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Very interesting story. I love how the character in this story has a positive thinking. And also well described story. I highly recommend this novel to you guys because it has so many positive attitude in it. Good luck, Thor! 👍😊
Excellent writing structures and usage of grammar. Everything is very detailed, which is to my liking. Apart from stability of chapters published, everything is great. Keep up the good work!
Amazing storyline 🤩 Good grammar 👍 Pacing is on point 👌 Description is pretty short and still quite informative . Wonderful story author , your book is just wow and awesome please update more regularly!
A great work! Totally Impressed by the storyline. It really is gripping. Made me read every single chapter available. Please continue and keep up the good work Author San!
Elemental Tear is unique, showcasing a medieval fantasy-like world with mages, teras (brilliant creativity), and selected elemental-wielding heirs. The story follows the mc, Alex, who is discovered by the Church due to his fire abilities detected by the Orb. I'm usually not a fan of 3rd POV, but author delivered the narrative perfectly without repeating the same phrases etc. Keep up the good work!!
Good work Author! The plots seems interesting and the world background quickly grabs one's attention. I feel quite impressed by the way you described the world's situation. Best of Luck Author! Keep it up!
This novel is great. The story focus on Alex who inherited the fire element according to the prophecy of the Church. This is the usual "hero's journey" trope but I am liking it. The characters are also interesting and their world-building as well. I don't have anything else to say other than keep writing! ^_^
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Wow. I must say, I was pleasantly surprised by this! From the first chapter, you did a great job of setting the tone of the plot and storyline. Not fast paced, but not too slow paced either. A perfectly balanced taste of intrigue and excitement! The grammar is impeccable! But I’d suggest you break up your paragraphs and make them a bit shorter to make the sentences easier on the eyes. But asides that, you did amazing! Good job!
I just want to say that I absolutely adore your title as well as your book cover! It really caught my eye and made a good impression. It made me want to read your story. I also love how you use deep words and described the scenarios in your story, it's enough for me to imagine but not too much to be a bore. Over all, I like your story! Keep up the good work!
Great start author! I like the vibe of this world, and the church being suspicious while they search for these children sparks my curiosity. Writing style is mature and definitely leaves you wanting to read more
The chapters were so well written! I was really immersed in it. The way you write is very special. There wasn't any long description of the world and I clearly liked it. The plot also seems promising too.
The synopsis is a little bit common from all the same genre I've read, but the way you portray the characters and write the plot is amazing. Keep up the good work!
This is a fantastic novel with a captivating plot and nice world-building. The author's use of descriptive language is one to behold, making it easy to vividly imagine each scene as you read through. A must-read for lovers of medieval fantasy. Keep up the good work!
That was really good i hope you continue this amazing work i just finished at chapter 10 its really well written.
Fantasy with post-apocalyptic elements. The writing quality is excellent, scenes are described with just enough words to allow you to clearly picture them but not so much that it feels padded or long-winded. Paragraphs tend to be on the chunkier side but are simple enough to be read without any difficulty. The setting is quickly introduced, and though there is a somewhat large chunk of exposition in the 3rd chapter it is not overwhelming and answers questions that naturally pop up in the readers head in the earlier chapters. Characters don't yet feel very distinct in tone as of chapter 5, but there's been so much emphasis on fleshing out the world that I don't think it could have fit. Overall, excellent read. Good job by the author!
I can tell just from the first chapter that the plot is well put together and the descriptions are spot on.It is really catchy !I felt like I was next to Alex at some point . You have talent !
It is very well-written and the characters are portrayed very well. I personally see story progressing really well and the improvement with each and every chapter! Recommended for everyone <3
Alright everybody, welcome to one of the best stories on Webnovel. This novel is amazing, the way that the author perfectly constructs a world he doesn't over-explain, creating Alex, a 12-year-old boy who is a REALISTIC child, one with fears and one with talents, it's all perfectly constructed. I'm sure you're reading these reviews to find out if this is the right novel for you. Trust me, if you're looking for quality, you found it. I have five books in my collections, and this is now one of them. Excellent job.
Very great novel I really enjoyed your novel and wish that you could write more. Also do well to include more interesting characters in order to lighten your novel. Anyways its a really great project.
It is written well but spacing around the words and dialogues should be more accurately defined so that it will be easier to read overall a great work .The story is going pretty good and character development is coming great as well.
The book is really good. It's unique although it might have similar premise as other with the 4 major element, fire, air, water, and earth. The writing is so good and the description for each character appearance are so detail. You could actually imagine how they might look like. I want to ask the author, how many chapter do you think your book would have as it mark as complete book? In my opinion, this book could get pass 700+ since there are a lot content and event that could be added into the story. It would even better if the world building of the story will also develop well. As for romance, I think I saw the book have romance tag. In this type of story, tbh I don't really enjoy much if the romance appear early. I haven't seen the romance yet. I just hope the mc will get the best girl. You know what I mean right, author.
It is a good story. The author's writing is good and very descriptive. The world he asks to embark on with him is a good one too. It is a slow-paced novel, that familiarises the readers with the surroundings of the story too well. Keep up the good work author.
I've read the latest chapter 21 and I'm honestly hooked. I like how you accurately express the emotions of each character and I can't wait to see how the tale will unfold. Keep up the great work.👍
A month and a few days after i first read this novel, i continue love this story and im always waiting for new chapters to come. so addicted
Excellent introduction to the world, characters and its concepts from the very beginning. Every chapter is well paced and doesn't waste in taking your attention with how well written. Would definitely recommend to anyone looking for a good fantasy medieval story.
Just finished reading chapter 18 of this book, and I have to say, it's been a fantastic read so far! At first, I was a bit hesitant, but the story really hooked me in by chapter 6. From there on, the story and the writing just kept getting better and better. I'm really impressed with how the author has crafted the characters and the world they inhabit. Overall, I'm thoroughly enjoying this book and can't wait to see what happens next!
The author did a very good job in making the story seem interesting and portrayed well. The story is good and intriguing. overall I liked the novel and keep up the good work author
This story is intriguing, with a unique take on the classic medieval fantasy genre. The concept of monstrous creatures called "teras" attacking humanity is a great hook, and the introduction of four heroes with elemental powers adds an exciting layer to the story. The focus on Alex, the heir to the power of fire, as the protagonist is a good choice to ground the narrative and give readers a character to invest in. The idea of Alex going on a journey to uncover the truth behind the teras' appearance is a classic hero's journey, and the potential for character growth and development is high. Must read!
Good book! Just finished the third chapter and I love it. The way the author describes each scene is great.
Apologies for the shameless 5-star review, but I just had to express how much I loved this book. If you have any questions about the characters or plot, please feel free to ask! I'm happy to discuss.
Very interesting story. I love how the character in this story has a positive thinking. And also well described story. I highly recommend this novel to you guys because it has so many positive attitude in it. Good luck, Thor! 👍😊
Excellent writing structures and usage of grammar. Everything is very detailed, which is to my liking. Apart from stability of chapters published, everything is great. Keep up the good work!
Amazing storyline 🤩 Good grammar 👍 Pacing is on point 👌 Description is pretty short and still quite informative . Wonderful story author , your book is just wow and awesome please update more regularly!
A great work! Totally Impressed by the storyline. It really is gripping. Made me read every single chapter available. Please continue and keep up the good work Author San!
Elemental Tear is unique, showcasing a medieval fantasy-like world with mages, teras (brilliant creativity), and selected elemental-wielding heirs. The story follows the mc, Alex, who is discovered by the Church due to his fire abilities detected by the Orb. I'm usually not a fan of 3rd POV, but author delivered the narrative perfectly without repeating the same phrases etc. Keep up the good work!!
Good work Author! The plots seems interesting and the world background quickly grabs one's attention. I feel quite impressed by the way you described the world's situation. Best of Luck Author! Keep it up!
This novel is great. The story focus on Alex who inherited the fire element according to the prophecy of the Church. This is the usual "hero's journey" trope but I am liking it. The characters are also interesting and their world-building as well. I don't have anything else to say other than keep writing! ^_^
Tiết lộ Spoiler Wow. I must say, I was pleasantly surprised by this! From the first chapter, you did a great job of setting the tone of the plot and storyline. Not fast paced, but not too slow paced either. A perfectly balanced taste of intrigue and excitement! The grammar is impeccable! But I’d suggest you break up your paragraphs and make them a bit shorter to make the sentences easier on the eyes. But asides that, you did amazing! Good job!
I just want to say that I absolutely adore your title as well as your book cover! It really caught my eye and made a good impression. It made me want to read your story. I also love how you use deep words and described the scenarios in your story, it's enough for me to imagine but not too much to be a bore. Over all, I like your story! Keep up the good work!
Great start author! I like the vibe of this world, and the church being suspicious while they search for these children sparks my curiosity. Writing style is mature and definitely leaves you wanting to read more
The chapters were so well written! I was really immersed in it. The way you write is very special. There wasn't any long description of the world and I clearly liked it. The plot also seems promising too.
The synopsis is a little bit common from all the same genre I've read, but the way you portray the characters and write the plot is amazing. Keep up the good work!
This is a fantastic novel with a captivating plot and nice world-building. The author's use of descriptive language is one to behold, making it easy to vividly imagine each scene as you read through. A must-read for lovers of medieval fantasy. Keep up the good work!
That was really good i hope you continue this amazing work i just finished at chapter 10 its really well written.
Fantasy with post-apocalyptic elements. The writing quality is excellent, scenes are described with just enough words to allow you to clearly picture them but not so much that it feels padded or long-winded. Paragraphs tend to be on the chunkier side but are simple enough to be read without any difficulty. The setting is quickly introduced, and though there is a somewhat large chunk of exposition in the 3rd chapter it is not overwhelming and answers questions that naturally pop up in the readers head in the earlier chapters. Characters don't yet feel very distinct in tone as of chapter 5, but there's been so much emphasis on fleshing out the world that I don't think it could have fit. Overall, excellent read. Good job by the author!
I can tell just from the first chapter that the plot is well put together and the descriptions are spot on.It is really catchy !I felt like I was next to Alex at some point . You have talent !
It is very well-written and the characters are portrayed very well. I personally see story progressing really well and the improvement with each and every chapter! Recommended for everyone <3
Alright everybody, welcome to one of the best stories on Webnovel. This novel is amazing, the way that the author perfectly constructs a world he doesn't over-explain, creating Alex, a 12-year-old boy who is a REALISTIC child, one with fears and one with talents, it's all perfectly constructed. I'm sure you're reading these reviews to find out if this is the right novel for you. Trust me, if you're looking for quality, you found it. I have five books in my collections, and this is now one of them. Excellent job.
Very great novel I really enjoyed your novel and wish that you could write more. Also do well to include more interesting characters in order to lighten your novel. Anyways its a really great project.
It is written well but spacing around the words and dialogues should be more accurately defined so that it will be easier to read overall a great work .The story is going pretty good and character development is coming great as well.
The book is really good. It's unique although it might have similar premise as other with the 4 major element, fire, air, water, and earth. The writing is so good and the description for each character appearance are so detail. You could actually imagine how they might look like. I want to ask the author, how many chapter do you think your book would have as it mark as complete book? In my opinion, this book could get pass 700+ since there are a lot content and event that could be added into the story. It would even better if the world building of the story will also develop well. As for romance, I think I saw the book have romance tag. In this type of story, tbh I don't really enjoy much if the romance appear early. I haven't seen the romance yet. I just hope the mc will get the best girl. You know what I mean right, author.
It is a good story. The author's writing is good and very descriptive. The world he asks to embark on with him is a good one too. It is a slow-paced novel, that familiarises the readers with the surroundings of the story too well. Keep up the good work author.
I've read the latest chapter 21 and I'm honestly hooked. I like how you accurately express the emotions of each character and I can't wait to see how the tale will unfold. Keep up the great work.👍
A month and a few days after i first read this novel, i continue love this story and im always waiting for new chapters to come. so addicted
Excellent introduction to the world, characters and its concepts from the very beginning. Every chapter is well paced and doesn't waste in taking your attention with how well written. Would definitely recommend to anyone looking for a good fantasy medieval story.
Just finished reading chapter 18 of this book, and I have to say, it's been a fantastic read so far! At first, I was a bit hesitant, but the story really hooked me in by chapter 6. From there on, the story and the writing just kept getting better and better. I'm really impressed with how the author has crafted the characters and the world they inhabit. Overall, I'm thoroughly enjoying this book and can't wait to see what happens next!
The author did a very good job in making the story seem interesting and portrayed well. The story is good and intriguing. overall I liked the novel and keep up the good work author
This story is intriguing, with a unique take on the classic medieval fantasy genre. The concept of monstrous creatures called "teras" attacking humanity is a great hook, and the introduction of four heroes with elemental powers adds an exciting layer to the story. The focus on Alex, the heir to the power of fire, as the protagonist is a good choice to ground the narrative and give readers a character to invest in. The idea of Alex going on a journey to uncover the truth behind the teras' appearance is a classic hero's journey, and the potential for character growth and development is high. Must read!
Good book! Just finished the third chapter and I love it. The way the author describes each scene is great.
Apologies for the shameless 5-star review, but I just had to express how much I loved this book. If you have any questions about the characters or plot, please feel free to ask! I'm happy to discuss.