/ Eastern Fantasy / The Strongest Summoning System
Tóm tắt
warning: it was the first time I wrote anything so expect a lot of grammatical mistake.
Dawn lived a life full of regret. He always regretted his life choices. Thankfully, it wasn't over for him.
One night after being lectured by his father he suddenly woke up in a strange new world, filled with magic.
In the magical world, Dawn was able to awaken two Heaven-defying talents never seen before in the history of mankind.
Armed with the power to summon creatures from another dimension and supplemented by his levelling system.
He will stop at nothing to achieve his goal of Eternal life.
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"Oh, you can defeat one barbarian, what about 10,000 barbarians," Dawn said with an indifferent voice.
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Người hâm mộ
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Tình trạng nguồn điện hàng tuần
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Quyền lực Bạn cũng có thể thích
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this is a great one a hidden gem. would[img=update] love faster updates and it misses words but still one of the best i have read on here monsters are powerful and don't get left behind after the host gets stronger its a problem i have with several novels i have read on here. would love to be able to give gifts to the wrighter [img=recommend]
Keep ut the good work bro Although there are some grammatical mistake but it doesn't matter as long the story continues people are even willing to read on MTL😂
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What can I say.. this novel left me speechless, what a wonderful novel :cries tears of joy: best novel I read in like forever, well executed, author knows what he is doing. Very likable and relatable mc, very good plot and development. All in all, you should absolutely read it!!!!
The writing quality is decent it can use a bit of cleaning up, but is still very clear. The story has a fast development but it's clear enough that you don't get lost. The Mc is a generic loan wolf like most cultivation novels. As for the world there is still a lot to be filled in, but the descriptions are good enough that you can understand what is going on. Overall a decent book, just needs a bit more flare
The novel is different from traditional eastern novel, the author had introduced several new scenerio of his not seen in the traditional ones. The grammatical mistakes are there but they are acceptable. Character are few but have depth to their chracters
So first things first I personally got confused In the few first chaps, but as I read more the stories progression cleared up my confusion, there are a few minor grammatical mistakes but It doesn't Impact the reading quality, personally I like the aspect that the author decided to make technology a supporting role for the cultivation aspect overall I highly recommend reading this book.
Awesome to hear you finally write a story, because i'm like you and now i'm not yet write a story, because my English still bad for write, but for advice you must have learn more about writing and make the reader fall in love with that, skill MC, world building, and story sometimes good sometimes bored, and finally i drop it, sorry bro, but glad to see you start writing, keep it up bro good luck, you have good idea for a story
World building is bit vague, the world mc is in isn't properly explained. His background remains a mystery not much is known about it. Please increase the update stability 2 chapters a day
52 chapters and this novel isn't ranked among the top ten, Update stability- generally one chapter a day. Grammar- there are some mistakes here and there but they can be ignored. Thr writing is somewhat vague if author can improve, then it will be good
Waiting for more, I hope the author keep updating. The pace is a bit slow I hope the author will work on that. The story is Mc focused, white there are side characters, theu aren't explored much.
The novel is different from traditional eastern novel, the author had introduced several new scenerio of his not seen in the traditional ones. The grammatical mistakes are there but they are acceptable. Character are few but have depth to their chracters
The story is engaging with a relatable mc, the cheat is balanced and the power system is new and unique. Although there are some grammatical mistakes by they are acceptable, release frequency is decent.
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- 1 Hopeful tommorow! 1 years ago
- 2 Sudden attack 1 years ago
- 3 Teleport 1 years ago
- 4 Frozen Graveyard 1 years ago
- 5 First summon: Barbarian 1 years ago
- 6 Cunning Clouded leopard 1 years ago
- 7 Flames of war 1 years ago
- 8 Why not? 1 years ago
- 9 Duma Duma 1 years ago
- 10 despair 1 years ago
- 11 Phantom archer 1 years ago
- 12 Body refining rank 5 1 years ago
- 13 mana attributes 1 years ago
- 14 Voidwalker's flow 1 years ago
- 15 Mysterious entity 1 years ago
- 16 goldfire mine 1 years ago
- 17 8 km Down Below 1 years ago
- 18 Ellora's magic 1 years ago
- 19 faceless monster 1 years ago
- 20 white demon 1 years ago
- 21 barbarian king 1 years ago
- 22 New summon - Wizard 1 years ago
- 23 Tribulation 1 years ago
- 24 Soulless Ajanta 1 years ago
- 25 Ender's 1 years ago
- 26 Flow state 1 years ago
- 27 Selling Enders meat 1 years ago
- 28 Wild Star Pavilion 1 years ago
- 29 Abducted? 1 years ago
- 30 Extreme Yin Demon 1 years ago
- 31 Mysterious marble 1 years ago
- 32 BloodMoon Empyrean 1 years ago
- 33 Empyrean trial 1 years ago
- 34 Mary White 1 years ago
- 35 White Haired Young Man 1 years ago
- 36 Light Speed 1 years ago
- 37 Peak of Body Refining Realm 1 years ago
- 38 Rain of Arrows 1 years ago
- 39 Jewel of Emptiness 1 years ago
- 40 Another Unique Skill? 1 years ago
- 41 Mana Bending 1 years ago
- 42 Lucy's Jealousy 1 years ago
- 43 Academy Selection 1 years ago
- 44 The fearsome Potential 1 years ago
- 45 Bowl in one hand 1 years ago
- 46 Strange situation 1 years ago
- 47 Powerless 1 years ago
- 48 Capital of the Empire. 1 years ago
- 49 Avon academy of Magic 1 years ago
- 50 Angela Blackheart. 1 years ago
- 51 Potential Students 1 years ago
- 52 Forceful Sugar 1 years ago
- 53 Conquest? 1 years ago
- 54 Havok Tribe 1 years ago
- 55 Cruel World 1 years ago
- 56 Changes in Summoning talent 1 years ago
- 57 Peculiar Wizard 1 years ago
- 58 Liam Green Heaven 1 years ago
- 59 Ray BlackMansion 1 years ago
- 60 The postive thinker 1 years ago
- 61 Channel Grade 1 years ago
- 62 Where is peace? 1 years ago
- 63 Main army of Havok tribe 12 months ago
- 64 Zampa 12 months ago
- 65 Charismatic Commander 12 months ago
- 66 Disbelief 12 months ago
- 67 Respect the dead 12 months ago
- 68 Dradevows 12 months ago
- 69 Begin 11 months ago
- 70 Cyrus Ripper 11 months ago
- 71 Resolution 11 months ago
- 72 Strange behaviour of the summons 11 months ago
- 73 Channel Contruction Realm Zombie 11 months ago
- 74 Fusion of unique skills 11 months ago
- 75 100 feet behemoth taking action 11 months ago
- 76 Second appearance of Barabrian kings 11 months ago
- 77 One step closer 11 months ago
- 78 Frustration 11 months ago
- 79 Trial 3 completed! 11 months ago
- 80 Lack of Empathy 11 months ago
- 81 Running for his life 11 months ago
- 82 Sea of Zombies 11 months ago
- 83 New skill :Flow Reversal 11 months ago
- 84 Getting serious 11 months ago
- 85 Black Abyss Death 11 months ago
- 86 Channel construction realm 11 months ago
- 87 New Summons! 11 months ago
- 88 Return 11 months ago
- 89 A Barbarian that can speak 11 months ago
- 90 Apple of Vitality 11 months ago
- 91 New summon: Dragon 11 months ago
- 92 Hungry Barbarian 11 months ago
- 93 territory upgrade 11 months ago
- 94 unfair 11 months ago
- 95 fatty Nick 11 months ago
- 96 lab Rat 11 months ago
- 97 Collateral 11 months ago
- 98 Dark wing city 10 months ago
- 99 Noble's 10 months ago
- 100 Ghost poison 10 months ago
- 101 Nothing to feed. 10 months ago
- 102 Second appearance of the dragon 10 months ago
- 103 Greedy senior 10 months ago
- 104 Giant spoon 10 months ago
- 105 Kiara 10 months ago
- 106 Death by a slap? 10 months ago
- 107 targeted killing. 10 months ago
- 108 why does she sound like a salesman 10 months ago
- 109 anyone more ignorant than him 10 months ago
- 110 flame avalanche 10 months ago
- 111 Bug Queen 10 months ago
- 112 what's really important. 10 months ago
- 113 something to die for 10 months ago
- 114 clone machine 10 months ago
- 115 naughty girls should be punished 10 months ago
- 116 no chance to resist 10 months ago
- 117 Setting up a agency 10 months ago
- 118 Phoenix Empire Envoy 10 months ago
- 119 interrogation 10 months ago
- 120 experts also makes mistakes 10 months ago
- 121 lonely at the top 10 months ago
- 122 familiar faces 10 months ago
- 123 once again 10 months ago
- 124 super popular 9 months ago
- 125 hope 9 months ago
- 126 funny situation 9 months ago
- 127 sometimes a beating is the only thing that you need 9 months ago
- 128 what two idiots have in common 9 months ago
- 129 How can someone take him lightly 9 months ago
Writing for fun 😌 English is not my first language and I was thinking about writing from a long time, plan on writing for a long time.After reading all the popular novels in existence I decided to write on of my own