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Just caught up with the story. Really good book. Nice slow-paced gaming story with underlying revenge plot.Writing Quality: Nice writing, some misspellings, and grammar errors. But nothing really bad.Story Development: Start off with standard reincarnation, but with revenge plot. MC had a bad first life and is now loving a better second life. Now having fun playing a VRMMORPG, while also trying to get revenge on those who hurt him.Character Design: MC has trauma! First life scarred him, and now he lives better in the second life. He is a bit more cautious, but that's normal. He is a noob in the VRMMORPG, slowly figuring things out. He has done some research but is mostly having fun playing the game. Has a supportive/outgoing cousin and new in-game friend to help him out.Update Stability: Just caught up, so I don't know the schedule.World Building: A VRMMORPG with everyone being the hero of their own story. MC has a unique storyline just for him. NPCs are realistic and act human, but there is a realism setting for the game. Lots of lore and setting up for MC's future adventure.Really good read. I can't wait for more. Keep up the great work.
this novel is amazing to say the least, if there are words that are better for it then i'll use them. I love the build and the plots here, plus the original ideas that you put into the story.
I am writing this as of C44. Really been enjoying this series so far, it has been really consistent and fun with plenty of charm. It has a lot of potential!
You deserve five stars, it's the humor for me and literally depicting a seen with truck-kun is amazing, I loved the chapter 1 and how smoothly it went, your book is amazing.
I love your story. Maybe you need more dialogue in your story, but it's just maybe since I just a newbie
What can I say about this story besides that it is a good read? There are so many elements that I enjoyed. The monster's names are a bit weird though.
I really, I didn't think I would but I did. I really like Lixin's personality. If I went through what he did I wouldn't be that sane. Some details reminded me of Momocatt's other work Haven Online but it was only fleeting. 2 thumbs up!
I am wholeheartedly rooting for MC. The beginning is intriguing abd the writing is good. Author did well with scenes depicting panic, fear and crippling anxiety.
Momocatt. I love you. You're dear to my heart. But your sadistic tendencies to kill off your main character so they could get their second chances SCARE ME. My baby Lixin didn't deserve that, like for real. Anyway, writing quality is off the charts for this one, you really rode the flow for it, I was caught up in reading it, but I didn't forget a couple of teasing paragraph comments for you to smile! Story development is smooth like butter~ Chef's kiss, 5 star Michelin~ I Solemnly Declare I'm a SIMP for Morpheus. I'd love to draw him. I can just imagine him in pumps with open toes and in half tied ceremonial kimono with traditional Beijing Opera make up. World background, I need to know more. You've got X13, and it dissolves! Tell me more! Talk to me, and I'll be your girl, like I was for HO!
And that's a banging beginning. I really loved, live for it. But the trauma really hit me hard. Well, if it gives depth to the character, I understand. You really brought out the worst out of people and made it your weapon. The second chapter was really powerful, applause for that. Descriptions and characters really made it worthwhile, I'm glad I picked it up on recommendation. It's a work in its infancy, but lots of potential here, and I won't hesitate to give it all 5 stars. Characters are relatable and 3-dimensional, something you've been carrying from your rookie days, story development is great, no hitches anywhere, and I'm nitpicky. World background has given us just enough satiate some curiosity, I really want to know more, so I will be patiently waiting for you to write more. I'm ''hooked.''
Okay, so what did I expect from the person who wrote Haven Online? I expected a good VRMMO style novel with engaging characters and a main character that died a gruesome death lololol! I was right, but omg, this was so freaking engaging! I was so in it that I read it all in just an hour and now I have to write for fricking updates, and that just ain't fair! I even did the Persona test, and I got the Ore fella (yummy, you know author ;) ) Seriously, you made it so angsty at the beginning, but I can't wait to see the revenge plot, I want it bad! Writing quality is superb, descriptions on point and no awkward placements, I laughed with the witty lines! Story development is solid like a rock, bae! Character design is flawless, all characters feel 3D, but I would love more interaction between Zeyu and Lixin, best bros! World BG is still unexplored, but you've revealed just enough for me to feel intrigued! The pods, the language chip, I wanna know more! Author-sama, please! Mwah mwah mwah!
Ugh, I don't even like doing reviews, but I'm doing it for you. The book is decent, although it can be a bit slow at times. The world-building is pretty cool though. I can't wait until the revenge starts and can we talk about the food?! More descriptions of delicious eats would make this book way better. The names of the monsters are pretty out there, but I'm living for it. Like, the weirder the better, you know? That's pretty much it, so peace out.
Oh my gosh, I'm just loving this book! I'm super curious to see how the fact that he's a koi fish will come into play. Plus, his skills are awesome! Even though it's got a bit of a dark vibe, I can't help but feel totally enchanted by it. It's like a little bit of magic in every page, you know? Overall, I'm just totally hooked like a little fishy on a line. This book is definitely a keeper!
OMG, this is such a good novel. I love love how the storyline element of the game. Also, his fighting using tea is so cool and different. I can't wait to see other battles!
Hi Author-san, just curious but does Haven Online have a remake, if I remember correctly wasn't it supposed to be discontinued due to pacing with the ML a year or so back? or is it completed now since I cant seem to see the announcement chapters in there anymore😕
Just caught up with the story. Really good book. Nice slow-paced gaming story with underlying revenge plot.Writing Quality: Nice writing, some misspellings, and grammar errors. But nothing really bad.Story Development: Start off with standard reincarnation, but with revenge plot. MC had a bad first life and is now loving a better second life. Now having fun playing a VRMMORPG, while also trying to get revenge on those who hurt him.Character Design: MC has trauma! First life scarred him, and now he lives better in the second life. He is a bit more cautious, but that's normal. He is a noob in the VRMMORPG, slowly figuring things out. He has done some research but is mostly having fun playing the game. Has a supportive/outgoing cousin and new in-game friend to help him out.Update Stability: Just caught up, so I don't know the schedule.World Building: A VRMMORPG with everyone being the hero of their own story. MC has a unique storyline just for him. NPCs are realistic and act human, but there is a realism setting for the game. Lots of lore and setting up for MC's future adventure.Really good read. I can't wait for more. Keep up the great work.
this novel is amazing to say the least, if there are words that are better for it then i'll use them. I love the build and the plots here, plus the original ideas that you put into the story.
I am writing this as of C44. Really been enjoying this series so far, it has been really consistent and fun with plenty of charm. It has a lot of potential!
You deserve five stars, it's the humor for me and literally depicting a seen with truck-kun is amazing, I loved the chapter 1 and how smoothly it went, your book is amazing.
I love your story. Maybe you need more dialogue in your story, but it's just maybe since I just a newbie
What can I say about this story besides that it is a good read? There are so many elements that I enjoyed. The monster's names are a bit weird though.
I really, I didn't think I would but I did. I really like Lixin's personality. If I went through what he did I wouldn't be that sane. Some details reminded me of Momocatt's other work Haven Online but it was only fleeting. 2 thumbs up!
I am wholeheartedly rooting for MC. The beginning is intriguing abd the writing is good. Author did well with scenes depicting panic, fear and crippling anxiety.
Momocatt. I love you. You're dear to my heart. But your sadistic tendencies to kill off your main character so they could get their second chances SCARE ME. My baby Lixin didn't deserve that, like for real. Anyway, writing quality is off the charts for this one, you really rode the flow for it, I was caught up in reading it, but I didn't forget a couple of teasing paragraph comments for you to smile! Story development is smooth like butter~ Chef's kiss, 5 star Michelin~ I Solemnly Declare I'm a SIMP for Morpheus. I'd love to draw him. I can just imagine him in pumps with open toes and in half tied ceremonial kimono with traditional Beijing Opera make up. World background, I need to know more. You've got X13, and it dissolves! Tell me more! Talk to me, and I'll be your girl, like I was for HO!
And that's a banging beginning. I really loved, live for it. But the trauma really hit me hard. Well, if it gives depth to the character, I understand. You really brought out the worst out of people and made it your weapon. The second chapter was really powerful, applause for that. Descriptions and characters really made it worthwhile, I'm glad I picked it up on recommendation. It's a work in its infancy, but lots of potential here, and I won't hesitate to give it all 5 stars. Characters are relatable and 3-dimensional, something you've been carrying from your rookie days, story development is great, no hitches anywhere, and I'm nitpicky. World background has given us just enough satiate some curiosity, I really want to know more, so I will be patiently waiting for you to write more. I'm ''hooked.''
Okay, so what did I expect from the person who wrote Haven Online? I expected a good VRMMO style novel with engaging characters and a main character that died a gruesome death lololol! I was right, but omg, this was so freaking engaging! I was so in it that I read it all in just an hour and now I have to write for fricking updates, and that just ain't fair! I even did the Persona test, and I got the Ore fella (yummy, you know author ;) ) Seriously, you made it so angsty at the beginning, but I can't wait to see the revenge plot, I want it bad! Writing quality is superb, descriptions on point and no awkward placements, I laughed with the witty lines! Story development is solid like a rock, bae! Character design is flawless, all characters feel 3D, but I would love more interaction between Zeyu and Lixin, best bros! World BG is still unexplored, but you've revealed just enough for me to feel intrigued! The pods, the language chip, I wanna know more! Author-sama, please! Mwah mwah mwah!
Ugh, I don't even like doing reviews, but I'm doing it for you. The book is decent, although it can be a bit slow at times. The world-building is pretty cool though. I can't wait until the revenge starts and can we talk about the food?! More descriptions of delicious eats would make this book way better. The names of the monsters are pretty out there, but I'm living for it. Like, the weirder the better, you know? That's pretty much it, so peace out.
Oh my gosh, I'm just loving this book! I'm super curious to see how the fact that he's a koi fish will come into play. Plus, his skills are awesome! Even though it's got a bit of a dark vibe, I can't help but feel totally enchanted by it. It's like a little bit of magic in every page, you know? Overall, I'm just totally hooked like a little fishy on a line. This book is definitely a keeper!
OMG, this is such a good novel. I love love how the storyline element of the game. Also, his fighting using tea is so cool and different. I can't wait to see other battles!
Hi Author-san, just curious but does Haven Online have a remake, if I remember correctly wasn't it supposed to be discontinued due to pacing with the ML a year or so back? or is it completed now since I cant seem to see the announcement chapters in there anymore😕