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GREAT
LV 13 Badge

Ok, it's been a few days since I started uploading this so I felt it's time to write a review. First, this is my 4th exclusive book on webnovel so I have some experience writing. Before writing the real review, just one tip, read the prologue! Lol, it's important. What to expect: 1. A captivating VR game and an entirely new and fantastical take to football. 2. Characters with personalities. 3. An MC motivated and driven to achieve his goal. 4. Exciting football scenes. The grammar quality is ok, story progression I think is balanced, and the story itself, it's coming right from the passion locked in my brain lol. Anyways, I hope you pick it up, you won't regret it, happy reading.

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1yr
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8634
LV 3 Badge

I miss where you can attack players in early games. Later, they play like real football it is reality, or it is virtual? I don't like it later play

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1mth
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Tranmaxx_Agency

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9mth
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Bob_Uchiha_XD

The story of a footballer who reincarnates in the future, in which humans coexist with aliens. After signing peace between the 5 species, including humanity, a company created a virtual reality game to celebrate peace. The protagonist, who is a former soccer player, uses virtual reality to play soccer, interact with other individuals and even do romance virtually. I don't see the point of reading a novel like that.

1yr
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Merizzz

As someone who enjoys reading sports novels, this IS my cup of tea!

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1yr
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David_Adetola

I don’t usually leave reviews but I had to for this book this has to be one of the best sport novels I have read in a long long time everthing about it is just brilliant love it keep up the good work author love ur book

1yr
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Loki54

No e leído la historia todavía pero después de leer la sinopsis me recuerda al anime Inazuma eleven Go Galaxy supernova así que espero que sea buena

1yr
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happyhappyhappy

love me a good sports novel. very detailed plays, and love the incorporation of the fighting. maybe add more football elements, but overall still good.

1yr
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Aeternabilis

So the story of you like football is awful. It’s not football. It’s more like a fighting novel with football added as an afterthought. I mean you can atk other players and kill them… I went into this with the mindset from the description that it would be something like inazuma eleven. Where they have special shots, dribbles etc I though this would be so cool, however I was taken aback by how it’s essentialy who can kill the other team with a football. I think this is why I’m so turned off by the story, my exepectations are fcked and yeah. Some may like it but if you have the same thoughts as me going into this then you won’t like it. Good luck to the author but yeah peace out ✌🏼

1yr
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Chico_normal

Messi is the G.O.A.T ... . . . . . . . . . . .... . . . . . . . . . . .... . . . . . . . . . . .

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1yr
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Brent_Morales

i haven't even discovered this masterpiece since it was released after reading it was fun Exciting I hope to have more chapters Hehe

1yr
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DerangedNDepressed

Best football fanfic i have ever read.(⁠ ⁠╹⁠▽⁠╹⁠ ⁠)

1yr
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Gou_Elv

I had a lot of no expectation for this book as the trope was too common and the system trope just makes the mc too op but i gotta say this definitely aint one of them. The system is just there to give mc his old skills to improve and no overly powerups The world building is really great and the characters are alive The writing quality of the matches is just fantastic.I can almost make a simulation of them moving and thats what really pump me while reading Its definitely a great book

1yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Tony_Radiant

Im starting to fall in love with sports genre especially football and this is just epic, it gives you a different sense of style but still the same football

1yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Ductor_Storage

Simply amazing wiriting,when I read the polt I didn't think I would enjoy it so much but the author has executed it amazingly well.

1yr
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RadicalAM

This a great story normal I don’t like vr type stories but this captivated me. Good work author-san

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1yr
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davonte_DE

From what I read it is an amazing story just like the others you created. I have to ask will you be making a story for the other professions like the musician profession because I think it will be a interesting story if you do.

1yr
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edgy
LV 14 Badge

perfection🤌 I love this so much... I was really skeptical at first but man this is so frickin good

1yr
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Benzidiya_Youssef

it's excellent √√√ [ waiting for the next chapter ]

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1yr
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Destiny_Diagboya

Author is pioneering a new road with this book, some of the elements are strange but I absolutely enjoy it, I just hope he writes more chapters

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1yr
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David_Onuosah

Not really a fan of novels, but I think this book worths every of my time, great ideas and i really want the writer to continue with this

1yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Ewoma_Peace

Great book, the novel idea is fresh and the execution is amazing so far. Definitely recommend

1yr
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MizuKen
LV 15 Badge

I’m sorry author but I got tired of reading this, I was looking for a football novel which this is but the combat kind of destroyed it for me. It’s probably I good novel for people who like combat but this isn’t for me.

1yr
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AStrAl_Soul

there should be more sport fanfics [img=update][img=update][img=update]

1yr
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OnlyGoodStuff_1

this novel is so good the characters the football games so perfectly written also on top of that this has a mixture of vr and football 1000 years into the fute I really recommend this novel if your a true football fan

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1yr
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some_writer

Have you read the fanfic of Inazuma Eleven ?

1yr
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GREAT
LV 13 Badge

Ok, it's been a few days since I started uploading this so I felt it's time to write a review. First, this is my 4th exclusive book on webnovel so I have some experience writing. Before writing the real review, just one tip, read the prologue! Lol, it's important. What to expect: 1. A captivating VR game and an entirely new and fantastical take to football. 2. Characters with personalities. 3. An MC motivated and driven to achieve his goal. 4. Exciting football scenes. The grammar quality is ok, story progression I think is balanced, and the story itself, it's coming right from the passion locked in my brain lol. Anyways, I hope you pick it up, you won't regret it, happy reading.

img
1yr
Xem 14 lời trả lời
8634
LV 3 Badge

I miss where you can attack players in early games. Later, they play like real football it is reality, or it is virtual? I don't like it later play

Tiết lộ Spoiler
1mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Tranmaxx_Agency

Experience the awe-inspiring tale penned by an exceptional author. Are you seeking a captivating trailer video that befits your remarkable book? Connect with me on FB at "TRANMAXX PRO" for more info

9mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Bob_Uchiha_XD

The story of a footballer who reincarnates in the future, in which humans coexist with aliens. After signing peace between the 5 species, including humanity, a company created a virtual reality game to celebrate peace. The protagonist, who is a former soccer player, uses virtual reality to play soccer, interact with other individuals and even do romance virtually. I don't see the point of reading a novel like that.

1yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Merizzz

As someone who enjoys reading sports novels, this IS my cup of tea!

img
1yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
David_Adetola

I don’t usually leave reviews but I had to for this book this has to be one of the best sport novels I have read in a long long time everthing about it is just brilliant love it keep up the good work author love ur book

1yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Loki54

No e leído la historia todavía pero después de leer la sinopsis me recuerda al anime Inazuma eleven Go Galaxy supernova así que espero que sea buena

1yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
happyhappyhappy

love me a good sports novel. very detailed plays, and love the incorporation of the fighting. maybe add more football elements, but overall still good.

1yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Aeternabilis

So the story of you like football is awful. It’s not football. It’s more like a fighting novel with football added as an afterthought. I mean you can atk other players and kill them… I went into this with the mindset from the description that it would be something like inazuma eleven. Where they have special shots, dribbles etc I though this would be so cool, however I was taken aback by how it’s essentialy who can kill the other team with a football. I think this is why I’m so turned off by the story, my exepectations are fcked and yeah. Some may like it but if you have the same thoughts as me going into this then you won’t like it. Good luck to the author but yeah peace out ✌🏼

1yr
Xem 2 lời trả lời
Chico_normal

Messi is the G.O.A.T ... . . . . . . . . . . .... . . . . . . . . . . .... . . . . . . . . . . .

img
1yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Brent_Morales

i haven't even discovered this masterpiece since it was released after reading it was fun Exciting I hope to have more chapters Hehe

1yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
DerangedNDepressed

Best football fanfic i have ever read.(⁠ ⁠╹⁠▽⁠╹⁠ ⁠)

1yr
Xem 5 lời trả lời
Gou_Elv

I had a lot of no expectation for this book as the trope was too common and the system trope just makes the mc too op but i gotta say this definitely aint one of them. The system is just there to give mc his old skills to improve and no overly powerups The world building is really great and the characters are alive The writing quality of the matches is just fantastic.I can almost make a simulation of them moving and thats what really pump me while reading Its definitely a great book

1yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Tony_Radiant

Im starting to fall in love with sports genre especially football and this is just epic, it gives you a different sense of style but still the same football

1yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Ductor_Storage

Simply amazing wiriting,when I read the polt I didn't think I would enjoy it so much but the author has executed it amazingly well.

1yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
RadicalAM

This a great story normal I don’t like vr type stories but this captivated me. Good work author-san

img
1yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
davonte_DE

From what I read it is an amazing story just like the others you created. I have to ask will you be making a story for the other professions like the musician profession because I think it will be a interesting story if you do.

1yr
Xem 3 lời trả lời
edgy
LV 14 Badge

perfection🤌 I love this so much... I was really skeptical at first but man this is so frickin good

1yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Benzidiya_Youssef

it's excellent √√√ [ waiting for the next chapter ]

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1yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Destiny_Diagboya

Author is pioneering a new road with this book, some of the elements are strange but I absolutely enjoy it, I just hope he writes more chapters

img
1yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
David_Onuosah

Not really a fan of novels, but I think this book worths every of my time, great ideas and i really want the writer to continue with this

1yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Ewoma_Peace

Great book, the novel idea is fresh and the execution is amazing so far. Definitely recommend

1yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
MizuKen
LV 15 Badge

I’m sorry author but I got tired of reading this, I was looking for a football novel which this is but the combat kind of destroyed it for me. It’s probably I good novel for people who like combat but this isn’t for me.

1yr
Xem 8 lời trả lời
AStrAl_Soul

there should be more sport fanfics [img=update][img=update][img=update]

1yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
OnlyGoodStuff_1

this novel is so good the characters the football games so perfectly written also on top of that this has a mixture of vr and football 1000 years into the fute I really recommend this novel if your a true football fan

img
1yr
Xem 2 lời trả lời
some_writer

Have you read the fanfic of Inazuma Eleven ?

1yr
Xem 3 lời trả lời