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please release more chapters quickly. I love this book so please just release one more chapter and go on and on
Dear author, you just won gold prize in WSA 2023 with this novel. please dont't drop this novel. it's hard to see a promising author like you give up like this. Hope you continue writing this novel. Good luck.
Hello! im getting impatient. What chapter he gonna reveal that he’s mage? Did he reveal in academy that hes mage or did he hide? Please spoil! So i can continue read this
will you continue this novel I've been waiting fairly patiently for 3 months
Hello, I am a fellow writer and author! Can I please know what app you used for the making of your cover! I would be grateful if you could assist me!
So much potential ruined by the lack of effort. Author clearly has more important things to do than updating this novel. Wouldn't recommend until author starts writing full time. The pacing of the novel is too sporadic compared to the inconsistent uploads. You shouldn't even be able to lock chapters when u don't update enough. What's the point in buying purchase privilege if the Novel doesn't get updated before it runs out!????
A very interesting tale, with some great characters, a complex world and plenty of space to develop everything further. Great storytelling, despite a few of the usual plot holes and illogic links, which nevertheless do not impede the story overmuch. Highly recommended!
excellent read very much enjoy the characters and plot and the world the author is creating
Was great in the beginning but now with chapters updating so slowly I think I will just drop it plus the author started to make me hate the blood element in somewhere from chapter 190 to 210 or 220 by stretching out the arc.
I've been reading this one for a little bit and have heavily enjoyed the story. I'd love to read more as the author can put more out.
hey are you busy Arthur that's why you slow down the updates if you are just update us I really love your chapters and character development with Leo and his friends in the future when he gets older I hope there's more Romance but my major concern is your health I just hope everything's going well please update us
this was the most freaking amazing novel I have ever read , this was totally the type i was searching for , less romance more action, world building is strong, i am waiting for MC to get his revenge and travel around the world, at some point i also get the feeling of some Chinese novel but that was ok....And please author, don't stop it and also don't add unnecessary romance .... i was kinda surprised i thought the heroine would be a mage but all the side characters were aura worrier , i was interested in mage as supporting characters
unfortunate this is another story that's not really about the title. Its's not a story about magic but a dime a dozen fighting novels. There's even a spirit to help just like a common copy cat.
A shockingly good light read. I was surprised at how much I enjoy the power system and look forward to seeing how the character progresses. It's a shame it updates so slowly.
I really like this book and I sincerely hope you would continue this work and take it to the next level. Please do not stop writing because this story has the potential to become one of the greatest novels in this platform. I hope u release a new chapter everyday.
U should start this novel with the mindset that the MC is a naive Marvel hero kinda guy, u know with great power comes.... bla bla bla. Yup, so it can get on the nerves of people who aren't really fans of goody two shoes, it doesn't really mean MC let's his enemies live but he certainly makes some unnecessary enemies. Ofcourse there is more to his personality but I will leave it for now except just think of him as a normal 14 yrs old and u can justify most of his actions and forget he grew up in slums coz I u remember that u would realise just how unrealistic some scenarios are. World building is kinda all over the place according to me, it ain't good. In one phase of the novels that we see about slave first of all MC has no idea what's happening even when he was standing on the stage to be sold, certainly makes u question if he really grew up in slums after all if u are good looking and without a gaurdian in slums then u are a target of traffickers and somehow slave trade is illegal, one of the most brainless story setting I have seen I must say. I just want to ask everyone else, In a Noble dominant country who treat commoners as less than dirt is there even a possibility for slave trade to be illegal ???? Makes no sense. I have quite a few more examples for these ridiculous settings and character traits but I am exhausted typing on the phone so........... It's all folks.
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I love the story itself, love the characters my only complaint is we don’ need to hear what rank and circle or star that Leo or other characters are at every other paragraph. Like we get that 2 sentences ago he was a 3 circle mage going to do battle with a creature but mid fight you talk about how he Is a 3rd circle mage and it will be so hard for him. You can be to redundant in his development. Other than that I love the world you have made and the characters.
Tried to stick this one out, but it is pretty bad when it comes to character design/development and providing a well thought out, planned world, economy and power system. The sheer amount of inconsistencies and annoying oversights is staggering. MC is a orphan since he can remember and has a younger sister type to support who is in the same boat.. neither have anyone else to look out for them or teach them what's needed but from age 5 they have managed to survive, learned a relatively high standard of speech/manners as well as the ability to read 🙄 I could rant for a while about all the other idiotic antics like MC throwing money around like a young spoiled Noble or the fact he cares not about making money and is insanely wasteful BUT if you decide to read this you will quickly see for yourself I guess 🤷🏻♂️ Do yourself a favour and skip this. I can only hope the author reads through the comments left throughout the novel so far and makes notes of the readers pain points and think about how he can fix this
I really like how Leo portrayed as strong and not too overpowered like that he's have to build a strength it's not instant considering his talent he has good growth they haven't seen much of the female characters yet I hope they are bigger significance in the story I'm on chapter 190 I really enjoy it so far thank you for a great story author
In the first 50 chapters, the grammar leaves a lot to be desired, even if it's not your mother tongue it shows that you used a poor quality translator. From 50 things improve little by little. I am grateful that it is not the typical novel where you spend hundreds of chapters explaining useless things. Although sometimes it would be nice to have a little more extra information on some characters. There are too many unexplained plot holes but I hope they will be filled in the future. If I see that the novel improves in the future I will change the stars.
I made it through the free chapters, but it definitely was not captivating enough to warrant me paying to read more.The story was alright, though it felt overly rushed. Not sure how 2 13 yr old kids get stronger than 20 yr olds without any official training or external resources.The chapters also seem overly small and end too quickly.So as always, if you like it, then support it. I don't, so I won't.
Another generic progression-fantasy novel. It's okay, but nothing amazing or unique. If you're new to the genre, then by all means, give it a try. It's interesting enough, easy to read, and more like a slice-of-life than anything else. In fact, I'd go so far as to say that this novel should be classified as a Slice-of-Life. However, for those who have read plenty of magic-focused progression-fantasy stories, this is as basic as it comes. The MC has a unique cultivation system that sets him apart from the rest. He quickly becomes one of the strongest people in the "starter city" and moves on to the next one. I think there's an academy arc in there, a burdensome "younger sister", an auction where he obtains an op item, brain-dead villains, and more. The only difference between this one, and some of the better, more popular versions of it, is that the MC in this story is incredibly bland. No personality, no uniqueness, nothing. He just hunts down beasts and trains. I would've really liked to have seen more dialogue, more inner monologues, more... life. All in all, it's about average. Nothing special, but not bad. Comprehensive Review: Writing Quality (3/5): The grammar is fine, but like I said before, it's incredibly lifeless. There's no tension. No suspense. No emotion. No immersion. Most of the chapters are filled with the Author telling us what's happening instead of actually showing it. That's fine and all, considering he's probably a new author, but it really does kill the quality. Emotional scenes are left tasteless, but even when the Author does try to show, it feels forced. Telling and not showing is fine in Webnovels since if you had to "show" everything, the entire novel would take thousands of chapters. But, during action scenes, it's incredibly boring. I would like to actually experience those scenes with the MC. Update Stability (5/5): So far, the Author's been consistent, which is a huge plus. Story Development (2/5): If there is a plot, I can't find it. It's mostly just filled with the MC grinding, training, improving his cultivation, and reacting to certain events. Like I said, if this was a Slice-of-Life novel, I wouldn't criticize this part, but the author didn't tag it as such, nor does he portray the novel in that manner. Even then, unless it's about hunting (both humans and beasts) or cultivating, he's not very proactive. He just sort of floats along, doing whatever the author wants him to do. I think having some sort of direction would've really helped this novel, especially in the early stages. It takes so long (40+ chapters) to actually get moving, and even then, it's just more grinding, just in a different area. Other than that, things just kind of... happen. MC finds inheritance. MC trains. MC hunts. MC gets stronger. MC gets rich. MC buys stuff. MC helps younger sister. MC gets lucky. MC gets lucky. MC makes more money. MC gets stronger. MC leaves. There's no real depth to anything. His Cultivation Technique isn't all that unique. In fact, the world's whole cultivation system is incredibly simple. Mana Circles and Aura Circles (1-9). Like I said, it's a very easy read. If that's what you're looking for, then by all means, try it out. But for those of you wanting something more, you should probably look elsewhere. Character Design (2/5): If you couldn't tell by now, I'm not a fan of the MC. Rather, I'm not a fan of any character except for Trevor, but he's just a supporting character, and not much was known about him. However, at the same time, I think it's more that I'm not a fan of how the Author portrays the characters rather than the characters themselves. With how bland everything is, it's really hard to get a read on the character's personality, values, and interests. He basically does nothing other than train, train, train. I would really like to see more character interactions and some character development. It doesn't have to be anything drastic, but I would at least like to see the MC growing or at least, changing. World Background (3/5): Not too much is known about the world. I assume this might be further explored during the Academy Arc or somewhere further down the line, but I don't know. So, for now, I'll give it 3 stars, considering the MC isn't reincarnated/transmigrated or any of that stuff. A character inside their own world is a nice touch. Random Comment: THE ECONOMY! Oh my god! The economy in this story makes no sense! Money just seems to flow into the MC's pockets, but all the rest of these commoners out here are just poor blokes even though they're working hard too?! They only hunt like once a month? And have to do it in groups? What? Do they really get that injured every time?! Nonsense! Even if he is stronger than other 1st Circle people with his cultivation technique, it shouldn't be by that much. Not to mention, the prices of items make no sense. I think it said that 1 Star Coin (currency) could buy a meal. Let's say a loaf of bread, in real life, costs $2 (which is on the low end), that would mean 1 Star Coin is worth ~$4 at the worst. Yet, he's able to rake in hundreds of thousands, even millions, each month while only having strength equivalent to a 1st and 2nd Circle mage!? Huh? The man is even richer than the nobles! To top it off, all he has to do to earn that is travel like 5 minutes to the nearest forest, hunt a few beasts every day, and sell them. Is everybody in this world just useless? Where is all this money coming from, especially in a smaller town? He should've crashed the economy by now! Normally, I wouldn't even pay attention to this, as it doesn't matter, but it feels like the Author just arbitrarily assigns numbers to things without much thought. Money is brought up quite a bit, so this issue is very noticeable. I would've liked for there to be at least a little bit of thought behind the currency. Doesn't have to be much. Just a little outline in your notes would do. Overall: 3/5
please release more chapters quickly. I love this book so please just release one more chapter and go on and on
Dear author, you just won gold prize in WSA 2023 with this novel. please dont't drop this novel. it's hard to see a promising author like you give up like this. Hope you continue writing this novel. Good luck.
Hello! im getting impatient. What chapter he gonna reveal that he’s mage? Did he reveal in academy that hes mage or did he hide? Please spoil! So i can continue read this
will you continue this novel I've been waiting fairly patiently for 3 months
Hello, I am a fellow writer and author! Can I please know what app you used for the making of your cover! I would be grateful if you could assist me!
So much potential ruined by the lack of effort. Author clearly has more important things to do than updating this novel. Wouldn't recommend until author starts writing full time. The pacing of the novel is too sporadic compared to the inconsistent uploads. You shouldn't even be able to lock chapters when u don't update enough. What's the point in buying purchase privilege if the Novel doesn't get updated before it runs out!????
A very interesting tale, with some great characters, a complex world and plenty of space to develop everything further. Great storytelling, despite a few of the usual plot holes and illogic links, which nevertheless do not impede the story overmuch. Highly recommended!
excellent read very much enjoy the characters and plot and the world the author is creating
Was great in the beginning but now with chapters updating so slowly I think I will just drop it plus the author started to make me hate the blood element in somewhere from chapter 190 to 210 or 220 by stretching out the arc.
I've been reading this one for a little bit and have heavily enjoyed the story. I'd love to read more as the author can put more out.
hey are you busy Arthur that's why you slow down the updates if you are just update us I really love your chapters and character development with Leo and his friends in the future when he gets older I hope there's more Romance but my major concern is your health I just hope everything's going well please update us
this was the most freaking amazing novel I have ever read , this was totally the type i was searching for , less romance more action, world building is strong, i am waiting for MC to get his revenge and travel around the world, at some point i also get the feeling of some Chinese novel but that was ok....And please author, don't stop it and also don't add unnecessary romance .... i was kinda surprised i thought the heroine would be a mage but all the side characters were aura worrier , i was interested in mage as supporting characters
unfortunate this is another story that's not really about the title. Its's not a story about magic but a dime a dozen fighting novels. There's even a spirit to help just like a common copy cat.
A shockingly good light read. I was surprised at how much I enjoy the power system and look forward to seeing how the character progresses. It's a shame it updates so slowly.
I really like this book and I sincerely hope you would continue this work and take it to the next level. Please do not stop writing because this story has the potential to become one of the greatest novels in this platform. I hope u release a new chapter everyday.
U should start this novel with the mindset that the MC is a naive Marvel hero kinda guy, u know with great power comes.... bla bla bla. Yup, so it can get on the nerves of people who aren't really fans of goody two shoes, it doesn't really mean MC let's his enemies live but he certainly makes some unnecessary enemies. Ofcourse there is more to his personality but I will leave it for now except just think of him as a normal 14 yrs old and u can justify most of his actions and forget he grew up in slums coz I u remember that u would realise just how unrealistic some scenarios are. World building is kinda all over the place according to me, it ain't good. In one phase of the novels that we see about slave first of all MC has no idea what's happening even when he was standing on the stage to be sold, certainly makes u question if he really grew up in slums after all if u are good looking and without a gaurdian in slums then u are a target of traffickers and somehow slave trade is illegal, one of the most brainless story setting I have seen I must say. I just want to ask everyone else, In a Noble dominant country who treat commoners as less than dirt is there even a possibility for slave trade to be illegal ???? Makes no sense. I have quite a few more examples for these ridiculous settings and character traits but I am exhausted typing on the phone so........... It's all folks.
Tiết lộ Spoiler I love the story itself, love the characters my only complaint is we don’ need to hear what rank and circle or star that Leo or other characters are at every other paragraph. Like we get that 2 sentences ago he was a 3 circle mage going to do battle with a creature but mid fight you talk about how he Is a 3rd circle mage and it will be so hard for him. You can be to redundant in his development. Other than that I love the world you have made and the characters.
Tried to stick this one out, but it is pretty bad when it comes to character design/development and providing a well thought out, planned world, economy and power system. The sheer amount of inconsistencies and annoying oversights is staggering. MC is a orphan since he can remember and has a younger sister type to support who is in the same boat.. neither have anyone else to look out for them or teach them what's needed but from age 5 they have managed to survive, learned a relatively high standard of speech/manners as well as the ability to read 🙄 I could rant for a while about all the other idiotic antics like MC throwing money around like a young spoiled Noble or the fact he cares not about making money and is insanely wasteful BUT if you decide to read this you will quickly see for yourself I guess 🤷🏻♂️ Do yourself a favour and skip this. I can only hope the author reads through the comments left throughout the novel so far and makes notes of the readers pain points and think about how he can fix this
I really like how Leo portrayed as strong and not too overpowered like that he's have to build a strength it's not instant considering his talent he has good growth they haven't seen much of the female characters yet I hope they are bigger significance in the story I'm on chapter 190 I really enjoy it so far thank you for a great story author
In the first 50 chapters, the grammar leaves a lot to be desired, even if it's not your mother tongue it shows that you used a poor quality translator. From 50 things improve little by little. I am grateful that it is not the typical novel where you spend hundreds of chapters explaining useless things. Although sometimes it would be nice to have a little more extra information on some characters. There are too many unexplained plot holes but I hope they will be filled in the future. If I see that the novel improves in the future I will change the stars.
I made it through the free chapters, but it definitely was not captivating enough to warrant me paying to read more.The story was alright, though it felt overly rushed. Not sure how 2 13 yr old kids get stronger than 20 yr olds without any official training or external resources.The chapters also seem overly small and end too quickly.So as always, if you like it, then support it. I don't, so I won't.
Another generic progression-fantasy novel. It's okay, but nothing amazing or unique. If you're new to the genre, then by all means, give it a try. It's interesting enough, easy to read, and more like a slice-of-life than anything else. In fact, I'd go so far as to say that this novel should be classified as a Slice-of-Life. However, for those who have read plenty of magic-focused progression-fantasy stories, this is as basic as it comes. The MC has a unique cultivation system that sets him apart from the rest. He quickly becomes one of the strongest people in the "starter city" and moves on to the next one. I think there's an academy arc in there, a burdensome "younger sister", an auction where he obtains an op item, brain-dead villains, and more. The only difference between this one, and some of the better, more popular versions of it, is that the MC in this story is incredibly bland. No personality, no uniqueness, nothing. He just hunts down beasts and trains. I would've really liked to have seen more dialogue, more inner monologues, more... life. All in all, it's about average. Nothing special, but not bad. Comprehensive Review: Writing Quality (3/5): The grammar is fine, but like I said before, it's incredibly lifeless. There's no tension. No suspense. No emotion. No immersion. Most of the chapters are filled with the Author telling us what's happening instead of actually showing it. That's fine and all, considering he's probably a new author, but it really does kill the quality. Emotional scenes are left tasteless, but even when the Author does try to show, it feels forced. Telling and not showing is fine in Webnovels since if you had to "show" everything, the entire novel would take thousands of chapters. But, during action scenes, it's incredibly boring. I would like to actually experience those scenes with the MC. Update Stability (5/5): So far, the Author's been consistent, which is a huge plus. Story Development (2/5): If there is a plot, I can't find it. It's mostly just filled with the MC grinding, training, improving his cultivation, and reacting to certain events. Like I said, if this was a Slice-of-Life novel, I wouldn't criticize this part, but the author didn't tag it as such, nor does he portray the novel in that manner. Even then, unless it's about hunting (both humans and beasts) or cultivating, he's not very proactive. He just sort of floats along, doing whatever the author wants him to do. I think having some sort of direction would've really helped this novel, especially in the early stages. It takes so long (40+ chapters) to actually get moving, and even then, it's just more grinding, just in a different area. Other than that, things just kind of... happen. MC finds inheritance. MC trains. MC hunts. MC gets stronger. MC gets rich. MC buys stuff. MC helps younger sister. MC gets lucky. MC gets lucky. MC makes more money. MC gets stronger. MC leaves. There's no real depth to anything. His Cultivation Technique isn't all that unique. In fact, the world's whole cultivation system is incredibly simple. Mana Circles and Aura Circles (1-9). Like I said, it's a very easy read. If that's what you're looking for, then by all means, try it out. But for those of you wanting something more, you should probably look elsewhere. Character Design (2/5): If you couldn't tell by now, I'm not a fan of the MC. Rather, I'm not a fan of any character except for Trevor, but he's just a supporting character, and not much was known about him. However, at the same time, I think it's more that I'm not a fan of how the Author portrays the characters rather than the characters themselves. With how bland everything is, it's really hard to get a read on the character's personality, values, and interests. He basically does nothing other than train, train, train. I would really like to see more character interactions and some character development. It doesn't have to be anything drastic, but I would at least like to see the MC growing or at least, changing. World Background (3/5): Not too much is known about the world. I assume this might be further explored during the Academy Arc or somewhere further down the line, but I don't know. So, for now, I'll give it 3 stars, considering the MC isn't reincarnated/transmigrated or any of that stuff. A character inside their own world is a nice touch. Random Comment: THE ECONOMY! Oh my god! The economy in this story makes no sense! Money just seems to flow into the MC's pockets, but all the rest of these commoners out here are just poor blokes even though they're working hard too?! They only hunt like once a month? And have to do it in groups? What? Do they really get that injured every time?! Nonsense! Even if he is stronger than other 1st Circle people with his cultivation technique, it shouldn't be by that much. Not to mention, the prices of items make no sense. I think it said that 1 Star Coin (currency) could buy a meal. Let's say a loaf of bread, in real life, costs $2 (which is on the low end), that would mean 1 Star Coin is worth ~$4 at the worst. Yet, he's able to rake in hundreds of thousands, even millions, each month while only having strength equivalent to a 1st and 2nd Circle mage!? Huh? The man is even richer than the nobles! To top it off, all he has to do to earn that is travel like 5 minutes to the nearest forest, hunt a few beasts every day, and sell them. Is everybody in this world just useless? Where is all this money coming from, especially in a smaller town? He should've crashed the economy by now! Normally, I wouldn't even pay attention to this, as it doesn't matter, but it feels like the Author just arbitrarily assigns numbers to things without much thought. Money is brought up quite a bit, so this issue is very noticeable. I would've liked for there to be at least a little bit of thought behind the currency. Doesn't have to be much. Just a little outline in your notes would do. Overall: 3/5
best part is that it is not dropped and completed without delay