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I reckon I will continue it down here. The story begins on a planet named Maia that has similar properties to Earth except they found a breakthrough with Nuclear Fusion and with that excess and available energy on their hands. Their Technology is more advanced compared to earth and it also makes their inhabitant more reliant on technology for their ease of life. But doomsday happens. What I have in mind when cooking this story; 1. The main idea of the story was the Nuclear Fusion thing and it escalates from there. 2. Before I create or solidify the story concept, I already dwell around creating monsters, like the one on DnD so you can expect monsters you are familiar with show up here and there. 3. It may be an apocalypse theme story but it won't be as grim dark as the theme; at least not in the first few arcs. 4. I will slowly explore the world and you can piece out the world's history, culture, and stuff. 5. This will be a character-driven story. Do try it, folks. Cheers~
If you want to read a novel in between the System genre, that its coherent and has a cool ideia of the appearance of the System, then you may give this a shot. To improve: Writing Quality: The only drawback here is the grammar. It has minor issues, punctuations missing and capitalizations. Nothing a good rewrite don't fix :)
I reckon I will continue it down here. The story begins on a planet named Maia that has similar properties to Earth except they found a breakthrough with Nuclear Fusion and with that excess and available energy on their hands. Their Technology is more advanced compared to earth and it also makes their inhabitant more reliant on technology for their ease of life. But doomsday happens. What I have in mind when cooking this story; 1. The main idea of the story was the Nuclear Fusion thing and it escalates from there. 2. Before I create or solidify the story concept, I already dwell around creating monsters, like the one on DnD so you can expect monsters you are familiar with show up here and there. 3. It may be an apocalypse theme story but it won't be as grim dark as the theme; at least not in the first few arcs. 4. I will slowly explore the world and you can piece out the world's history, culture, and stuff. 5. This will be a character-driven story. Do try it, folks. Cheers~
If you want to read a novel in between the System genre, that its coherent and has a cool ideia of the appearance of the System, then you may give this a shot. To improve: Writing Quality: The only drawback here is the grammar. It has minor issues, punctuations missing and capitalizations. Nothing a good rewrite don't fix :)