A Legacy Continued

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Sudoku

Author here, giving a shameless 5 star review after chapter 61. Il also take this opportunity to explain some thoughts below. So I kinda started this story on a whim. I have not written anything since college, and even that was more for a newspaper, so needless to say, this is my first real attempt at any real storytelling. And you can kinda tell in the earlier chapters if I’m honest. Quality has improved and we’re constantly over 2k word chapters now. Also, I’m not trying to hype anything up, but I got some good storylines planned out that I’m confident nobody should be able to guess, even having played the games and watched/read all the HP media. I will admit though, that my story is gonna be very long. You might’ve been able to tell from my prophecy, but I got a few OCs to introduce still ahaha. We’re at 132k words/61 chapters, and I have over 300 chapters planned (at least lol). We’ve finished reintroducing a lot of the main HP characters at this point (chapter 61) also developing and introducing their relationships with our MC. He is basically done catching up with the current situation. So canon changes are starting to occur. And I don’t want to spoil too much, but I will say that if my plans work out properly, this will be a completely different Harry Potter AU by the time I’m through with it. Anyways, even though it’s a bit long, I hope you give this story a chance and read up to the end of the first intro volume. It gets better (in my humble opinion) and I promise, it’ll keep getting better [img=recommend]

LV 14

Jasonenrick

While there are few Hogwarts Legacy Ff out there at the moment I can already tell that if the Author keeps on writing, this could be one of the best and not only with Hogwarts Legacy but HP as a whole. I love the way you have written the story and made it possible for in-game things to exist in the game with the Spells having colors ( Yellow, purple, etc )and such, and probably the only thing I don't like is him being so good-natured, but on the other hand, the Gamr kinda forces you to be kind either way. I played through every single House in the game and now nearly everything there is to it and I am very much enjoying this so far. I honestly hope he learned the Unforgivibles and uses them at some point...not like Voldemort spamming AK but using them nonetheless. Well, and How you "jumped" forward 100 years makes so much sense. Why ancient Magic users only get to Hogwarts at the age of 15.....the Core...the fricking Core ;)

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Jok3r

great idea, can't wait to read more of this story. The aruther has a good way to blend the OG story of harry potter and hogwarts legacy.

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Jollybee

Welp im droping this novel. 0 ZERO ORIGINALITY IT EITHER FOLLOWS THE GAME OR THE MOVIES. SOOOOOOO BOREING. !!!! End of the day the beginning was an awesome thought of the hogwarts legacy game character gets frozen in time till the 4th year of harry potter. Problems occur here with it followed the game to a T brought up many characters which is cool till you realize it doesn't matter, its 100 years later most are dead. So worthless plot that gets added in every other ch as a mc dream. Mc has zero self control hes OP however not even close its showed hes very weak when compared to other wizards, now mc only had 1 year of training. But he acctually had all his life since he grew up in a pureblood house the bloodline of gengis kahn acctually runs through him. I was thinking sweet harem or at least one romance would be nice, nope none so far. Hermione is already attached to ronniekins bleh. Mc swore a bond with the weasleys for telling him litteraly one known fact about the Wizarding world. Author explained it with oh mc just ate 100 years worth of ancient magic so hes messed up he will fix it. Next ch mc looks into it and apperently fixxed it with a snap. A horrible novel for originality, it straight up follows the books, movies, and games word for word. Id skip this i wasted 1 day of my life on this dont waste yours. Writing quality was amazing tho.

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Giga_Weeb

Only wish the MC took the 'evil/mean' dialogue options.

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Lucifer951

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Footballhero_22

Absolutely loving the story! The concept is really interesting and unique! I cannot wait for more

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Gaming_MD

The fanfic itself have a lot of potential but unfortunately the story is tailed badly no background without finishing scenes skipping a lot and leave a backlash of the character development standed till chapter 23 will drop it! Have a nice day all hoo read it!!!!!!

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OP_reader

I finished the game 100% a month ago, and this idea came to me. I tried to write something but being denied in writing I gave up. This fanfiction was exactly what I was looking for, thanks author

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Blue_or_Seek_2300

plz make a patron so I can read more thinks

LV 14

DaoOfCulture

I am really enjoying this FF. It explores the story line of the HP world and smoothly conveys his(the author's) ideas. The grammar is good, story development is intriguing, and the author seems to keep his update rate stable. If I have any extra comments, it would be to skip the synopsis chapter. Personally, it just made me wonder why it was even there, and the repetition of "the protagonist" made me want to burn my eyes out. Basically, just don't read the synopsis chapter and go to the prologue. Besides that, wonderful FF and I look forward to more chaps

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Kyen_Syr

I can't wait to see how this story blends together both Hogwarts Legacy content and the OG timeline. Maybe voldyshorts gets whammed with ancient magic spells?

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LifelessMan

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Jaxon_Jace

Kinda feels generic as it either follows the game or mainly the book around 80 %. The start was good, but you just had to do that. Dropping it. Maybe come up with something of your own. And yeah, I read other reviews. But I ain't gonna waste my time reading 50 chs just to get the good part. Anyway. This is just my opinion. I don't care or want what others think.

LV 5

StromLantern

This story's awesome, grammar and spelling is on point, and not too much dilly-dallying on the storytelling but still hitting good marks. Kudos to you Author for a great work.

LV 4

_2567

Please keep updating consistently. This is the first good Hogwarts Legacy fanfiction I have found and I will literally die if you stop updating!

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nunya_business_3493

Did he just meet Hermione? He probably found himself a fellow bibliofile at the very least, Ravenclaw represent! I imagine he's gonna need to speak to the Keepers or someone about random emotional outbursts he's having due to Isadoras "research"...probably need better occulmency shields at the very least.

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joshua_arnold

great job one of the best Hogwarts legacy fanfic I've read :) .................................................................... ............

I really love this i truly find this to be the best hogwarts legacy fanfic so far i hope that you continue writing it