to read this story. The presentation was fascinating and exciting, creating interest and a desire to continue reading. However, I noticed some problems in the detail and saturation of events. Sometimes it was difficult to imagine certain moments and visualize what was happening. A more detailed description of events and characters could enhance the reader's engagement and make the story even more memorable. However, this does not negate the fact that the story has its strengths. The author was able to create an interesting character and develop it throughout the story. The pitch was quite colorful and attractive, which added an additional appeal to it.
Just read it and loved the story, it is a brand new AU with well thought out plot lines and I can't wait to see where it goes.
A very good and satisfying story. From what I understand, this is a bit of experiment by the author, as most of the story is from pov of people around mc. What i found really fresh was looking at the reincarnated mc from other's pov during his early years. This is a variation from the usual storytelling where mc reincarnates and discovers golden fingers which will allow him to ultimately become op/almost op, from his own pov. I hope i can continue to read authors work for a long time.
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I don't usually write reviews since im too lazy to write it but this is by far the best naruto fanfic i've ever read, the writing is so good and the author portrays each character really well, the background and character development was done beautifully... All in all this is a 10/10 for meKeep up the good work author! ^^You may now Applaud! 👏👏👏
Where to start? Usually when stories are from many perspectives, they become repetitive of same scene or just plain boring fillers. But author here has done something that all other similar work should incorporate. all different povs still focuses the mc, its like how others see him instead of a whole derailed plot of the other characters. although the first person perspective can be confusing sometimes, but at the end the story is just wholesome. I dont know how many times i have smiled reading till chapter 29, he even has Kabuto as a good guy and someone who might become a brother like best friend to main character. honestly i hope the story continues as such. best wishes author.
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Its one of the best novel i have ever read.The mc doesnt treat anyone like they are just a character. there many povs of defferent person i usually get confuse by who is speaking or get board easly but in this novel i dont i smiled the intertime j was reading
Good one...but upload moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee3eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee3eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee and frequentlyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
just one word "AWESOME".[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Tremenda obra de maestra, me encanta 100/10 [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
It's good and has a lot of potential. I think everything is going very smooth it just needs a little tragedy and it will be perfect. Over all it has the best writing quality of any novels I recently read. Keep it up
Hasta el momento es una increíble obra... espero que continúes con el gran trabajo!!!!👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Everything thing is perfect, it feels nice finding a good fic when all I've been seeing are harem stories with bad English. All the best Author-san.👍🏽 Btw i also read your main book and its also really nice.
A story about a man who was the perfect reincarnation of a nara. or the other way around. the story is full of perspectives. reminds me of some other novel. but it actually helps to show the mc from how others see him. its working for this story. the povs help define the mcs relationship with the people around him and his nature quite clearly. other than the update rate this feels like a great story.
nice story.... i like mc character[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
After I took a small break from webnovel I didn't see a single fanfic deserving of a 5-star other than this. This is good maybe it's my brain corrupted by Chinese mtl that's making this seem good but for god's sake, the mc isn't emo. The friendships and everything in this are masterful.
Shameless Author Review Folks! But really, it's mainly to let you know what to expect: 1. This is an AU, so some elements will be different from canon and please don't complain about it. 2. The main Character is a Nara, you will learn about his personality and his quirks as you read through, he might start as annoying but hopefully he will be a likable character. 3. This isn't anything like my other Naruto Fic. And while on that topic, yes I will continue to write that fic too, I am just rusty and don't rememeber many things about it, so practising with new fics. 4. Yes, this will have a romantic subplot. And it won't end up being a Harem sorry to say to many of you. Yeah mainly you, yeah you my friend, who doesn't want to read anything that doesn't involve depraved sexual interactions. 5. The story will be fast paced, and this will not be a Novel length work. It will end before 100 chapters. 6. The story will be PoV driven, and mainly from other's PoVs, the MC's character will be developed by other's view of him, it's different from what I usually do, but I was inspired by a recent fic "Uchiha Itach's Twin Brother." You might want to check that one out too. It's completed. 7. Well Idk what else to say, I can answer questions in this review thread, so feel free to communicate. Other than that please enjoy the story my friend! I write for you all!
I donated my body to science. Well, not yet. But someday. I like to think about future med students finding my remains and going, ‘Wow, this guy lived a rough life.’ Then I’ll haunt them for being so judgmental. And if they really want to learn, I’ll make sure they experience a real heart attack—ghost style. I forgot to write a review for this lol and don't remember to do it justice. So here my shower thought for you guys.
thank you so much, I really thought you were quite writing this story. I really hope you keep writing this story because i really love this story.
Tiết lộ Spoiler Started off very good and then became dumb. How can someone be a Jonin strength kenjutsu master just by learning kenjutsu techniques from kushina from a couple of months? My god the SI is already overpowered cheat with his chakra and shadows and you want him to be A master of everything? Also a seal master and can apparently create undetectable listening seals or producing a remote heal seal. You expect me to believe the kage level ninja throughout the history of the great sage couldn’t figure it out but a guy who sleeps all day? Just do a rewrite and make everything more believable. Stop making the SI able to do everything under the sun. Like I just want him to get humbled once. 22 chapters in we haven’t seen him lost a fight full strength. No way his semi sentient shadows protect him from genjutsu. Everone has a counter. Why can’t he be humbled by a kumo guy who does the solar flare technique?
tengo una pregunta que puede ser tonta pero lo are, es hombre o mujer, porque hay partes en donde le dicen hija y en otras un muchacho.....?¡?¡? voy recien por el cap6 y me estoy mareando
It was very nice to read this story. The presentation was fascinating and exciting, creating interest and a desire to continue reading. However, I noticed some problems in the detail and saturation of events. Sometimes it was difficult to imagine certain moments and visualize what was happening. A more detailed description of events and characters could enhance the reader's engagement and make the story even more memorable. However, this does not negate the fact that the story has its strengths. The author was able to create an interesting character and develop it throughout the story. The pitch was quite colorful and attractive, which added an additional appeal to it.
Just read it and loved the story, it is a brand new AU with well thought out plot lines and I can't wait to see where it goes.
A very good and satisfying story. From what I understand, this is a bit of experiment by the author, as most of the story is from pov of people around mc. What i found really fresh was looking at the reincarnated mc from other's pov during his early years. This is a variation from the usual storytelling where mc reincarnates and discovers golden fingers which will allow him to ultimately become op/almost op, from his own pov. I hope i can continue to read authors work for a long time.
Tiết lộ Spoiler I don't usually write reviews since im too lazy to write it but this is by far the best naruto fanfic i've ever read, the writing is so good and the author portrays each character really well, the background and character development was done beautifully... All in all this is a 10/10 for meKeep up the good work author! ^^You may now Applaud! 👏👏👏
Where to start? Usually when stories are from many perspectives, they become repetitive of same scene or just plain boring fillers. But author here has done something that all other similar work should incorporate. all different povs still focuses the mc, its like how others see him instead of a whole derailed plot of the other characters. although the first person perspective can be confusing sometimes, but at the end the story is just wholesome. I dont know how many times i have smiled reading till chapter 29, he even has Kabuto as a good guy and someone who might become a brother like best friend to main character. honestly i hope the story continues as such. best wishes author.
Tiết lộ Spoiler Its one of the best novel i have ever read.The mc doesnt treat anyone like they are just a character. there many povs of defferent person i usually get confuse by who is speaking or get board easly but in this novel i dont i smiled the intertime j was reading
Good one...but upload moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee3eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee3eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee and frequentlyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
just one word "AWESOME".[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Tremenda obra de maestra, me encanta 100/10 [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
It's good and has a lot of potential. I think everything is going very smooth it just needs a little tragedy and it will be perfect. Over all it has the best writing quality of any novels I recently read. Keep it up
Hasta el momento es una increíble obra... espero que continúes con el gran trabajo!!!!👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Everything thing is perfect, it feels nice finding a good fic when all I've been seeing are harem stories with bad English. All the best Author-san.👍🏽 Btw i also read your main book and its also really nice.
A story about a man who was the perfect reincarnation of a nara. or the other way around. the story is full of perspectives. reminds me of some other novel. but it actually helps to show the mc from how others see him. its working for this story. the povs help define the mcs relationship with the people around him and his nature quite clearly. other than the update rate this feels like a great story.
nice story.... i like mc character[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
After I took a small break from webnovel I didn't see a single fanfic deserving of a 5-star other than this. This is good maybe it's my brain corrupted by Chinese mtl that's making this seem good but for god's sake, the mc isn't emo. The friendships and everything in this are masterful.
Shameless Author Review Folks! But really, it's mainly to let you know what to expect: 1. This is an AU, so some elements will be different from canon and please don't complain about it. 2. The main Character is a Nara, you will learn about his personality and his quirks as you read through, he might start as annoying but hopefully he will be a likable character. 3. This isn't anything like my other Naruto Fic. And while on that topic, yes I will continue to write that fic too, I am just rusty and don't rememeber many things about it, so practising with new fics. 4. Yes, this will have a romantic subplot. And it won't end up being a Harem sorry to say to many of you. Yeah mainly you, yeah you my friend, who doesn't want to read anything that doesn't involve depraved sexual interactions. 5. The story will be fast paced, and this will not be a Novel length work. It will end before 100 chapters. 6. The story will be PoV driven, and mainly from other's PoVs, the MC's character will be developed by other's view of him, it's different from what I usually do, but I was inspired by a recent fic "Uchiha Itach's Twin Brother." You might want to check that one out too. It's completed. 7. Well Idk what else to say, I can answer questions in this review thread, so feel free to communicate. Other than that please enjoy the story my friend! I write for you all!