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I saw this book on the free limited day read and decided to give it a chance. Seriously, what a mistake that was. The old Spiderman saying, with great power comes great responsibility, or the one that goes that power corrupts etc, is very much the whole of this book. MC receives the system, aka All of Creation, and with that comes the ability to do anything he can imagine. So when depressed shutin MC receives the gift, he goes nuclear and from there the story plummets to a wish fantasy. Protect his parents because he f*#ked up first time round, becomes number one priority. Girls are fun, but hmm how they can be useful to me besides a relief tool. He has no emotional balance of life and that is how the story goes. I did my best to give this a story a go as it was free for the chapters but I couldn’t stomach the narcissistic, low EQ MC any further and pulled the pin. Just my opinion for all the above.
This book is really great. They’r are barely any grammar mistakes and plot is very interesting but the updating stability is not very high since author hasn’t uploaded for 25 days. Author have you dropped this book?
Great writing quality. The first 5 chapters are amazing. Will keep reading this novel is good.
I like this novel so far I read 20 chapters but the lock chapters but still it's interesting I'll give u max review for that keep up the good work
This novel is pretty good not gonna lie please make more free chapters if possible i recommend reading this novel
good novel.good writing.great system.power level is great.MC is very knowledgeable.........
is this a basic novel where everything is related to Chinese or is the mc just in china.
Wow this is one of a kind novel I am reading this kind of good novel after a long time it's really good, it has great capability and the author is keeping it that way. Hope the author doesn't drop it and good luck
Hello, messed up and locked chapters too early but too late to do anything about it. To make sure you get what you pay for, I would urge you to comment on your likes and dislikes. Tell me your thought on what you think I should add or remove. This is a novel that will cover a universe. Anything goes. If you want me to add something, just write it in the comments and I'll add it. Be more active, it helps me write better
Sorry my ptsd took over you must understand we suffer from the same illness…CN
Hello everyone. It's the author. I appreciate stopping by to read my novel. Don't hold back on the comments and reviews, it helps improve my writing. (Just gonna shamelessly give myself 5 stars)
Although late the beginning of the novel isn’t really ok the MC is given an op system with the situation being that the only threat to him are lvl 99 and max lvl beings. Him saying that he wants to create a force then proceeding to attemp to take over the world does not match the level of his system cuz the fog he put up will eventually attract the attention of powerful beings because it’s range is large there are other things about the story that don’t match the level of the system or just spoil the story line I’m just to lazy to type but as the writer you’ll probably understand what I mean from what I type next You could have solved a lot of problems about how the plot would be by making him unable to use the system on himself then just give him the undying skill, his lvl ten mortal body, cultivation techniques, stealth techniques and other skills to make him strong but not to strong that you have to force the Mc to make a dumb choice to create plot Next make the world a hidden cultivators society, tower or any supernatural type world, whatever you like(I haven’t read far enough to confirm if this novel is like that but I just felt that this novel could have been a lot better) This novel in the beginning is basically you giving an adult a nuclear missle level weapon and having him fight kids You made the MC out to be a person anxious to protect his parents after losing them once but yet he was willing to give up a chance to quickly become powerful despite knowing there are beings his system created fog can’t block Well this is just my own opinion and I’m not trying to attack? You
I saw this book on the free limited day read and decided to give it a chance. Seriously, what a mistake that was. The old Spiderman saying, with great power comes great responsibility, or the one that goes that power corrupts etc, is very much the whole of this book. MC receives the system, aka All of Creation, and with that comes the ability to do anything he can imagine. So when depressed shutin MC receives the gift, he goes nuclear and from there the story plummets to a wish fantasy. Protect his parents because he f*#ked up first time round, becomes number one priority. Girls are fun, but hmm how they can be useful to me besides a relief tool. He has no emotional balance of life and that is how the story goes. I did my best to give this a story a go as it was free for the chapters but I couldn’t stomach the narcissistic, low EQ MC any further and pulled the pin. Just my opinion for all the above.
This book is really great. They’r are barely any grammar mistakes and plot is very interesting but the updating stability is not very high since author hasn’t uploaded for 25 days. Author have you dropped this book?
Great writing quality. The first 5 chapters are amazing. Will keep reading this novel is good.
I like this novel so far I read 20 chapters but the lock chapters but still it's interesting I'll give u max review for that keep up the good work
This novel is pretty good not gonna lie please make more free chapters if possible i recommend reading this novel
good novel.good writing.great system.power level is great.MC is very knowledgeable.........
is this a basic novel where everything is related to Chinese or is the mc just in china.
Wow this is one of a kind novel I am reading this kind of good novel after a long time it's really good, it has great capability and the author is keeping it that way. Hope the author doesn't drop it and good luck
Hello, messed up and locked chapters too early but too late to do anything about it. To make sure you get what you pay for, I would urge you to comment on your likes and dislikes. Tell me your thought on what you think I should add or remove. This is a novel that will cover a universe. Anything goes. If you want me to add something, just write it in the comments and I'll add it. Be more active, it helps me write better
Sorry my ptsd took over you must understand we suffer from the same illness…CN
Hello everyone. It's the author. I appreciate stopping by to read my novel. Don't hold back on the comments and reviews, it helps improve my writing. (Just gonna shamelessly give myself 5 stars)
Although late the beginning of the novel isn’t really ok the MC is given an op system with the situation being that the only threat to him are lvl 99 and max lvl beings. Him saying that he wants to create a force then proceeding to attemp to take over the world does not match the level of his system cuz the fog he put up will eventually attract the attention of powerful beings because it’s range is large there are other things about the story that don’t match the level of the system or just spoil the story line I’m just to lazy to type but as the writer you’ll probably understand what I mean from what I type next You could have solved a lot of problems about how the plot would be by making him unable to use the system on himself then just give him the undying skill, his lvl ten mortal body, cultivation techniques, stealth techniques and other skills to make him strong but not to strong that you have to force the Mc to make a dumb choice to create plot Next make the world a hidden cultivators society, tower or any supernatural type world, whatever you like(I haven’t read far enough to confirm if this novel is like that but I just felt that this novel could have been a lot better) This novel in the beginning is basically you giving an adult a nuclear missle level weapon and having him fight kids You made the MC out to be a person anxious to protect his parents after losing them once but yet he was willing to give up a chance to quickly become powerful despite knowing there are beings his system created fog can’t block Well this is just my own opinion and I’m not trying to attack? You