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NegansPalace

A shameless author here. Experience the madness of a boy who lost everything and went crazy. Who loved and lost, join in on his newfound adventures as he explores the new world he finds himself in.

1yr
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Mick_Jagger

Archer is the most PATHETIC dragon ever.

21h
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Lord_Progenitor

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11d
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Obito_x_Rin3

I like the novel as of chapter 300 it has a good sense of adventure and a solid characters. There’s only a few things that irk me with this novel. 1. Is how quickly he collects women 2. The lack of training doesn’t give us much information about the power levels I the world. I know he does train with teulia at night but the author does not go in depth on it so you don’t really see the improvement. 3. The fast pace of the story makes it hard to keep up with it. One chapter he’ll be at his in laws palace and the next he will already be picking up his next princess. It makes the story feel like a summary more than a novel sometimes because things that would most of the be arcs in other stories take 10 chapters max in this story. 4. Another one is the lack of good fights. I know he’s supposed to be overpowered but it seems like he is the strongest character in the novel already. Everywhere he went he saved a kingdom. So are they just weak kingdoms or is he that strong because of all white dragons were that strong the last one wouldn’t have been defeated.

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14d
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PurpleEnigmas

Love the story immensely world feels alive character development is amazing the only one thing I don’t like as much is how it seems every girl he gets with in the far later chapters, like there isn’t a girl that is just a friend they either wanna marry him or kill him. Even his past life mom and sisters lol I get it he ain’t biologically related still a little weird imo tho :/ (other than that easily top 10 novels on the site for me)

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24d
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DaoistccXeDJ

terlalu delusi, bagaimana bisa dia mengklaim sebuah kota dengan kejam membunuh prajurit tidak bersalah dan dilihat sebagai pahlawan

28d
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YanderesHunter

I hated this novel in the first chapters because of the protagonist's psychotic personality, but fortunately I didn't give up reading it and now it's one of my favorite stories. I'm a fan of harems and yanderes, so it fits my taste perfectly.

1mth
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Alejandro_Montas

I saw your fandom page would ever go back and update it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] it looks awesome by the way I want to see what it looks like when it’s updated

2mth
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arestingtanker

its about time I leave a review the book is amazing in my view there are chapter that are boring but that's to be expected, the start if the book feels a little wierd and can be of putting, but if you can read into the far chapter it picks up really well archer seems very over power and he is but there are still force that dwarf him in strength and he doesn't have a smooth sail all the way the author has a planning his following it, summary make it past those odd. chapters and the book tells a really good story.

3mth
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beggusneggus

Honestly the story is pretty great and world building is absolutely amazing, only downsides are the mc gets randomly nerfed which is incredibly annoying and the writing has too much detail like I picture the scene in the first paragraph no need to add to more. But overall pretty great story.

3mth
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BigGorilla

Keep this up :) ! [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Loving it]

3mth
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Daoistjw8fOc

author it seem aeris missing in the story after they went to aquaria? just asking

4mth
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UNKNOWN_MASKMAN

who is this ayrenn and when will sje she meet archer ?

4mth
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omnioutergod

will this be continued even after even becomes a god author?

4mth
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SWORDGOD_ETERNITY

author discord link is not working 😕. ..

6mth
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Abhinav_Marka_1109

This novel represents one of the best novels in recent times along with the best in the world background building, character design, story development, writing quality along with updating stability

6mth
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CHAOS_FOOLISH

I came here again to do another review because I just can't help it. I love this work and I can firmly say that it is my favorite, every time I read a new chapter I get goosebumps, especially in Frostholm's story, where I read and re-read several times. I would like to congratulate the author for the great work, I'm already reading it again for the fourth time!

8mth
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Jordzfml

it's really difficult remembering all these different nations on top of the nations on the other continents aswell tbh

8mth
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ShiroNeko280

Well, whoever reads this novel will be addicted. It's a masterpiece after all 😍

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10mth
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ShiroNeko280

Don't read it because you'll totally get addicted to this unless you want to 😉

11mth
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omnioutergod

I'm on page around 200 will archer become a god in the future author or no

1yr
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AncestorDuck

Hello dear NegansPalace, Is a wiki already planned for this novel? If not, I would like to create one, if it's alright for you. I would appreciate an answer.

1yr
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FUCKYOUWEBNOVEL111

no Yuri?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

1yr
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Kaniu
LV 1 Badge

here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse

1yr
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Emo_Elmo

I've been on here for months but this is my first review. I really love the story, the world building is great. The Mc is great he is not a soft hero wanna-be and does what is necessary. I love that he doesn't hide his dragon characteristics I personally like non human Mc and them hiding it is a turn off. I just love the story and am looking forward for more chapters from the author!

1yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
legends0356

Everything about world building is great. The writing quality is phenomenal. my issue is with the story development. the pacing is really weird. The story spends a lot of time describing scenery and characters that only appear in the story for 1 or 2 chapters. important events almost seem rushed compared to the other events. Introduces lots of characters that don't end up holding much importance to the story.

1yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
kurayamikage

this story is good and I can't find anything bad about it I recommend this novel it's awesome and by the way how can I join your discord author??

1yr
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SalvificDeath

What stuck with me from this novel was the harem. I actually remember each of the womens' names and who they are because of how well their characters were portrayed, and from how we got to know them deeper, be it from their backstories or through Archers's eyes and descriptions. The author never neglects any of them and makes sure they all get their own spotlight. And true to his words, Archer loves and cares about them all deeply and equally. He never favours one over the other. Which is heartwarming, and so are their interactions with him 🤗I must admit I did make it a habit to scroll through most stuff, since they seemed 'too much' for me, information and story wise, but they didn't hinder me from reading the essential parts and getting a grasp of the overall story. His growth, character development, plot and xxx scenes kept me going. Needless they were good enough that I never once thought of dropping the novel and powered through it easily.All in all, I'd recommend it. It's very sweet AND THERE IS NO NTR OR YURI, which I love 😌

1yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Legends124

Author where did you make your book cover from? Please tell me!🙏🙏

1yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Mack_McBride

only novel I've topped up my coins for and it was worth every penny. You're doing a fantastic job man don't stop

1yr
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Spelspam

honestly, I love the story it's great, though. I gotta say the fluff scenes aren't that enjoyable at all, for instance, ch 274. also, one thing I feel strange to me is that it seems like no one likes Yuri in harem stories. like man, I swear yall are insecure virgins.

1yr
Xem 2 lời trả lời
NegansPalace

A shameless author here. Experience the madness of a boy who lost everything and went crazy. Who loved and lost, join in on his newfound adventures as he explores the new world he finds himself in.

1yr
Xem 73 lời trả lời
Mick_Jagger

Archer is the most PATHETIC dragon ever.

21h
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Lord_Progenitor

…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….

img
11d
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Obito_x_Rin3

I like the novel as of chapter 300 it has a good sense of adventure and a solid characters. There’s only a few things that irk me with this novel. 1. Is how quickly he collects women 2. The lack of training doesn’t give us much information about the power levels I the world. I know he does train with teulia at night but the author does not go in depth on it so you don’t really see the improvement. 3. The fast pace of the story makes it hard to keep up with it. One chapter he’ll be at his in laws palace and the next he will already be picking up his next princess. It makes the story feel like a summary more than a novel sometimes because things that would most of the be arcs in other stories take 10 chapters max in this story. 4. Another one is the lack of good fights. I know he’s supposed to be overpowered but it seems like he is the strongest character in the novel already. Everywhere he went he saved a kingdom. So are they just weak kingdoms or is he that strong because of all white dragons were that strong the last one wouldn’t have been defeated.

Tiết lộ Spoiler
14d
Xem 1 lời trả lời
PurpleEnigmas

Love the story immensely world feels alive character development is amazing the only one thing I don’t like as much is how it seems every girl he gets with in the far later chapters, like there isn’t a girl that is just a friend they either wanna marry him or kill him. Even his past life mom and sisters lol I get it he ain’t biologically related still a little weird imo tho :/ (other than that easily top 10 novels on the site for me)

Tiết lộ Spoiler
24d
Xem 0 lời trả lời
DaoistccXeDJ

terlalu delusi, bagaimana bisa dia mengklaim sebuah kota dengan kejam membunuh prajurit tidak bersalah dan dilihat sebagai pahlawan

28d
Xem 3 lời trả lời
YanderesHunter

I hated this novel in the first chapters because of the protagonist's psychotic personality, but fortunately I didn't give up reading it and now it's one of my favorite stories. I'm a fan of harems and yanderes, so it fits my taste perfectly.

1mth
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Alejandro_Montas

I saw your fandom page would ever go back and update it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] it looks awesome by the way I want to see what it looks like when it’s updated

2mth
Xem 1 lời trả lời
arestingtanker

its about time I leave a review the book is amazing in my view there are chapter that are boring but that's to be expected, the start if the book feels a little wierd and can be of putting, but if you can read into the far chapter it picks up really well archer seems very over power and he is but there are still force that dwarf him in strength and he doesn't have a smooth sail all the way the author has a planning his following it, summary make it past those odd. chapters and the book tells a really good story.

3mth
Xem 2 lời trả lời
beggusneggus

Honestly the story is pretty great and world building is absolutely amazing, only downsides are the mc gets randomly nerfed which is incredibly annoying and the writing has too much detail like I picture the scene in the first paragraph no need to add to more. But overall pretty great story.

3mth
Xem 1 lời trả lời
BigGorilla

Keep this up :) ! [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Loving it]

3mth
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Daoistjw8fOc

author it seem aeris missing in the story after they went to aquaria? just asking

4mth
Xem 1 lời trả lời
UNKNOWN_MASKMAN

who is this ayrenn and when will sje she meet archer ?

4mth
Xem 1 lời trả lời
omnioutergod

will this be continued even after even becomes a god author?

4mth
Xem 1 lời trả lời
SWORDGOD_ETERNITY

author discord link is not working 😕. ..

6mth
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Abhinav_Marka_1109

This novel represents one of the best novels in recent times along with the best in the world background building, character design, story development, writing quality along with updating stability

6mth
Xem 1 lời trả lời
CHAOS_FOOLISH

I came here again to do another review because I just can't help it. I love this work and I can firmly say that it is my favorite, every time I read a new chapter I get goosebumps, especially in Frostholm's story, where I read and re-read several times. I would like to congratulate the author for the great work, I'm already reading it again for the fourth time!

8mth
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Jordzfml

it's really difficult remembering all these different nations on top of the nations on the other continents aswell tbh

8mth
Xem 2 lời trả lời
ShiroNeko280

Well, whoever reads this novel will be addicted. It's a masterpiece after all 😍

img
10mth
Xem 2 lời trả lời
ShiroNeko280

Don't read it because you'll totally get addicted to this unless you want to 😉

11mth
Xem 2 lời trả lời
omnioutergod

I'm on page around 200 will archer become a god in the future author or no

1yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
AncestorDuck

Hello dear NegansPalace, Is a wiki already planned for this novel? If not, I would like to create one, if it's alright for you. I would appreciate an answer.

1yr
Xem 3 lời trả lời
FUCKYOUWEBNOVEL111

no Yuri?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

1yr
Xem 2 lời trả lời
Kaniu
LV 1 Badge

here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse

1yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Emo_Elmo

I've been on here for months but this is my first review. I really love the story, the world building is great. The Mc is great he is not a soft hero wanna-be and does what is necessary. I love that he doesn't hide his dragon characteristics I personally like non human Mc and them hiding it is a turn off. I just love the story and am looking forward for more chapters from the author!

1yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
legends0356

Everything about world building is great. The writing quality is phenomenal. my issue is with the story development. the pacing is really weird. The story spends a lot of time describing scenery and characters that only appear in the story for 1 or 2 chapters. important events almost seem rushed compared to the other events. Introduces lots of characters that don't end up holding much importance to the story.

1yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
kurayamikage

this story is good and I can't find anything bad about it I recommend this novel it's awesome and by the way how can I join your discord author??

1yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
SalvificDeath

What stuck with me from this novel was the harem. I actually remember each of the womens' names and who they are because of how well their characters were portrayed, and from how we got to know them deeper, be it from their backstories or through Archers's eyes and descriptions. The author never neglects any of them and makes sure they all get their own spotlight. And true to his words, Archer loves and cares about them all deeply and equally. He never favours one over the other. Which is heartwarming, and so are their interactions with him 🤗I must admit I did make it a habit to scroll through most stuff, since they seemed 'too much' for me, information and story wise, but they didn't hinder me from reading the essential parts and getting a grasp of the overall story. His growth, character development, plot and xxx scenes kept me going. Needless they were good enough that I never once thought of dropping the novel and powered through it easily.All in all, I'd recommend it. It's very sweet AND THERE IS NO NTR OR YURI, which I love 😌

1yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Legends124

Author where did you make your book cover from? Please tell me!🙏🙏

1yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Mack_McBride

only novel I've topped up my coins for and it was worth every penny. You're doing a fantastic job man don't stop

1yr
Xem 2 lời trả lời
Spelspam

honestly, I love the story it's great, though. I gotta say the fluff scenes aren't that enjoyable at all, for instance, ch 274. also, one thing I feel strange to me is that it seems like no one likes Yuri in harem stories. like man, I swear yall are insecure virgins.

1yr
Xem 2 lời trả lời
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