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Was actually going really well in the beginning, yeah there were some down time, like when he was so submissive to a king he could kill easily, and then it got worse when he is now going to “protect” Riveria(the kings daughter) and then when he gets to the city it’s just forced a person who doesn’t like gods in general to be slaved to Loki without checking her with his eyes(he has eyes that can tell if they good or not), is being forced to do somthing for a king he can kill easily. It’s going against his character to be free from being a slave and manipulated to do someone else bidding.
man honestly this book has alot of problems , the grammar is terrible , you gave rudeus god tier magic just to tell him not to use it because of the gods when they can't even directly harm him ? you just nerfed him for absolutely no reason.
personal opinion great story if I had two things to complain about that I have to wait for it to be updated my second opinion the main characters leveling speed to be clear as far as I recall or leveling up in danmachi is not like in a video game where you gather XP and level up or in this case exilia as far as I recall you have to achieve a great feat that would impress the gods to be clear I'm pretty sure he's already done that enough but I would still think it would take him more time to gather enough exilia and I'm pretty sure you have to risk yourself to level up and I don't mean put yourself in danger or I mean suppress yourself it does not have to be in combat it can be forging or even a mental growth to be clear I have not read danmachi in a while so I might be remembering it wrong by the way just throw an ideas on the fire for for the story next time you will level him up. forgive me for my brain spew I enjoyed the story I thought it was great to the author I hope you continue to write the story I loved it and anyone reading this review I suggest you read it it's good
I have not read the Danmachi novel or have seen that anime but I liked the story very much. Its really nice to read. If possible please keep on updating it.
Background story is different from the original like monsters rom on the land not in the dungeon. So must backstory for the elves and lastly RIP ENGLISH.
This is one of the danmachi stories that made me intrested in the sea of trash ideas. Future Rudeus deserve happiness he lost due Hitogami. But the Author wrote the character , not like he is Rudeus at all, it could be any reborn person not showing Rudeus speacil characteric the overwolming magic power and as well magic knowladge and more are kind of added to character like cheat, not part of the character as Rudeus. the Author took the point of conflict in the character in the first chapter preventing character devolpment as well close up as Rudeus. in first place the anime is about him overcoming the fears and trauma as shut in and fat loser, in his second life, so third life should be smilliar conflict.
TRUTH THIS NOVEL IS EPIC FUN TO READ.THANKS, AUTHOR FOR A FUN STORY I LOVE TO READ..PEOPLE DO NOT LESSON TO THE DUMB PEOPLE THAT CAN NOT READ LESSONS TO YOUR HEARD AND READ THIS STORY BECAUSE IT IS FUN TO READ. I LOVE THIS STORY I'M DUMB FOR A FUN STORY TO READ..THIS NOVEL IS FUN SO READ IT NOW.
I love how your doing rudius's character in the new world because I think everything is going the way you would really act if that character was thrown into that world by the way I'm using Text to Speech because well I have a bad time typing with my other way my hands are so some things aren't going to come out right there's not much more I can say about it without ruining it I can just tell you read the book and I hope you enjoy it as much as I do
Well.... Grammar and spelling needs ALOT of work.. But so far the story is pretty good but all the errors make it seem like the author is rushing to write it as if he has a deadline or something? Author please blink twice if you need help.
Give it a try... oh that? don't worry about it....................................................................................................................................
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Mais mais mais mais mais mais (muito interessante)❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Mais mais mais mais mais mais Mais mais mais mais mais mais Mais mais mais mais mais mais
well you read the intro so let me tell you so far chapter 1 and 2 all good. this is the kind of story I been waiting for.
interesting, using a broken Rudeus and trying to live a new life. well even though you can get rid of Rudeus' hatred too easily especially with an entity like God who makes his life miserable. but this is a solid enough story to have fun with especially if you are a fan of MT or more specifically Rudeus Greyrat.
Was actually going really well in the beginning, yeah there were some down time, like when he was so submissive to a king he could kill easily, and then it got worse when he is now going to “protect” Riveria(the kings daughter) and then when he gets to the city it’s just forced a person who doesn’t like gods in general to be slaved to Loki without checking her with his eyes(he has eyes that can tell if they good or not), is being forced to do somthing for a king he can kill easily. It’s going against his character to be free from being a slave and manipulated to do someone else bidding.
man honestly this book has alot of problems , the grammar is terrible , you gave rudeus god tier magic just to tell him not to use it because of the gods when they can't even directly harm him ? you just nerfed him for absolutely no reason.
personal opinion great story if I had two things to complain about that I have to wait for it to be updated my second opinion the main characters leveling speed to be clear as far as I recall or leveling up in danmachi is not like in a video game where you gather XP and level up or in this case exilia as far as I recall you have to achieve a great feat that would impress the gods to be clear I'm pretty sure he's already done that enough but I would still think it would take him more time to gather enough exilia and I'm pretty sure you have to risk yourself to level up and I don't mean put yourself in danger or I mean suppress yourself it does not have to be in combat it can be forging or even a mental growth to be clear I have not read danmachi in a while so I might be remembering it wrong by the way just throw an ideas on the fire for for the story next time you will level him up. forgive me for my brain spew I enjoyed the story I thought it was great to the author I hope you continue to write the story I loved it and anyone reading this review I suggest you read it it's good
I have not read the Danmachi novel or have seen that anime but I liked the story very much. Its really nice to read. If possible please keep on updating it.
Background story is different from the original like monsters rom on the land not in the dungeon. So must backstory for the elves and lastly RIP ENGLISH.
This is one of the danmachi stories that made me intrested in the sea of trash ideas. Future Rudeus deserve happiness he lost due Hitogami. But the Author wrote the character , not like he is Rudeus at all, it could be any reborn person not showing Rudeus speacil characteric the overwolming magic power and as well magic knowladge and more are kind of added to character like cheat, not part of the character as Rudeus. the Author took the point of conflict in the character in the first chapter preventing character devolpment as well close up as Rudeus. in first place the anime is about him overcoming the fears and trauma as shut in and fat loser, in his second life, so third life should be smilliar conflict.
TRUTH THIS NOVEL IS EPIC FUN TO READ.THANKS, AUTHOR FOR A FUN STORY I LOVE TO READ..PEOPLE DO NOT LESSON TO THE DUMB PEOPLE THAT CAN NOT READ LESSONS TO YOUR HEARD AND READ THIS STORY BECAUSE IT IS FUN TO READ. I LOVE THIS STORY I'M DUMB FOR A FUN STORY TO READ..THIS NOVEL IS FUN SO READ IT NOW.
I love how your doing rudius's character in the new world because I think everything is going the way you would really act if that character was thrown into that world by the way I'm using Text to Speech because well I have a bad time typing with my other way my hands are so some things aren't going to come out right there's not much more I can say about it without ruining it I can just tell you read the book and I hope you enjoy it as much as I do
Well.... Grammar and spelling needs ALOT of work.. But so far the story is pretty good but all the errors make it seem like the author is rushing to write it as if he has a deadline or something? Author please blink twice if you need help.
Give it a try... oh that? don't worry about it....................................................................................................................................
Tiết lộ Spoiler Mais mais mais mais mais mais (muito interessante)❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Mais mais mais mais mais mais Mais mais mais mais mais mais Mais mais mais mais mais mais
well you read the intro so let me tell you so far chapter 1 and 2 all good. this is the kind of story I been waiting for.
interesting, using a broken Rudeus and trying to live a new life. well even though you can get rid of Rudeus' hatred too easily especially with an entity like God who makes his life miserable. but this is a solid enough story to have fun with especially if you are a fan of MT or more specifically Rudeus Greyrat.