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Viết đánh giáexcellent Story something new twist than other Chinese Story well just starting 20 chapts are kinda Slow but you can skip some paragraph
The quality of grammar is abysmal which influences the overall impressions from the work! As a reader I did NOT enjoy this at all. Waste of opportunity to be good.
okay between Chapter Small Conflict (2) and Anko (1) I notice calling Yuya a "She" got me confused I thought he was a Male so I don't have a problem with it is just confusing to read it
its just a copy paste of the mtl no editing done ..................................................................................................................................
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author can ya make it clear for me whether the protagonist is male or female cause it gets confusing sometimes it's he sometimes she for the chapter
so far I am really getting into this story. the only issue i have is the going back and forth between the MC being referred to as both him and her to the point that it was confusing me at first if the MC was male or female. so other than grammatical errors. good story
i tried to read it, i really tried, i can't get over the mistake when the author keep saying ''she instead of he'' or its a mtl, i don't know, shame that the novel looks interesting
Fix the f * cking pronouns. The writing quality is great but why do you always write her for Yuya. It’s f * cking bs. Stop it
Im giving it 3.4* Writing Quality: 1* you can expect everything you could expect from chinese fanfic which is translated by google, jade skin him as her her as him etc. Stability of updates: 3* cant rate it, dont know the original story Story Development: 3* kinda slow but to be honest the plost isn't that bad. Character Design: 4* Only a few characters are turned into ret### which is suprising from chinese story World Background: 5*
Tiết lộ SpoilerEs interesante. Jododamente interesante. Se sale del estandar y va un poco a lo cotidiano. Pero progresa. Leí hasta el capitulo actual: 20.
I don't know why people who translate this fanfic not bother to edit the pronouns of the character, because when i read this fanfic there's often male character called she, maybe they're so translate the raw using engine and just copy pasted it here 🤷♂️.note : the translator dont bother either to change the currency to Ryo.note : this fanfic itself is quite good, i think?
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Can anyone tell me the original name or link of this book, pls.(TL) .................,................,................,..............,..................,.................,.................,............
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Tiết lộ SpoilerThe story looks promising, especially in the field of writing, and the films presented are good, I hope you delete the Chinese cliché, it destroys the story تبدو القصة واعدة خاصة في مجال الكتابة والأفلام المقدمة جيدة ارجو ان تحذف الكليشيهات الصينية تدمر القصة
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excellent Story something new twist than other Chinese Story well just starting 20 chapts are kinda Slow but you can skip some paragraph
The quality of grammar is abysmal which influences the overall impressions from the work! As a reader I did NOT enjoy this at all. Waste of opportunity to be good.
okay between Chapter Small Conflict (2) and Anko (1) I notice calling Yuya a "She" got me confused I thought he was a Male so I don't have a problem with it is just confusing to read it
its just a copy paste of the mtl no editing done ..................................................................................................................................
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author can ya make it clear for me whether the protagonist is male or female cause it gets confusing sometimes it's he sometimes she for the chapter
so far I am really getting into this story. the only issue i have is the going back and forth between the MC being referred to as both him and her to the point that it was confusing me at first if the MC was male or female. so other than grammatical errors. good story
i tried to read it, i really tried, i can't get over the mistake when the author keep saying ''she instead of he'' or its a mtl, i don't know, shame that the novel looks interesting
Fix the f * cking pronouns. The writing quality is great but why do you always write her for Yuya. It’s f * cking bs. Stop it
Im giving it 3.4* Writing Quality: 1* you can expect everything you could expect from chinese fanfic which is translated by google, jade skin him as her her as him etc. Stability of updates: 3* cant rate it, dont know the original story Story Development: 3* kinda slow but to be honest the plost isn't that bad. Character Design: 4* Only a few characters are turned into ret### which is suprising from chinese story World Background: 5*
Tiết lộ SpoilerEs interesante. Jododamente interesante. Se sale del estandar y va un poco a lo cotidiano. Pero progresa. Leí hasta el capitulo actual: 20.
I don't know why people who translate this fanfic not bother to edit the pronouns of the character, because when i read this fanfic there's often male character called she, maybe they're so translate the raw using engine and just copy pasted it here 🤷♂️.note : the translator dont bother either to change the currency to Ryo.note : this fanfic itself is quite good, i think?
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I found a gem, what an interesting novel, stop by mine too[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Can anyone tell me the original name or link of this book, pls.(TL) .................,................,................,..............,..................,.................,.................,............
<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3 <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3 <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3 <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3 <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3 <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
Tiết lộ SpoilerThe story looks promising, especially in the field of writing, and the films presented are good, I hope you delete the Chinese cliché, it destroys the story تبدو القصة واعدة خاصة في مجال الكتابة والأفلام المقدمة جيدة ارجو ان تحذف الكليشيهات الصينية تدمر القصة
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