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Mr_ZeroDagger07

worth the ride .keep it up and plz don't drop and need more chapters

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SageRaOne_7

Usually i write a detailed review But this is good .................. there are many miniscule mistakes but the story is engaging So /// i recommend it.

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8d
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Mister_Robot

It's a great attempt by the author. It's hard to believe they started learning English grammar at 18. They should be proud of themself for coming so far. I envy and appreciate such dedicated and talented ppl. That being said, the plot of this story is quite good and I don't have any complaints regarding grammar. What's offputting to me is the Main character. He's such an unlikable and irritating person. He keeps repeating how scared he is of women after his ex wife cheated on him and tried to ruin his life, yet he doesn't stop simping. I don't like harem but it would make more sense if he had casual flings and one night stands instead of clinging on to Reese Witherspoon and reminding the readers how he's intimidated by a relationship with a woman. Make him gay instead or asexual but ffs stop repeating the same thing. I love how the mc swims against the tides to complete his films and make them successful, however the story always is a stalemate when he turns into a simp.

1mth
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HopeNotToBe

As a fellow Filipino, sincerely hoping for you to be back, these stories are wasted without updates 😢

2mth
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Daoist2AOtGr

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2mth
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Alysson_Luiz

Estou amando essa história, esse universo continental está top demais, não vejo a hora por mais capítulos, continua com seu ótimo trabalho escritor 👍

3mth
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KAAL23

next chapters... .... .. ... .............

4mth
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Slingshot

hmm, sometimes the dialogues are really bad between characters, like it breaks the immersion for me. Hollywood insiders are people who have put on a show their whole lives, so them saying extremely unrealistic things just doesn't feel right for me

4mth
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Azazel_0919

Chap243................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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4mth
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KAAL23

When Are you going to Upload New Chapters Author.

4mth
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ReadingATM00

Is this book already dropped by the author?

5mth
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Worldofimagination

"Bro, the fic is really good, you can see the amount of effort the author puts into their writing. The research to create a fic like this must be extensive. Are there mistakes? Yes, of course, but they are totally passable, nothing too serious. The grammar is good, the details are well done, and the MC has only gotten with the hottest women so far. However, he's not the typical degenerate MC. The author promised a Hollywood-level fic and delivered exactly that. To me, what the author is doing is a true masterpiece. I only have one thing to say: 'let the author cook, because I want more!'"

5mth
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Aiden_silvereye

Imagine a 60 year old man working his whole life on film Sat/ film making but act like he has seen props and film star first time. Even after seeing harsh reality of Hollywood he saw actor and actress his role model after he return in the past Like a youth who just enters the society

5mth
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DaoistyQNGiX

Any author that admits that they never eat he’d something but still write about it deserve the 1/5 ratings. Literally says that they never watched Blair witch project but they decided to write about it lol nahhhhh I ain’t reading this garbage story any longer. Waste of time and if I knew you irl then I’d knock you out for wasting my time you POS

5mth
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Benny_gold

To be honest storys about Hollywood directors are stupid. If I haven’t seen the movie it’s fr just a lot of reading and it’s boring asf and I’m not gonna go to watch a movie for a FanFic so you should maybe just do a story about a failed musician reincarnating in the past when he was a child give him a system or photographic memory. and pick songs to fit his story and his feelings.

7mth
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Tim_QQQ

the drama is very poorly written. especially the the judges and his ex-wife, the dialogue is so unrealistic it broke all immersion. this happens again and again, none of the antagonists act like real people and the romance is terrible.

7mth
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byovevald

I like it. Especially something new, like its own cinematic universe, even if it consists of existing films. Of course, I wouldn't mind bout' the author's own action movie, it's quite difficult.

7mth
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Brian70707

dropped at 7 chapters Author could easily explain why he knows word for word everything from a script The author could easily have made it an alternate reality that removes most of the issues he/she doesn't people commented about this myself included and Author DOESN'T RESPOND TO ADDRESS THEM

8mth
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TheDreamery

I would love to see Kazir turning into what he wants to be, for him to find meaning in his life for he deserves it. It's why he has a second chance at life.

9mth
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0rochi

To where start? The pace is, not rushed or too quick. The writing is pretty good, but I believe it isn't written by a western man. It has also a good background development and a realistic character design. Give it a try.

9mth
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Azazel_0919

Chap160............................................….................................….................................….................................….................................….

10mth
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Hgoma
LV 4 Badge

great story 👏.flow of the story is good , protagonist is also showing visible growth, and it's fun to read this

10mth
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Azazel_0919

Chap149..................................………................................………................................………................................………................................………

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10mth
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Azazel_0919

Chap142...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................

11mth
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Hgoma
LV 4 Badge

I love this , I would have read the 120 chapters ahead on patreon if I wasn't broke🥹rooting for Kazir X Erica Mandez

11mth
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countdrac

mc is good slowly developing his ideas sory pace is up to now story is developing wellupdate speed is slow

11mth
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Insane_Fantasy

It's a good book. I enjoyed reading it and wish that I could read more. I'm not good with words, but all I can say is that to those who would stumbled upon this book, I recommend that you would give this book a try. I promised it would be worth your time.

11mth
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Azazel_0919

Chap129.......................…………..……….……......................…………..……….……........................…………..……….……......................…………..……….……........................…………..……….…….

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11mth
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William_Dante

It’s amazing story, but I see a problem almost every chapter. You have to make movies so can you please add the audience reaction so the story can be longer I don’t want this novel to finish too quickly

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1yr
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Drximira

otima historia ,gostei muito da parte da cosntrução do universo ,o autor poderia adicionar nesse universo a parte dos filmes de ação que envolve mulheres ,como atomic ,anne ,entre outros para ter um constraste maior e poder diversificar mais ainda a historia ,obg pela historia

1yr
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Mr_ZeroDagger07

worth the ride .keep it up and plz don't drop and need more chapters

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1d
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SageRaOne_7

Usually i write a detailed review But this is good .................. there are many miniscule mistakes but the story is engaging So /// i recommend it.

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8d
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Mister_Robot

It's a great attempt by the author. It's hard to believe they started learning English grammar at 18. They should be proud of themself for coming so far. I envy and appreciate such dedicated and talented ppl. That being said, the plot of this story is quite good and I don't have any complaints regarding grammar. What's offputting to me is the Main character. He's such an unlikable and irritating person. He keeps repeating how scared he is of women after his ex wife cheated on him and tried to ruin his life, yet he doesn't stop simping. I don't like harem but it would make more sense if he had casual flings and one night stands instead of clinging on to Reese Witherspoon and reminding the readers how he's intimidated by a relationship with a woman. Make him gay instead or asexual but ffs stop repeating the same thing. I love how the mc swims against the tides to complete his films and make them successful, however the story always is a stalemate when he turns into a simp.

1mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
HopeNotToBe

As a fellow Filipino, sincerely hoping for you to be back, these stories are wasted without updates 😢

2mth
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Daoist2AOtGr

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2mth
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Alysson_Luiz

Estou amando essa história, esse universo continental está top demais, não vejo a hora por mais capítulos, continua com seu ótimo trabalho escritor 👍

3mth
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KAAL23

next chapters... .... .. ... .............

4mth
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Slingshot

hmm, sometimes the dialogues are really bad between characters, like it breaks the immersion for me. Hollywood insiders are people who have put on a show their whole lives, so them saying extremely unrealistic things just doesn't feel right for me

4mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Azazel_0919

Chap243................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Tiết lộ Spoiler
4mth
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KAAL23

When Are you going to Upload New Chapters Author.

4mth
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ReadingATM00

Is this book already dropped by the author?

5mth
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Worldofimagination

"Bro, the fic is really good, you can see the amount of effort the author puts into their writing. The research to create a fic like this must be extensive. Are there mistakes? Yes, of course, but they are totally passable, nothing too serious. The grammar is good, the details are well done, and the MC has only gotten with the hottest women so far. However, he's not the typical degenerate MC. The author promised a Hollywood-level fic and delivered exactly that. To me, what the author is doing is a true masterpiece. I only have one thing to say: 'let the author cook, because I want more!'"

5mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Aiden_silvereye

Imagine a 60 year old man working his whole life on film Sat/ film making but act like he has seen props and film star first time. Even after seeing harsh reality of Hollywood he saw actor and actress his role model after he return in the past Like a youth who just enters the society

5mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
DaoistyQNGiX

Any author that admits that they never eat he’d something but still write about it deserve the 1/5 ratings. Literally says that they never watched Blair witch project but they decided to write about it lol nahhhhh I ain’t reading this garbage story any longer. Waste of time and if I knew you irl then I’d knock you out for wasting my time you POS

5mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Benny_gold

To be honest storys about Hollywood directors are stupid. If I haven’t seen the movie it’s fr just a lot of reading and it’s boring asf and I’m not gonna go to watch a movie for a FanFic so you should maybe just do a story about a failed musician reincarnating in the past when he was a child give him a system or photographic memory. and pick songs to fit his story and his feelings.

7mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Tim_QQQ

the drama is very poorly written. especially the the judges and his ex-wife, the dialogue is so unrealistic it broke all immersion. this happens again and again, none of the antagonists act like real people and the romance is terrible.

7mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
byovevald

I like it. Especially something new, like its own cinematic universe, even if it consists of existing films. Of course, I wouldn't mind bout' the author's own action movie, it's quite difficult.

7mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Brian70707

dropped at 7 chapters Author could easily explain why he knows word for word everything from a script The author could easily have made it an alternate reality that removes most of the issues he/she doesn't people commented about this myself included and Author DOESN'T RESPOND TO ADDRESS THEM

8mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
TheDreamery

I would love to see Kazir turning into what he wants to be, for him to find meaning in his life for he deserves it. It's why he has a second chance at life.

9mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
0rochi

To where start? The pace is, not rushed or too quick. The writing is pretty good, but I believe it isn't written by a western man. It has also a good background development and a realistic character design. Give it a try.

9mth
Xem 2 lời trả lời
Azazel_0919

Chap160............................................….................................….................................….................................….................................….

10mth
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Hgoma
LV 4 Badge

great story 👏.flow of the story is good , protagonist is also showing visible growth, and it's fun to read this

10mth
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Azazel_0919

Chap149..................................………................................………................................………................................………................................………

Tiết lộ Spoiler
10mth
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Azazel_0919

Chap142...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................

11mth
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Hgoma
LV 4 Badge

I love this , I would have read the 120 chapters ahead on patreon if I wasn't broke🥹rooting for Kazir X Erica Mandez

11mth
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countdrac

mc is good slowly developing his ideas sory pace is up to now story is developing wellupdate speed is slow

11mth
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Insane_Fantasy

It's a good book. I enjoyed reading it and wish that I could read more. I'm not good with words, but all I can say is that to those who would stumbled upon this book, I recommend that you would give this book a try. I promised it would be worth your time.

11mth
Xem 2 lời trả lời
Azazel_0919

Chap129.......................…………..……….……......................…………..……….……........................…………..……….……......................…………..……….……........................…………..……….…….

Tiết lộ Spoiler
11mth
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William_Dante

It’s amazing story, but I see a problem almost every chapter. You have to make movies so can you please add the audience reaction so the story can be longer I don’t want this novel to finish too quickly

img
1yr
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Drximira

otima historia ,gostei muito da parte da cosntrução do universo ,o autor poderia adicionar nesse universo a parte dos filmes de ação que envolve mulheres ,como atomic ,anne ,entre outros para ter um constraste maior e poder diversificar mais ainda a historia ,obg pela historia

1yr
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