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Good Story! Please Continue!.................................................................................................................
I read a similar story on fanfiction it was really great I hope you'll be able to continue like this and even maybe get inspired for your story👍💯
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................................................................................................Your a spotter Harry. the boy who squatted.
The writing quality got a lot better in the last chapter (chapter 4), before I wouldn't even give a 2. As for the updating stabillity it is pretty slow, I have to read the previous chapter to even remember what happened. In relation to story development, character design and world backround, for the small number of chapters it was, it is quite good.
The author should rewrite the first chapter as it's barely readable, but overall it's pretty good.
how about doing a story without that ability that you put into every single story you do
Before everyone thinks I'm delaying in publications, it's quite simple. I work and study. And I still have time to write several stories at the same time. That's why I make videos for 3 YouTube channels. So that's why I don't really have time. I hope that after Ch2, in which I started, I used ChatGpt to correct my spelling errors.
Good Story! Please Continue!.................................................................................................................
I read a similar story on fanfiction it was really great I hope you'll be able to continue like this and even maybe get inspired for your story👍💯
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................................................................................................Your a spotter Harry. the boy who squatted.
The writing quality got a lot better in the last chapter (chapter 4), before I wouldn't even give a 2. As for the updating stabillity it is pretty slow, I have to read the previous chapter to even remember what happened. In relation to story development, character design and world backround, for the small number of chapters it was, it is quite good.
The author should rewrite the first chapter as it's barely readable, but overall it's pretty good.
how about doing a story without that ability that you put into every single story you do
Before everyone thinks I'm delaying in publications, it's quite simple. I work and study. And I still have time to write several stories at the same time. That's why I make videos for 3 YouTube channels. So that's why I don't really have time. I hope that after Ch2, in which I started, I used ChatGpt to correct my spelling errors.