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Absolutely in love with this book⁉️ Yhe premise is interesting and the world-building is interesting and helps the reader picture out the type of world the story revolves in. The author's writing stule is just as amazing! I love how the author manages to paint pictures with words. Definitely a pitential banger!
Nice slow start, it lets you breathe in the world nicely. Leon seems to be a late bloomer, so I'm interested in where his decision goes. After all more chapters are needed, but with this quality, I believe there's nothing not to worry about.
Well written book. The prose is so rich with well-chosen descriptions that it felt like I was watching a movie. The dialogue is also superb and is very fun to read. To be frank, this is traditional-publishing-level prose. I suggest newer authors like me to try and emulate his style, haha.
I love the way you write, especially your writing style! The way you slowly introduced the plot was also fascinating to read, and I love how you wrote the characters & dialogue as well! Keep up the wonderful work!
I can tell just from the synopsis that we are in for a ride, and after reading up until the latest update, we truly are! XD What an amazing book! High quality of writing, plot is intriguing, and the twistedness of it all just makes this so unique and exciting to read. Can't wait for more updates, author!
Title? Nice! Synopsis? I give it 10 freaking points! Grammar? MY GOD, THIS IS THE BEST WRITING I’VE SEEN ON THIS PLATFORM! I love the word choices: makes me hope I can continue to do as well in mine! I was surprised when you killed a character off in the second chapter, but ‘twas a ruse. lol I’m saving this to come back later! I was trying to think of what to say before I even finished the 4 chapters!!
I hold a deep jealousy towards how this master can so effortlessly weave his words. The sentences are beautifully structured and flow well. The characters introduced were somewhat interesting, but the twist at the end of the first couple of chapters was what truly set forth the development of a certain character, which was an interesting change.
If the fantasy world would be real, then I'd choose to be Leon, meet my demise to protect my loved one. [img=recommend] I love the story line much love for Alice. KEEP up the good work author, I want to find out how the story unfolds, what happens to Leon? Suspense to keep me glued [img=recommend] you definitely have this reader. [img=coins][img=update]
Absolutely in love with this book⁉️ Yhe premise is interesting and the world-building is interesting and helps the reader picture out the type of world the story revolves in. The author's writing stule is just as amazing! I love how the author manages to paint pictures with words. Definitely a pitential banger!
Nice slow start, it lets you breathe in the world nicely. Leon seems to be a late bloomer, so I'm interested in where his decision goes. After all more chapters are needed, but with this quality, I believe there's nothing not to worry about.
Well written book. The prose is so rich with well-chosen descriptions that it felt like I was watching a movie. The dialogue is also superb and is very fun to read. To be frank, this is traditional-publishing-level prose. I suggest newer authors like me to try and emulate his style, haha.
I love the way you write, especially your writing style! The way you slowly introduced the plot was also fascinating to read, and I love how you wrote the characters & dialogue as well! Keep up the wonderful work!
I can tell just from the synopsis that we are in for a ride, and after reading up until the latest update, we truly are! XD What an amazing book! High quality of writing, plot is intriguing, and the twistedness of it all just makes this so unique and exciting to read. Can't wait for more updates, author!
Title? Nice! Synopsis? I give it 10 freaking points! Grammar? MY GOD, THIS IS THE BEST WRITING I’VE SEEN ON THIS PLATFORM! I love the word choices: makes me hope I can continue to do as well in mine! I was surprised when you killed a character off in the second chapter, but ‘twas a ruse. lol I’m saving this to come back later! I was trying to think of what to say before I even finished the 4 chapters!!
I hold a deep jealousy towards how this master can so effortlessly weave his words. The sentences are beautifully structured and flow well. The characters introduced were somewhat interesting, but the twist at the end of the first couple of chapters was what truly set forth the development of a certain character, which was an interesting change.
If the fantasy world would be real, then I'd choose to be Leon, meet my demise to protect my loved one. [img=recommend] I love the story line much love for Alice. KEEP up the good work author, I want to find out how the story unfolds, what happens to Leon? Suspense to keep me glued [img=recommend] you definitely have this reader. [img=coins][img=update]