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I've read 24 almost 25 chapters and unfortunately I didn't like it . I like a MC who takes advantage of his knowledge and gains power but all I can see is that he is only interested in material benefits..... there were moments where he could have gotten the best girls and even have a harem and he just rejected this in expense of more gain.... money is good and money with a smart mind can get you power but power without fun has value but... it's not the same.. Anyway, thank author-san for the try, unfortunately this was not the fanfic for me.
It's a great Marvel (Naruto) fanfiction!! 😁👍👍 It have a great english/translation and great plot/story.. I like that MC/Cain have a trade system.. First I think he can trade (sell and buy) with another world (Naruto and maybe more world in the future) and the can buy something too from system 😂🤣 MC/Cain also not naive and cautious (it's very important in Naruto world, where not anyone good like Naruto).. But I think MC/Cain cheated Kushina too much.. I don't mind if he cheated Konoha higher up's or other wealthy people, but it's not good to cheated a kid like Kushina.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Love your story, keep up the good job author san 😁👍😍😍😍
Tengo un problema Aqui es la segunda vez que traducen la novela solo que esta recien va en el 50 XD el otro estaba mas avanzado no se si es el mismo traductor o el otro lo abandono
Arghhhhhh!!!!!!! More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more
Altough it is a translation it is still a very good book and very good language with very few errors ----------------------------------------------------------
this looks good and interesting i always had a liking for multiverse shops fanfics, still is this yours or an MTL translation ?
I've read 24 almost 25 chapters and unfortunately I didn't like it . I like a MC who takes advantage of his knowledge and gains power but all I can see is that he is only interested in material benefits..... there were moments where he could have gotten the best girls and even have a harem and he just rejected this in expense of more gain.... money is good and money with a smart mind can get you power but power without fun has value but... it's not the same.. Anyway, thank author-san for the try, unfortunately this was not the fanfic for me.
It's a great Marvel (Naruto) fanfiction!! 😁👍👍 It have a great english/translation and great plot/story.. I like that MC/Cain have a trade system.. First I think he can trade (sell and buy) with another world (Naruto and maybe more world in the future) and the can buy something too from system 😂🤣 MC/Cain also not naive and cautious (it's very important in Naruto world, where not anyone good like Naruto).. But I think MC/Cain cheated Kushina too much.. I don't mind if he cheated Konoha higher up's or other wealthy people, but it's not good to cheated a kid like Kushina.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Love your story, keep up the good job author san 😁👍😍😍😍
Tengo un problema Aqui es la segunda vez que traducen la novela solo que esta recien va en el 50 XD el otro estaba mas avanzado no se si es el mismo traductor o el otro lo abandono
Arghhhhhh!!!!!!! More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more
Altough it is a translation it is still a very good book and very good language with very few errors ----------------------------------------------------------
this looks good and interesting i always had a liking for multiverse shops fanfics, still is this yours or an MTL translation ?
This is very good.plese continue updating.thank you for your hard work