World Online: Rise of the Strongest Hero

LV 3

bluerabyss

The story is well written and up to a good start. I dunno, I just noticed some inconsistencies...😅😅 First one is that I thought the Adventurer's Guilds offer free lodging to the members so how come the Elijah need to use 1 guild point so that he can stay in the dorms? One more thing is that his first mission should be rewarded with 10 gold coins but he only received 5 gold coins and with only 1 guild point... shouldn't be received like atleast 2 or maybe 3 guild point? 😅😅😅 Idk why I noticed those things but so far the story is good (a little slow like how I write my stories) but the story itself is good. Keep it up author! 💪💪

LV 4

Fool_That_lampoons

It is a basic typical novel but has potential. No novel is for everyone. Inevitably, some people won't like it, but I do. And if some of you give this novel a chance, you won't regret it. It's a slow-paced, novel which is to my liking with a world filled with adventure. Adios

LV 14

JALLEN

Writing this review as of chapter 10. The story is well written but there some slight mistakes in grammar or some words missing in some sentences but it’s nothing major. I like the classic approach with the system. Also, the first chapter is quite good, it had me hooked and made me read 10 chapters in a row. If you like a story with video games elements, this one is for you!

LV 4

Floxy_Belle

I have to say, I'm really impressed! and I've only read 4 chapters, it has a nice plot, and the setting is on point👌 But I sense that Elijah is embarking on a wild adventure😏