Naruto: Red Storm

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LaziestMan

hello everyone if you like fanfiction the go read douluo question system

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FringGustavo

This is pretty good so far im really just waiting for the story to progress and ill adjust my review according to that........................

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CruelReality

The premise and ideas are great but the narration and grammar makes this a difficult read. There is some sort of uncomfortable third person narration, where the author will occasionally info dump or expound on points like a narrator. On top of that, minor but consistent grammar mistakes and Inproper tenses makes this read very uncomfortably. 3.8/10, I cannot reccomend it and it is unfortunate because there are good ideas here.

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sh1sh0ff

Keep going on. It's good

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Jeet_Chattopadhyay

I really like the story and am very curious to see how the plot progresses .

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luiz_S

This is pretty good so far, can't wait to read more ;.....................................................................................................

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GrootT

Another author that is afraid of going against canon…

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rubberduck69

the relationships the character has with others are really heartwarming