The Ultron

LV 4

Twice_James153

Please keep it going, don't drop it! It's nearly perfect so far!

LV 3

LordofOrigin

Well its just starting but it seems like a good approach so I encourage others to read it as well.so yh READDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

LV 4

TinyBookDragon

The writing style is hard to read. It's emotionless and the words used make it seem like the author was beaten with a dictionary until they could only write in a ridiculously formal/robotic way. POV changes do nothing for the sense of the person we are reading from and don't match their character at all. If I wasn't directly shown the POV change I wouldn't know that it had changed. I ended up skimming most of the story b/c it was so boring and repetitive. I won't be continuing this.

LV 12

Chaos_Evil_Daoist

I actually hoped Mc would be a lil bit more ruthless but well, it's still realy good.

LV 5

Hagel_Hydra

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Rhys_Evan

Great work, keep it up. Maybe try to build a body like the DBZ android and give some mutant power OR make take some inspiration from the Sentinels. Ant-Man armor is cool. What if - infinity Ultron. Robot 🤖🤖🤖 Army 🪖🪖🪖is coooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool