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So he wakes up in visions body, everything goes the way it does in cannon except he saves Pietro and the fight against Ultron was fast a simple. But he’s been a bit of a push over and he has the same personality of vision with only knowledge of the marvel universe manly MCU. He also assimilates the Ultron code and when asked if it’s okay his Ai says yes, somthing Ultron would say. Then it says it ganna takes 13 hours to assimilate even though he’s a super computer powered by the mind stone. “You’re wrong because Ultron instantly copied himself throughout the internet that’s how Ultron mostly survived encounters with the avengers in general same with MCU he is jumping body to new body his data. He even taunts Stark and said I on quote “I’m already there”. Plus vision instantly hacks Ultron destroyed Ultron control inside the internet in seconds so saying 13 hours is a need to vision computing power. Even Ultron was downloaded Visions body at 86% (time frame)[doctor connected Ultron to Vision, Wanda undid mind control , Ultron shoot the doctor and transported the casket inside the truck until cap annoyed Ultron and stop the download at 86%] that’s not 13 hours. And what if Ultron succeeded and it’s not even 13 hours. The smallest data of Ultron can literally survive in the smallest radio wave that can instantly be copied” -NewGoldie Sums up what I feel in this moment. Then want teaches him about “thanks” “gratitude” like was he not a human beforehand? So now the aurther is making an ooc Vision that has meta-knowledge. And for some reason he thinks Wanda is some naïve girl who is innocent witch is dumb as well as look at all the things she does. She mind controls and literally nearly kills almost all the people in her town and the averages. The aurther just does not want to accept that she is like that but gets better. Also the twins don’t get punished for all the stuff they did as well. Now he’s just ganna babysit the avengers with making sure civil war does not happen and wandavision and not dying in infinity war. So the basic things anyone would do, the aurther is making nothing interesting other than an mc in vision and even then the MC is so basic that he keeps talking about a person named Simon who he is probably gay for by the amount he mentions him by.
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this might as well be one of the best MCU fanfics I have ever read. Also please come back I miss this Fic. Someone has to do the work marvel and Disney is incapable of doing.
Giving this five stars because when I read chapter one on Scribblehub I was hooked and have been waiting for more and now I found over 100 here! On him so excited to read all of this!
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This book is amazing! The writing is so good, it keeps you totally into it from the start. The story unfolds perfectly, and you're hooked the whole way. The characters feel real, and the world-building is just stunning! I'd totally give it 5 stars. Got any fanfiction that's as awesome as this book?
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Go and check out[ I AM SCUM!SO WHAT ] also good luck to this author and I'm also MCU so I Love your story. keep it up.
"This story is very well-rounded. I enjoy all aspects of it. The battles are incredible, the sense of development, and the upgrades by Vision are exciting and refreshing. I applaud you for creating such a complex character like an android. Making him seem just like a robot would have been boring to read, but making him act human would have been nonsensical. I believe you found the perfect balance. My only two complaints would be the lack of drama, which is almost nonexistent. I've noticed that you do your best to either skip it or keep it in the background. Nobody wants melodrama, but some drama is needed to fully develop the characters as real. Additionally, the overcentralization in Vision's point of view. It would be nice to know what the other characters are thinking, doing, or even how they react to his actions. Despite these two points, the story is going really strong."
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It was great in the earlier chapters but because the MC is too OP, it got boring later. Still a good book to read if you're bored.
Great Story. I love how the Character grows, learns from his Mistakes and overcomes them. The Romance is also very good. No Harem Nonsense. -I'm her and writing a review-
nice story..................................................................................................................................................................
This is a really good book so far at chapter 27 and I’m loving it highly recommend must read!!!
Honestly one of the best marvel fanfic so far , I always thought that vision has one of the highest potentials between the avengers if not the highest and this novel expands on that , by the time thanos comes he would be annihilated like the what if version 😀
Op mc with infinity stone and system from the beginning, what can possibly posses a threat to him? Nothing, he can simply fly to the vast universe to get stronger, but no. He is f*cling around founding useless, weak characters and forming team with them to protect Earth. From Thanos ? Original Vision may suck, but our mc is different, he can use mind stone energy and cut Thanos in countless pieces. Also, go learn f*cling magic, teleport to his throne and kill him, while he has 1 infinity stone. 100 times easier than training useless team and slaying thanos in solo, while they shouting how cool mc is. Stop writing ch for word count, it was ok at the beginning (40ch), when there were interactions needed for the plot progress. Now they are only for word count, simply ocean of water.
Vision tends to forget that he is a robot, the fact that the robot part has taken over these human feelings disturbs the story. How he's seen is really important to him because people have just fought an overly independent AI. The presence of the X-Men has absolutely complicated everything because it means that he is no longer in the sacred timeline, so he no longer has any advance knowledge, the author has forgotten the concept of the butterfly effect, the X- Men would have helped in the battle of NY. If the X-Men and Fantastic 4 existed, SHIELD wouldn't need the majority of the Avengers when it could have had people with superpowers on its cut. Hydra would have been more difficult to kill but above all the X-Men would have had more interest in killing them. Vision should have left with Thor, he would have been delighted because as a human who is now in a fictional world with aliens and other planets, there is no point in staying on earth and being on the government surveillance and the Avengers. He shows no fear or excitement of being in Marvel, he follows dialogue, talks like a robot. Don't do anything serious when if he had gone with Thor he would have fought, dragons, other aliens, the guy who would trigger Ragnarok, Vision could put on some kind of glamor that would make him human in the eyes of others so coming back to earth looking like something more human and that while Thor went to fight Hela he could have come back and announced the coming of Thanos talking about his travels to other planets without Thor and so the prepare for the coming of Thanos. Splitting the children of Thanos came the kidnapped in half, kept the stone and fought with it. In short, it would have been more useful.
I love tis ..................................................................................................................................................................................................
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this fanfic has too much filler mumblings, and worse author is going open marvel world like he is planing to write 2000 chapters CN novel instead of focus on characters of interest author keeps pulling more characters we don't care about for screen time and the ones we care to read about are nowehere to be found in this fanfic thor tony hulk are basically gone steve apears rarely and shortly wanda vision romance? not before the sun shape shift to white Dwarf this fanfic is still readable if you skip most of the lines that are not dialogue but can't honestly rate this more than 2 star
vision is weak in mcu and in this fic when he literally got the infinity stone and knowledge about mcu also the pacing is slow it feels like author wants to write a thousand chapter cn
So he wakes up in visions body, everything goes the way it does in cannon except he saves Pietro and the fight against Ultron was fast a simple. But he’s been a bit of a push over and he has the same personality of vision with only knowledge of the marvel universe manly MCU. He also assimilates the Ultron code and when asked if it’s okay his Ai says yes, somthing Ultron would say. Then it says it ganna takes 13 hours to assimilate even though he’s a super computer powered by the mind stone. “You’re wrong because Ultron instantly copied himself throughout the internet that’s how Ultron mostly survived encounters with the avengers in general same with MCU he is jumping body to new body his data. He even taunts Stark and said I on quote “I’m already there”. Plus vision instantly hacks Ultron destroyed Ultron control inside the internet in seconds so saying 13 hours is a need to vision computing power. Even Ultron was downloaded Visions body at 86% (time frame)[doctor connected Ultron to Vision, Wanda undid mind control , Ultron shoot the doctor and transported the casket inside the truck until cap annoyed Ultron and stop the download at 86%] that’s not 13 hours. And what if Ultron succeeded and it’s not even 13 hours. The smallest data of Ultron can literally survive in the smallest radio wave that can instantly be copied” -NewGoldie Sums up what I feel in this moment. Then want teaches him about “thanks” “gratitude” like was he not a human beforehand? So now the aurther is making an ooc Vision that has meta-knowledge. And for some reason he thinks Wanda is some naïve girl who is innocent witch is dumb as well as look at all the things she does. She mind controls and literally nearly kills almost all the people in her town and the averages. The aurther just does not want to accept that she is like that but gets better. Also the twins don’t get punished for all the stuff they did as well. Now he’s just ganna babysit the avengers with making sure civil war does not happen and wandavision and not dying in infinity war. So the basic things anyone would do, the aurther is making nothing interesting other than an mc in vision and even then the MC is so basic that he keeps talking about a person named Simon who he is probably gay for by the amount he mentions him by.
Tiết lộ Spoiler this might as well be one of the best MCU fanfics I have ever read. Also please come back I miss this Fic. Someone has to do the work marvel and Disney is incapable of doing.
Giving this five stars because when I read chapter one on Scribblehub I was hooked and have been waiting for more and now I found over 100 here! On him so excited to read all of this!
Foi de 100/ a 0 em menos de 13 capítulo 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄😅🙄😅🙄😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅
This book is amazing! The writing is so good, it keeps you totally into it from the start. The story unfolds perfectly, and you're hooked the whole way. The characters feel real, and the world-building is just stunning! I'd totally give it 5 stars. Got any fanfiction that's as awesome as this book?
the reason I'm here [img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=proud]
Go and check out[ I AM SCUM!SO WHAT ] also good luck to this author and I'm also MCU so I Love your story. keep it up.
"This story is very well-rounded. I enjoy all aspects of it. The battles are incredible, the sense of development, and the upgrades by Vision are exciting and refreshing. I applaud you for creating such a complex character like an android. Making him seem just like a robot would have been boring to read, but making him act human would have been nonsensical. I believe you found the perfect balance. My only two complaints would be the lack of drama, which is almost nonexistent. I've noticed that you do your best to either skip it or keep it in the background. Nobody wants melodrama, but some drama is needed to fully develop the characters as real. Additionally, the overcentralization in Vision's point of view. It would be nice to know what the other characters are thinking, doing, or even how they react to his actions. Despite these two points, the story is going really strong."
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It was great in the earlier chapters but because the MC is too OP, it got boring later. Still a good book to read if you're bored.
Great Story. I love how the Character grows, learns from his Mistakes and overcomes them. The Romance is also very good. No Harem Nonsense. -I'm her and writing a review-
nice story..................................................................................................................................................................
This is a really good book so far at chapter 27 and I’m loving it highly recommend must read!!!
Honestly one of the best marvel fanfic so far , I always thought that vision has one of the highest potentials between the avengers if not the highest and this novel expands on that , by the time thanos comes he would be annihilated like the what if version 😀
Op mc with infinity stone and system from the beginning, what can possibly posses a threat to him? Nothing, he can simply fly to the vast universe to get stronger, but no. He is f*cling around founding useless, weak characters and forming team with them to protect Earth. From Thanos ? Original Vision may suck, but our mc is different, he can use mind stone energy and cut Thanos in countless pieces. Also, go learn f*cling magic, teleport to his throne and kill him, while he has 1 infinity stone. 100 times easier than training useless team and slaying thanos in solo, while they shouting how cool mc is. Stop writing ch for word count, it was ok at the beginning (40ch), when there were interactions needed for the plot progress. Now they are only for word count, simply ocean of water.
Vision tends to forget that he is a robot, the fact that the robot part has taken over these human feelings disturbs the story. How he's seen is really important to him because people have just fought an overly independent AI. The presence of the X-Men has absolutely complicated everything because it means that he is no longer in the sacred timeline, so he no longer has any advance knowledge, the author has forgotten the concept of the butterfly effect, the X- Men would have helped in the battle of NY. If the X-Men and Fantastic 4 existed, SHIELD wouldn't need the majority of the Avengers when it could have had people with superpowers on its cut. Hydra would have been more difficult to kill but above all the X-Men would have had more interest in killing them. Vision should have left with Thor, he would have been delighted because as a human who is now in a fictional world with aliens and other planets, there is no point in staying on earth and being on the government surveillance and the Avengers. He shows no fear or excitement of being in Marvel, he follows dialogue, talks like a robot. Don't do anything serious when if he had gone with Thor he would have fought, dragons, other aliens, the guy who would trigger Ragnarok, Vision could put on some kind of glamor that would make him human in the eyes of others so coming back to earth looking like something more human and that while Thor went to fight Hela he could have come back and announced the coming of Thanos talking about his travels to other planets without Thor and so the prepare for the coming of Thanos. Splitting the children of Thanos came the kidnapped in half, kept the stone and fought with it. In short, it would have been more useful.
I love tis ..................................................................................................................................................................................................
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this fanfic has too much filler mumblings, and worse author is going open marvel world like he is planing to write 2000 chapters CN novel instead of focus on characters of interest author keeps pulling more characters we don't care about for screen time and the ones we care to read about are nowehere to be found in this fanfic thor tony hulk are basically gone steve apears rarely and shortly wanda vision romance? not before the sun shape shift to white Dwarf this fanfic is still readable if you skip most of the lines that are not dialogue but can't honestly rate this more than 2 star
vision is weak in mcu and in this fic when he literally got the infinity stone and knowledge about mcu also the pacing is slow it feels like author wants to write a thousand chapter cn