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Viết đánh giáSuperb! The detailed depiction of the world and the presentation of the characters amazed me. I was about to say that Theovin and Ralph are a funny duo... that was until Theovin and Gold Song made me change my mind LOL. The plot and the author's skills are showing ,as I feel the urge to read more and more. Please keep updating the book and let us know mooorreee. P.S. Get better soon!
I would rate this book a 70. It doesn't just make Theovin and Rosy fall in love immediately and I also like the part where the demon attack the house and Theresa took.I 2ould say read this book it is great!.I have not been able to gift your book deer author and unlock as I only use for as I don't have coins. but I love this book deer author and continue t publish thing chapters as I cannot wait for the love triangle part of the book.
I just want everyone reading this to know that this Author is GOOD AF! Show me a flaw, but don't forget to tag 'THE PERFECT ONE'....
yeah, I completely agree real world sucks. I have been living for 35 years and still looking for something like fantasy in the real world, never happen harem to me, this place I can escape from the negativity real world. I tried...
Like the way you introduced your character and how the story continued developing and getting interesting ,your writing pattern is also good
The first 5 chapters are very important to make readers attracted to your novel and yes, you got a catch there. However, you can still improve on the quality of writing, grammar and punctuations. Story development is quite fast and it's good. But you need to add more on the feeling part. I've added some paragraph comments on this on how to expand it. It's great to have a new author with fresh ideas! I'm looking forward to your success.
It's really good! I would recommend this book to those that like a good story! Keep it up we need more chapters of this! Good development in the recent chapters as well
The words I have for this book is Lovely Chaos. There is not too many chapters posted, but I am definitely keeping my eyes on this one. Some typos and debatable word choices used, but nothing a good edit won't fix. Keep up the good work.
Hey authored here! I just wanted to let you know what you are in for when you start reading this book. First off, it's easy to understand as there are no over the top words which may be hard to understand Secondly, there would be some errors here and there as this book is still undergoing editing, so bear with me. So, that all. Enjoy your reading[img=strong] and don't mind the five star rating
Superb! The detailed depiction of the world and the presentation of the characters amazed me. I was about to say that Theovin and Ralph are a funny duo... that was until Theovin and Gold Song made me change my mind LOL. The plot and the author's skills are showing ,as I feel the urge to read more and more. Please keep updating the book and let us know mooorreee. P.S. Get better soon!
I would rate this book a 70. It doesn't just make Theovin and Rosy fall in love immediately and I also like the part where the demon attack the house and Theresa took.I 2ould say read this book it is great!.I have not been able to gift your book deer author and unlock as I only use for as I don't have coins. but I love this book deer author and continue t publish thing chapters as I cannot wait for the love triangle part of the book.
I just want everyone reading this to know that this Author is GOOD AF! Show me a flaw, but don't forget to tag 'THE PERFECT ONE'....
yeah, I completely agree real world sucks. I have been living for 35 years and still looking for something like fantasy in the real world, never happen harem to me, this place I can escape from the negativity real world. I tried...
Like the way you introduced your character and how the story continued developing and getting interesting ,your writing pattern is also good
The first 5 chapters are very important to make readers attracted to your novel and yes, you got a catch there. However, you can still improve on the quality of writing, grammar and punctuations. Story development is quite fast and it's good. But you need to add more on the feeling part. I've added some paragraph comments on this on how to expand it. It's great to have a new author with fresh ideas! I'm looking forward to your success.
It's really good! I would recommend this book to those that like a good story! Keep it up we need more chapters of this! Good development in the recent chapters as well
The words I have for this book is Lovely Chaos. There is not too many chapters posted, but I am definitely keeping my eyes on this one. Some typos and debatable word choices used, but nothing a good edit won't fix. Keep up the good work.
Hey authored here! I just wanted to let you know what you are in for when you start reading this book. First off, it's easy to understand as there are no over the top words which may be hard to understand Secondly, there would be some errors here and there as this book is still undergoing editing, so bear with me. So, that all. Enjoy your reading[img=strong] and don't mind the five star rating