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King of the skies: I reincarnated as a bird?!

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In the Year 2222, all Humans in the Universe were forced to take part in a higher Being's Scheme, not as fellow Schemers but as mere Pawns.

Pawns that can become much greater Pieces should they walk the right Path that is unique to them.

Watch as our main Character and all of Humanity struggle to survive in a new and deadly Environment, where survival is all but guaranteed.

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  1. Atrox_ashborn
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RiCrease

Shameless review of the author :) I am trying to make sure my writing is as correct as possible, but I could improve in many ways, hope I get better!

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Madness101

love it so far. like the idea of the person is bird creature, I also like how it l All is build up

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Although there are only 4 chapters as of writing this it pretty good somethings I have noticed are: • it’s very fast paced, fast paced like so far he has evolved 3 time in 1 evolution and he has been captured and probably enslaved in 4 chapters. • next is character design, so far there hasn’t been to many characters to describe so take this with a grain of salt but it’s sub par as there isn’t much discretion of the characters other than size and colour but this might change as there are only 4 chapters and not that many characters. • third is the main character he is meh, he adapted very quickly like almost instantly, he has no problem eating raw fish right of the bat and he has no problem killing monsters either (don’t know about humans but he attacked a elf no problem). • I’m just going to go over the system real quickly, so far it’s just your generic system that answers questions, shows stats, skills and evolution options although the stat points rise quickly like he goes for 10-15 in stat to 200+ very quickly so there’s that. So that’s some of the things I’ve noticed this story has alot of potential in my opinion it just needs to improve the description of thing and maybe slow it down a bit. overall pretty good. Oh and take this review with a grain of salt as Im not gods at evaluating thing

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