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***SPOILERS for Mushoku Tensei anime watchers***

This fan-fic will contain heavy spoilers for any anime-only fan of Mushoku Tensei. You have been warned.

This story considers what may have happened if the Rudeus from the future had been successful in his attempt at time travel. What if Rudeus' attempt at time travel had resulted in him traveling back into the body of his younger self?

After researching time travel with the help of Perugius and Nanahoshi, Rudeus makes his attempt only to find himself opening his eyes to see Paul and Zenith doting over their newborn son. Rudeus is essentially given a second chance at life in this world starting with all the knowledge he had accrued. Will he be able to protect his family this time around?

Please note this is my first attempt at writing of any sort. I would honestly appreciate any critiques and advice. I don't mind criticism, but please be kind about it.

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Steineer

W. Literally what I had in mind for my novel. Wanted to write a a story where future rudues was transmigrated to the past upon his death. Read a couple chapters, Very well detailed, superb writing style, amaxing plot progression overall. I look forward to what you do in the future!

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Magueye

Only one thing I have to say now shall be said, Discord server when? 🤨

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Soda_T

It's a rare Mushoku Tensei fanfiction, with an even rarer setting of featuring Future Rudues, and of course the quality of writing is good. It's worth a read!

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Magueye

Seeing how I have fully read the web novel it is actually pretty relevant to what I think Rudeus would've done! Amazing work on this! I can't wait for the future arcs to be redone as well.

1yr
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Csc222

It's a good story and I was curious what would have happened if Rudius had correctly traveled back in time and corrected his mistakes that led to his tragic future.

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MISTER_Gf

The story is very interesting and very well written, I didn't notice any writing errors or anything like that. My only problem with it is that Rudeus is very cautious about showing his powers, he is already one of the 7 strongest in the world but he is entering the academy as a normal student, and in addition doing everything in the most discreet way possible. For me, Mc being so discreet made me drop the story

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suedou
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Although it’s nothing particularly groundbreaking, this is a pretty solid read that I would recommend to any fans of Mushoku Tensei (especially LN readers)

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I_Own_Nothing

VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!

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Reymond_Ferin

this book is the "goat" Hope it continues for thousands of chapters 👍 if possible

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Reymond_Ferin

When i read mt i thought what if rudeus went back to past and survived . it took that idea and turned it into an quite a fascinating fic. although it lacks in emotions and suspense it is really enjoyable. you would always wait for next chapters once read. it also disappoints in updating stability but we need to understand that this writers are not paid for this work so the delay is acceptable.Hope it continues and fans keep supporting it. Best wishes

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I_Own_Nothing

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Sacred_Author

I just wanted to say that I love the new book cover for Mushoku Tensei: A Second Chance.

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Psan
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Since its OldRudeus i will asume that its still a hârêm... As no sane man would not marry his future wife again and let them be alone or with someone else... So the hârêm is AT LEAST Roxy, Sylphy and Eris... But I would like spoilers... Does he includes anyone else?

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SuperEpicGamer123

This is one of the better Mushoku Tensei Fanfictions. I definitely recommend reading it.

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DaoistCudg85

I enjoyed the writers take on this "what-if" within the Mushoku Tensei universe. Each decision the protagonist will have a cascading effect on how the story deviates from the original timeline. Despite a few questions on how certain things should have come to pass, such as why is Arial and her mage are still alive without "silent-fitz", and how will/or will Norn end up with Ruijerd if they never meet in her childhood. I think this Fan-Fiction is so far a wonderful addition to the Mushoku Tensei collection of stories. I look forward to reading further chapters.

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Daoist8GDmHY

I like it, it's on the right track so far. Hopefully find a way to prolong your Rudius life. It is possible. I suppose. Well keep this good story. I love this quite powerful rudius. Known as world power: the magical god.

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RandyButterNups

It's pretty rare to see a fanfic centered around Oldeus, but it's always nice to see. The story is pretty good; the only major issue with the story, in my opinion, is Rudy's character. In the Oldeus timeline, Rudeus suffers horrific trauma after horrific trauma and becomes a depressed, homicidal, womanizing alcoholic (albeit a very powerful alcoholic) that's hellbent on revenge and becoming stronger. So, you'd expect after he time travels these things would deeply affect him, but said events feel to have little impact on his character. That being said, the story isn't finished, and the author may very well be planning to address this concern. On a more positive note, in almost everything else I can think of, the author does very well, especially in his writing of Paul and Rudy's interactions. Sometimes it honestly feels like how Rifujin would write the two.

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ArchProgenitor

just the theme is enough to draw in cultured individuals.

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mecheil_baloja

this is amazing . I'm so happy to read this novel. thank you so much .

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chernobog444

THIS IS MUSHOKU TENSEI WE DESERVE. Better than original. Agora review em portugues, a historia realmente é muito boa se voce leu até o volume 15 da novel original não vai ter nenhum problema em seguir a historia, ela amarra pontas soltas que até mesmo o autor deixou passar e se mantem solida 'pelo menos até onde eu estou'. Em especial o evento da hidra e a forma como o autor trabalhou foi algo que eu sempre esperei ver acontecendo, ele realmente faz um trabalho digno do titulo MELHOR QUE O ORIGINAL

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    Starting Over 1 years ago
  2. 2
    Roxy 1 years ago
  3. 3
    Preparing for Disaster 1 years ago
  4. 4
    Farewells and Meeting Sylphy 1 years ago
  5. 5
    Tutoring Sylphy 1 years ago
  6. 6
    Departing for Roa 1 years ago
  7. 7
    Life in Roa 1 years ago
  8. 8
    A Very Busy Birthday 1 years ago
  9. 9
    Mana Disaster 1 years ago
  10. 10
    Getting to Know Ruijerd 1 years ago
  11. 11
    Adventurers 1 years ago
  12. 12
    The Petrified Forest 1 years ago
  13. 13
    Black Blades 1 years ago
  14. 14
    All Powerful 1 years ago
  15. 15
    Another Student? 1 years ago
  16. 16
    The Great Demon Empress 1 years ago
  17. 17
    Connections 1 years ago
  18. 18
    Roxy's Perspective 1 years ago
  19. 19
    To Zant Port 1 years ago
  20. 20
    Smugglers 1 years ago
  21. 21
    Ambush 1 years ago
  22. 22
    A Worthy Opponent 1 years ago
  23. 23
    Aftermath 1 years ago
  24. 24
    Dedoldia Village 1 years ago
  25. 25
    Magic God 1 years ago
  26. 26
    Milishion 1 years ago
  27. 27
    Reunions. 1 years ago
  28. 28
    Meeting the Pope 1 years ago
  29. 29
    Parting Ways 1 years ago
  30. 30
    Web of Lies 1 years ago
  31. 31
    I Know a Shortcut 1 years ago
  32. 32
    Sylphiette - Part 1 1 years ago
  33. 33
    Sylphiette - Part 2 1 years ago
  34. 34
    Sylphiette - Part 3 1 years ago
  35. 35
    Returning Home 1 years ago
  36. 36
    One Big Happy Family 1 years ago
  37. 37
    Another Shortcut? 1 years ago
  38. 38
    A Princess in Peril 1 years ago
  39. 39
    A True Masterpiece 1 years ago
  40. 40
    Escaping the Royal Palace 1 years ago
  41. 41
    So You're Saying There's a Chance! 1 years ago
  42. 42
    A Plan to Save Laws 1 years ago
  43. 43
    Pax's Big Mistake 1 years ago
  44. 44
    Introduction to King Shirone 1 years ago
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    Negotiations with King Shirone 1 years ago
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    Leaving Shirone 1 years ago
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    A New Problem 1 years ago
  48. 48
    Enrolling in the University 1 years ago
  49. 49
    Entrance Exam 1 years ago
  50. 50
    Eris' Academy Adventure - Part 1 1 years ago
  51. 51
    Eris' Academy Adventure - Part 2 1 years ago
  52. 52
    A One man country wide search party. 1 years ago
  53. 53
    Repaying an Old Debt 1 years ago
  54. 54
    The Strength to Protect 1 years ago
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    Luna Superdia 1 years ago
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    New Friends 1 years ago
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    Renovations 1 years ago
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    Family Reunion 1 years ago
  59. 59
    Something to be Proud of 1 years ago
  60. 60
    Moving Into Our New Home 1 years ago
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    Differing Tastes 1 years ago
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    Unexpected Meetings 1 years ago
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    Prelude to Disaster 1 years ago
  64. 64
    Turning Point 1 years ago
  65. 65
    Starting Over? 1 years ago
  66. 66
    Gathering the Survivors 1 years ago
  67. 67
    Celebrities in the Greyrat House 12 months ago
  68. 68
    Timothy's Perpective 12 months ago
  69. 69
    Sylphiette vs Counter Arrow 11 months ago
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    The Next Couple Months 11 months ago
  71. 71
    Encounter with the Dragon God - Part 1 11 months ago
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    Encounter with the Dragon God - Part 2 11 months ago
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    Encounter with the Dragon God - Part 3 11 months ago
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    The Forest Goddess 11 months ago
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    King Markien 11 months ago
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    For the Good of the Country 10 months ago
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    The Holy Land of Swords 10 months ago
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    Fate can be Cruel 10 months ago
  79. 79
    Eris vs Nina 10 months ago
  80. 80
    First Day of School 10 months ago
  81. 81
    Legends of the University #1 10 months ago
  82. 82
    Luna's First Day 10 months ago
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    Legends of the University #2 10 months ago
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    Legends of the University #3 9 months ago
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    Cliff Grimoire 9 months ago
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    Legends of the University #4 9 months ago
  88. 88
    Legends of the University #5 9 months ago
  89. 89
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    Summoning - Part 2 9 months ago
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    The Strongest Mage in Bristall 8 months ago
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    Foul Play 8 months ago
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  102. 102
    Surprise Party 7 months ago
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    Turning Point 2 7 months ago
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    Desert Sun 7 months ago
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    Traversing the Desert (Pt 1) 4 months ago
  106. 106
    Close Encounter 4 months ago
  107. 107
    Traversing the Desert (Pt 2) 4 months ago
  108. 108
    Night at the Bazaar 4 months ago
  109. 109
    Teleportation Labyrinth 3 months ago
  110. 110
    Roxy's Desperation 3 months ago
  111. 111
    The White Void 3 months ago
  112. 112
    A New Party 3 months ago
  113. 113
    Never Give Up 3 months ago
  114. 114
    Battle Against the Manatite Hydra 2 months ago
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    Battle Against the Manatite Hydra - Pt 2 2 months ago
  116. 116
    Nobody's Fault 2 months ago
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    Returning Home 2 months ago
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    Another Family Reunion 1 months ago
  119. 119
    Matchmaker Rudeus 1 months ago
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    Experimenting with Magic 1 months ago
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    Orsted's Visit 1 months ago
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    Training Begins 27 days ago
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    Training Continues 16 days ago
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    Tragedy at the Slave Market 12 days ago
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    Julie's Recovery 5 days ago

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